Twilight makes a mistake while performing a spell and randomly transports two girls in Equestria
Humans come to Equestria because Twilight botched a spell......oh yeah, because that concept has NEVER been used before
I'm sorry, but this is weak.
HUMANS!!! What a waste!
Over used story idea is totally not over used at all.
>>11111071111107 No offence, but, do you compliment people in order to advertise your page? :P
>>11124751112475 I'm sorry, but out of everything you guys think, advertising is surely not one of them.... i mean that.
>>11125301112530 That's cool :3
The characters aren't to be fully believable.
This isn't really THAT bad :D
>>11125411112541 Okay thanks. ugh im sooo sorry. what i did was srsly wrong. and it wasnt for advertisement e-e thanks for being cool about it. DEFINETELY not happening again!
>>11125301112530 Really? I mean, you post the same comment on every single bad story I've read. And I mean, it's the same. Nothing changes.
think you did a great job with this fanfic, congrats! But it has a lot of errors and the usual common typos in there, just some minor mishaps is all... I give it 2.5 stars. I don't usually comment on stories, only first timers, and the most I have read are only 3 stars worth. But great job BTW!
Please, could you be kind enough and return the favor by reading, favouriting and liking my stories? Thank you so much...
And be sure to watch me and check out my userpage.
I think you know what you're doing. Stop making excuses. Because you're only drawing people away from your story when you do this. Nobody likes it. So stop. Also, 'cuz YOLO? Really? I thought bronies were smarter than this. Do something about this or I'm officially labeling you as 'cuntsled'
>>11127021112702 Idk 'cuz yolo is something i just put lol sorry if u hate it.. I'm not a bad person, and i made a mistake. but this story wasnt that bad!
As my friend Lex would say: WRONG!