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Meet the Parents
Rainbow Dash brings Soarin to meet her father and mother (Firefly)
4,812 words · 3,502 views · 480 likes · 21 dislikes
The Moon Rises
Luna was once happy with rising the moon. Here that changes and her descent to Nightmare moon begins
11,216 words · 302 views · 12 likes · 0 dislikes
Unmasked
Trixie is lonely, Cobra Commander is lonely. Romance ensues due to a dating website
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Romance Comedy Crossover Slice of Life

The Great and Powerful Trixie is lonely on Hearts and Hooves day. The supreme ruler of Cobra, Cobra Commander himself, is jealous of all the ponies with special someponies around. With Destro and Baroness trying to make him happy, what could possibly happen? Trixie X Cobra Commander of course. Bits of Derpy Hooves, Cutie Mark Crusaders, Rainbow Dash, and Pinkie Pie. Characters are all ponies, with the GI Joe characters all in ponified bodies.

Based on the comic of Naterrang on Deviantart

http://naterrang.deviantart.com/art/The-Perfect-Stallion-316204172

as well as the critique mini-story by Kobrakin

http://kobrakin.deviantart.com/critique/657990269/

First Published
16th Aug 2012

Last Modified
16th Aug 2012

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Cobra Commander

#1 · 39w, 3d ago ·

I'm Cobra Commander, and I approve this ship.

That_one_guy

#2 · 39w, 3d ago ·

HAHAHAHA

WOW

THIS IS FABULOUS

I remember folks talking about how lulzy this ship would be. Not disappointed!

Thunderscourge

#3 · 39w, 3d ago ·

>>10994791099479

Why thank you very much! :yay: I am happy that you enjoyed it.

If people like it enough I might write a follow up!

Thunderscourge

#4 · 39w, 3d ago ·

>>10994791099479

And I approve your approving this, Commander! Say hi to Trixie for me.

trickytheclown

#5 · 38w, 5d ago ·

he's being really hard on him self (bow chicka bow wow)

Breakfateschain

#6 · 36w, 4d ago ·

What was with Caramel's girlfriend hiding like that? And who was she anyway?

thecanadianpie

#7 · 22w, 2d ago ·

What Citizen Kane is to the big screen Unmasked is to the short story. :moustache:

Really though I LOVED this. This had me crying I was laughing so much. I actually said out loud everything Cobra Camander said in his high pitch voice. Wow......this was awesome!! :pinkiehappy:

Thunderscourge

#8 · 4w, 4d ago ·

>>18013241801324 I know I'm a bit late in responding (haven't really been on this site in months), but I would like to thank you greatly for your kind words! I really appreciate them, and they are really inspirational! :twilightsmile: :heart: :heart:

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