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Michael Goff 939980

Joined February 2012
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    Michael Goff's Stories (9)

    • Rainbow Dash's Spike
      When Spike finally gets the courage to ask out Rarity, the unexpected happens. Afterwards, he has to try to find a way to pick up the pieces. At the same time, Rainbow Dash is there to help him out.

      25,936 words · 1,752 views · 152 likes · 13 dislikes
    • To Live is to Love
      It hasn't been long since the Gala, but Rainbow has a lot on her mind. With any luck, maybe she'll be able to get some advice.
      25,749 words · 633 views · 67 likes · 7 dislikes
    • I have every book in the series
      After reading the latest book, Rainbow Dash rushes off to find the author...
      1,297 words · 397 views · 14 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Inner Demons: To Rise Again
      Everything changed for Trixie after Ponyville. What will become of the showmare?
      39,988 words · 174 views · 13 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Elements of Forgiveness part 2: Magic
      15,451 words · 154 views · 5 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Elements of Foregiveness part 1: Honesty
      16,862 words · 137 views · 4 likes · 0 dislikes
    • A Life of Service
      2,288 words · 106 views · 4 likes · 0 dislikes
    • What is Real?
      27,304 words · 373 views · 12 likes · 4 dislikes
    • If only...
      2,850 words · 216 views · 6 likes · 2 dislikes

    It had been a long, weird, night. Twilight Sparkle had a dream about being turned down by Rainbow Dash. That didn't make any sense, she didn't love her cyan friend.

    Did she?

    That thought being pushed out of her mind, Twilight starts through her day. It seems as though there's something off about her, though.

    Yes... this is a pointless story. I just wrote it while i was tired. I wanted to give it another shot at writing here.

    First Published
    16th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    16th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 7 )

    #1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Wait... what?

    Interesting... Altough a little... I don't know. Have a thumbs up and let me think...

    PD: Small mistake

    "stop her from competing another large order. " should be completing

    #2 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1099750

    Wow, thanks for catching that.

    Edit: Also, yeah, I know it's quite out there. It was about 9pm when I started, and I typed it out in an hour.

    #3 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I think you did a great job with this fanfic, congrats!  But it has a lot of errors and the usual common typos in there, just some minor mishaps is all...  I give it 2.5 stars.  I don't usually comment on stories, only first timers, and the most I have read are only 3 stars worth. But great job BTW!

    Please, could you be kind enough and return the favor by reading, favouriting and liking my stories? Thank you so much...

    And be sure to watch me and check out my userpage.

    THANKS SOOOO MUCH:pinkiehappy::heart:

    #4 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    None of them have ever really recovered from the emotional wounds of Discord's mind-screw, have they?

    #5 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1101042

    What errors? I can't find them, obviously, and nobody ever seems to tell me -what-. It seems if I get anything, it's telling me there are mistakes that need to get fixed.

    >>1103141

    Does anyone ever?

    #6 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Interesting story. I spotted a couple errors you might have made by mistake:

    When Twilight is at Fluttershy's cottage, you wrote "Is is PeeWee." The second "is" should be "it."

    After Twilight daydreams about Applejack, you wrote "her was obviously studying way too hard." "Her" should be "she."

    I sometimes miss errors in my stories as well :twilightsheepish:

    #7 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1104595

    Thank you.

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