Words are absolute. Silence is flawed. With a mysterious book coming into play, Quantum, a colt, has stumbled what could be a complex mystery, spanning many worlds. Can he say something about it?
Author's note: Any constructive criticism is appreciated (what's good, what's not so good, "leave...", "keep...", advice?) I'm going to keep going with this. Hope it turns out good.
I liked but I do have one..Two questions What the **** is a shtick
Also did you notice this, because it confused me a little.
He roughly pushed a book back in it's place.
A book dropped suddenly from out of nowhere, “what the-.” The blue book had a strange aura around it.
Weird, right? Was it the same book or different book, I could have missed something but...I normally don't, I just saw no one really read this and wanted to see why. I guess they don't like the cover.
Author's Note: Just like the first one, Constructive criticism me.
Sorry, I got a lot of favorite stories that I feel obligated to read once I favorite them. I don't have any constructive criticism, but I do have some one who will be willing to proofread for you. Name is Book Smart, he is very nice and easy to work with. He turned a piece of crap into a decent piece of crap so he can edit your decent story into a successful story.
I'll look him up then, thanks for the heads up.