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Hawkysu 51215

Joined March 2012
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    Hawkysu's Stories (5)

    • Scootabelle
      The apparently controversial fic about Sweetiebelle and Scootaloo. And love.

      3,589 words · 1,849 views · 87 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Rejection
      Rainbow Dash finally confesses her love.
      9,659 words · 985 views · 16 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Compiled Roseluck
      Exactly what it says on the tin... kinda.
      1,930 words · 311 views · 11 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Elements of Awesome: Volume I
      Mane 6's kids. Stuff happens
      12,759 words · 257 views · 7 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Antipodes: The Winterlands
      7,978 words · 145 views · 2 likes · 0 dislikes

    Exiled from his home, a young stallion is banished into a cold world. Alone, unprepared, and thrust into a war, he must battle with evil greater than any seen for hundreds of years.

    Inspired by the wonderful setting created by PK.

    Deviant Art Version: To be posted

    Google Docs Version: To be posted

    Apologies for grammar and such. I'm super lazy and not willing to give this more than barebones editing.

    First Published
    20th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Jan 2013

    Comments ( 16 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #2 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    you had to do it didnt you...you had to make your own story useing one of my fav universes ever...*hug* I LOVE YOU & IT

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1123366

    I did. Sadly, no Cendy clop

    >>1123888

    Thanks! :D

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Huh.  A fan-fiction based on Antipodes?  Can't say I've seen one of those yet.

    So far seems pretty good.  Walk towards the moon?  If you're seeking warmth, shouldn't you walk away from the moon and towards the habitable zone?  The cold must be affecting the reasoning centers of his brain.  I'll track this for now.  Maybe now I can get my Antipodes fill while I wait for the next 2-month update...

    PK
    #5 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :oooooooo

    >>1125651

    :(

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #7 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I spotted a few small errors and it could use a little more formatting, but I'm interested to see where this goes. How long before/after the cataclysm/Antipodes is this set?

    "The Court find you guilty of High Crimes against the Council. You are hereby Exiled from the Community."

    -Finds.

    -No capital letter.

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1127921

    Yikes... I can't believe I missed that "finds." Let's just pretend that never happened.

    And to answer your question: It's set a completely undetermined number of years before the original Antipodes.

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1131382

    I saw the name Featherweight on the council, and that's the name of a foal in the Ponyville school. Are they two different ponies?

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1133807

    XD I never even made the connection. Yeah, they are. But you've given me ideas :D

    #11 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Love it..... why did i not see this before but i have a view suggestions (from my point of view)

    number 1 needs a cover pic. My suggestion get Madmax.

    number 2 have some locations from the orignal fic, such as Stalliongrad, but dont forget to add your own locations

    Number 3 I dont care if you have to do it behind PK's back, somewhere you MUST have Incendia appear in the fic. If you dont add Cendi I will personaly hunt you down and find you, and then you will be on the missing persons list...

    Number 4 Update reguarly

    Im gonna love this fic, keep up the good work the only thing that really matters here for everyone is Numbers 1 and 4. Keep up the good work :twilightsmile:




    #12 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1182386

    Thanks for the support. I'll see if anyone wants to do cover art for this, but we'll see. And I'll try to update as often as possible. Though I need to edit myself a little better, and put in a little more action.

    The next chapter should be good. Hopefully.

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 26w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Just a note-The links to the GDocs and DeviantArt aren't there.

    #14 · Chapter 3 · 20w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I've been wondering if this was going to update. Has it really been seventeen weeks and five days since the last chapter? Wow.

    More questions have been raised than answers, so unfortunately there isn't much to say. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1843688

    Yeah, I've been distracted. School takes up all my time

    #16 · Chapter 4 · 19w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This one felt a little sloppy, and kinda rushed, but still good. I still can't believe that this only has two likes.

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