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Chapter 5: Do You Realize??
Sweetie Belle's face was burning red. But while her face was on fire, her heart was fluttering as her lips were against Spike's. To her, it felt wonderful and gave her a feeling that could not be described in words.
The dragon's eyes were wide as the white filly kissed him. A mixture of emotions was filling Spike's entire body.
Breaking the kiss, Sweetie Belle pulled her head away from Spike and looked at him shyly and with a crimson tint across her cheeks. The two looked at each other in silence for what felt like an eternity.
Finally, it was Sweetie Belle to speak first, "I'm….sorry, Spike. I really couldn't help myself. It's just….I didn't want you to be so sad. When you get sad, it really makes me feel sad, and I really like you a lot. Actually, more than just like you. I really feel that I love you, Spike," Sweetie Belle turned her head to look away, "I know I'm not Rarity, and I'm pretty sure that I won't ever be. But I really feel this way about you."
Spike was blushing deeply. He looked at the filly's crestfallen face and knew she was sincere with her words. He hesitated slightly before speaking, "Sweetie Belle…." the filly looked to the dragon, causing him to stumble over his words a little, "I-I have to say that what you did was….gutsy, more than I could ever give you credit for. And….I do have to admit that you are really c-cute and all…."
Sweetie Belle's face lit up as Spike said the last statement, "Really?"
The dragon blushed more, "Y-Yeah….I've really liked spending so much time with you. I've really n-never had so much fun with somepony before. I do love ya."
Sweetie Belle smiled warmly to Spike, which in turn caused the dragon to smile back to the unicorn. She then wrapped her hooves around Spike's neck to give him a hug. Hanging from his neck, she spoke, "I'm really happy Spike….thank you."
"I should be thanking you, Sweetie Belle," Spike replied, wrapping his arms around the filly, pulling her close to him.
"Hmm?" Sweetie Belle looked up to Spike's eyes.
"Yeah," Spike nodded, "You've been a great friend to me for quite some time and, well, you even planned a picnic to cheer me up. All I did was just be depressed about Rarity and dragged myself here."
"You can't totally blame yourself. I mean, it's not like you can just get over Rarity right away," Sweetie Belle commented.
Spike sighed, "Yeah, it won't be easy to just move on without a second thought and all."
Sweetie Belle looked at Spike for a moment before speaking, "But it's alright though."
"Huh? Why's that?" Spike asked curiously.
Sweetie Belle leaned up and kissed Spike on the cheek, causing him to blush heavily, "I don't think you realize that I understand, Spike. I'll be here to help you with whatever you need. And before you ask why, it's because I love you."
Spike smiled, "And I love you too."
END
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Spike x Sweetie is great and all and I even like the fact that she realizes that Spike will move on in time, but I just know that years down the line when they have an argument or Spike forgets an anniversary or he screws up in other manner, Sweetie Belle will most likely bring up the whole Rarity thing in the form of a guilt trip and or insult.
Image: http://cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-swcomeon.png
Image: http://cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-slick.pngA good way of putting it.
Well I should get going, the story won't write itself.
But what if it could?
Like some kind of thought-to-text machine?
Image: http://cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-tplotting.pngI must go at once
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Please say that you will eventually continue with this story. I was a SpikexRarity but ever since i started reading stories with SpikexSweetie I switched sides. At least make 2 more chappters when they are older and no one know they are dating until pinkie sees sweetie kiss spike, and when Pinkie sees something no one knows about she just cant keep her cake hole shut.
You can't totally blame yourself. I mean, it's not like you can just get over Rarity right away,"
Except apparently he can.
A cute little story, Sweetie and Spike are adorable together. It could definitely been longer though, the whole thing was somewhat rushed. Particularly the ending... as I already pointed out
Personally, I don't think the confession should've happened at all. Might've made the story longer if we saw more internal turmoil from Sweetie Belle having a crush on Spike. The end itself was kinda...... end-ish. "And they lived happily ever after" :U
Good start though..
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