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    The Truth of Chaos's Stories (2)

    • The Three Failures
      A Nightmare, a Draconequus and a Changeling walk into a room...

      2,992 words · 1,162 views · 72 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Creation of Chaos
      A discovery on Discord's past through a wish Twilight makes.
      14,984 words · 848 views · 29 likes · 0 dislikes

    Discord, fed up with the treatment he has already been through for a number of millennia, manages to find Nightmare Moon and Queen Chrysalis's dream connections. He decides it's time for revenge, and plans a meeting for a diabolical plan.

    Needless to say, they don't work well together when they actually succeed.

    First Published
    1st Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    1st Sep 2012

    Comments ( 38 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Interesting story, no big errors so far. Nice work.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    So this is supposed to be a comedy . . . . Well the contrast between dream and reality in this chapter actually made me feel sadder than certain sad-tagged stories. (It's the kind of "dark" and "sad" I enjoyed)

    But of course, this story gave me a good laugh, despite Chrysalis nodding really a lot and talking very little. . . .:trollestia:

    A good opening and I love it.:pinkiehappy:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I can already tell that this will be featured. Oh, and an idea if you haven't already developed your whole plotline, maybe the other, less "evil" antagonists could accidentally step up their game due to the shenanigans of the three failures? Don't tell me red-eyed Trixie and evil Flimflam brothers wouldn't be awesome.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Intriguing!:duck:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1197779

    ... brilliant. Thank you for the idea chap. This will have a max of five chapters, just wait for the next one. Gonna be around 8,000 words

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1197776

    Ah, chrysalis. Don't worry, she gets a chapter all to herself. And soon finds out that Changelings, while they need to eat, can do something called 'Taking in too much love' :trollestia:

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1197955

    Listened? To my idea? Preposterous! But thank you, I can't wait to see. And eight thousand words? That deserves all of my cake!

    If I had cake, I would mail it to you. But since I don't please take this Derpy as substitute. :derpytongue2:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1197991

    Derpy is better than cake. Period. :pinkiesmile:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I promise I'm going to read this when it's done. :pinkiehappy:

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I disagree with Discord. No matter how annoying bird poop is, I hate flies more. Although, they are useful for driving everybody insane.

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1198238

    Exactly. Chaos is his job. And what's worse than annoying the fuck outta everypony?

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1198375 I could list a lot of things, but that wouldn't be funny.

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1198377

    Oh, and Chrysalis pisses both Discord and Nightmare Moon off saying that they need to be non-mean to the ponies in order to gather up love food for her subjects. Which becomes a huge bummer to Discord, and a mane knot for Nightmare Moon

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    even failed the word Faliure its spelt Failure :D

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1198413

    ... Wow. One sec.

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1198569

    Can't please them all I suppose.... :coolphoto:

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1198585

    :rainbowlaugh:

    This actually seems interesting and potentially hilarious, so I added it to my read later list. As a fellow fan of comedy, I thought you'd find that gif funny as well. :pinkiehappy:

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1198599

    Oh. OH. Sorry, I thought by the gif you may not have liked it. Thank you. And as for the gif, it would be more funny if the paper had Spam written all over it. :rainbowlaugh:

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    After all, wouldn't you be pissed if a bird shat on your cement head?

    I am laughing so hard that my sides hurt.

    Also,

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1198653

    Ohmigod, ohmigod, ohmigod. The guy who is writing the Changes series! HOLY HECK! I honestly don't know how to reply to your expression. Really, sinc do see you see high above me.

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    this is great, im really interested to see how the rest of the story plays out

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Interesting story. Though, I find it weird that Discord don't call them by nicknames, for example : Nighty. :scootangel:

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hehe, this is HILARIOUS.avi. Following eagerly!:scootangel:

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Hilarity ensues. And I don't know how they're going to fail. Again.

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    i can already tell this plan will fail

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1198831

    That meeting was too serious. But don't worry, soon after, everything will go funny.

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This reminds me of the ending of a lot of, in my not-so-humble opinion, lesser series. 'When we run out of ideas, just chuck every single enemy, boss, mook, and harmless woodland critter into a melting pot, final level/episode/boss/climax complete.'.

    Despite, or possibly because of, that this seems like it will be genuinely funny. Take a mustache and a Rarity-approved brohoof for your troubles.

    :moustache:

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1201533 tank you for the Spike and Rairty, my good man.

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    There is absolutely no way this plan will fail NONE! Go Team EVIL!!!

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1201653

    Ah, but what would happen if they succeed?

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1202106

    Chaos, that's what. And mostly likely they will turn on each other the first chance they get. Which will cause more Chaos.

    All hail Chaos Undivided!!

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1202166

    Yes. And they would probably be annoyed by each other.

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Discord reminds me of shale so bad right now. (DA:O)

    #36 · Chapter 1 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    description... "feed? i think you meant "fed"!

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 36w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Because it fits:

    I can't wait to see what happens next!

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 26w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Yo dawg when u gon make a new chapta

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