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  • E What if God Were One of Us?

    Celestia spends a day as an Earth Pony after Applejack accuses her of not understanding earth pony problems
    1,295 words · 1,951 views  ·  170  ·  7
  • T A Catalyst in Time

    In an Alternate Equestria, RD never did her first Sonic Rainboom...
    27,394 words · 3,546 views  ·  98  ·  3
  • T Broken

    Scootaloo struggles with her home life even as she begins to realize it was never her home
    4,792 words · 2,188 views  ·  91  ·  4
  • T The Days in the Cavern

    The real Princess Cadence's days in the dark depths of the Canterlot caves.
    13,097 words · 684 views  ·  49  ·  3
  • T A Ponyville Secret

    Rarity has a secret...and oh is it juicy.
    3,848 words · 1,782 views  ·  71  ·  10 · sex
  • E What Does Family Mean?

    The ponies get into an argument about the definition of family
    1,761 words · 405 views  ·  20  ·  1
  • E An Important Lesson About Friendship

    Princess Celestia learns a lesson of her own
    1,196 words · 750 views  ·  21  ·  3

Blog Posts12

  • 64w, 1d
    What if God Were One of Us--New Author Continuing


    I posted a little while ago that I was cancelling some of my stories.

    A new author, chaos2012, has offered to take over What If God Were One of Us (Celestia becomes an Earth Pony)

    I'll post a link to the new version off of my original tale. Thank you, Celestia and Luna bless,


    1 comments · 272 views
  • 67w, 1d
    Hiatuses and Cancellizations

    Dear readers,

    I am very rarely on here anymore, and I haven't looked at any of my stories in what feels like years (months in actuality).  My life is at a stable point, I have my own place, a job (about to be two) that I like, a wonderful relationship, and I'll be returning to school in about a week, which leaves me next to no time to write MLP fanfiction. I've deleted or cancelled all but two of my stories, and put Broken and Catalyst in Time on hiatus.

    I apologize and hope you will all continue to enjoy my completed stories and maybe I'll return to Catalyst and Broken eventually.

    I wish you all the best,


    0 comments · 221 views
  • 94w, 6d
    Catalyst of Time Updated (Finally), New Stories, and more

    Hello readers!

    The story Catalyst in Time has finally been updated. I'm on Chapter 10 and the adventure took yet another turn! O.O

    Thanks for your patience.

    I have a couple more stories that will be released soon (hopefully), including Celestia as an earth pony, a Powerpuff Girls crossover (maybe), and definitely parts of "A Canterlot Wedding" from the real Cadence's pov.

    0 comments · 202 views
  • 118w, 6d
    New Chapter of Broken!

    Hey guys!

    Released a new chapter of Broken.

    It is a very short chapter, but I felt like the ending point was too good of an ending point. Enjoy!


    0 comments · 260 views
  • 129w, 2d
    Good News!!!

    New Chapter of Catalyst is incoming. I have a few minor details to finish and I need my netbook (which is not currently with me). But it's coming.

    0 comments · 198 views
  • ...

Twilight Sparkle's imagination as a child was unbelievable, probably due to all those books. Which also make up the amazing Fort Book, Twilightopia's first stronghold against the country of Armor! With the help of Captain Smartypants and Private Cadence, General Twilight defends her fort against her brother's advancing army of one!

A tale of Twi's childhood told from her point of view.

Inspired by the cover picture.  

First Published
16th Aug 2012
Last Modified
16th Aug 2012
#1 · 118w, 3d ago · 8 · ·

The D'awwwww is over 9000!!!!!

#2 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

Such a nice little story, you sir must write more of these :yay:

#3 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

Cuteness overload. I'm not sure if i actually survived reading this.

#4 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

I think I have diabetes now.

#5 · 118w, 3d ago · 18 · ·

I wrote you a heavy metal song:


#6 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

That's cute.:heart:

#7 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

Aw,  how adorable.  Very nicely done!  Could use a cleaner edit, but not bad at all!  I think I would've closed it off in Cadence or Shining's PoV though--the sudden break from imagination to reality was a little stilted...or perhaps that ending could just be smoothed out some more.

But I liked it anyways!  Thumbs up and faved.  Fantastic little work.

#8 · 118w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Adorable. In such a land of debauchery and depravity as this, a golden light shines through. I... I think I feel...

Oh my God, I have feelings, now. See what you did to me!?

(It was awesome, had the full vibe of the show and just lovely innocence. Warms my crotchety old heart.)

Long reign General Twili! Remember the Battle of the Book!

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#11 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

>>1095976  Totally agree with this, even if the meme is overused.  :twilightsmile:

#12 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

And then, my heart.  For sheer cuteness factor, extremely well-played.  Have a bunch of happy icons.


#13 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

I can't wipe this silly smile off my face... :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:


#14 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

>>1096169  Filly Twilight cast a "want it, need it" spell on the story.  :derpyderp2:  :twilightoops:

#15 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·


I'm gunna go make myself a book fort now.

#16 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

So gorgeous!!!  :yay::heart:

#17 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

This was adorable :twilightsmile:

#18 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

Adorableness quotient met for the evening. Thank you very much. :yay::twilightsmile:

I just love SoL type stories like these, ever so sweet.

#19 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

Omigosh so cute!

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#21 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

I give it 5/5 Spikes :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:


#22 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

I smiled so much, that now my face hurts.

But it was totally worth it :heart:

#23 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

I say what I usually say: dat ending!:raritystarry:

#24 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

This is adorable! Shining Armor is best BBBFF, and Cadance is best foalsitter.

#25 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

You did a great job in telling the story through a child's mind. Kudos.

#26 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

Oh god so cute! :rainbowkiss:

Grats on the featured box.

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#28 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

*Randomly smashes the head on the keyboard*



R.I.P ozpakko


Cuteness can now kill. FUCK!

#29 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

Cuteness overload! Nicely done:rainbowlaugh:

#30 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·


great story loved it.:pinkiehappy:

need more twi foal memory story's! :twilightangry2:

#31 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

D'awwwwwwww :twilightsmile:

we need more stories like this.

#32 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

That was adorable.  :twilightblush:  There are a few minor formatting issues (whenever a new character starts speaking there needs to be an indent or a new paragraph or something), but for the most part I was too distracted by the cuteness to really care.  Definite fave and thumbs up.  Keep up the good work.  :rainbowkiss:

#33 · 118w, 3d ago · 2 · ·

you know your story is good when the comments are longer than the story itself

#34 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

there definately needs to be more short d'aww stories like this

#35 · 118w, 3d ago · · ·

This has the nomnom stamp of approval :3  

#36 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

I'm gonna get diabetes


#37 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

Faust darn it, you blew up my daaaw 'o' meter, oh well, this story is just to good huh. All joking aside, this story really is great, a good light hearted break from Aegis Shield (who remains one of my favorite authors, no offense meant to him.) thanks for boosting my spirits! Adding to my faves.:pinkiehappy:



#38 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

Yay! Very adorable, well done.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

#39 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·


Best song ever!

As for the story... :rainbowkiss:

#40 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

Little Twily is Awesome Twily! :heart:

#41 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

I think that story gave me DIABEETUS


#42 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

Short, sweet, and adorable. Good job sir. :heart:

#43 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

this was a really cute story!

but besides that, almost every time you misspelled soldier as "solider".

#44 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

Was so adorable!:pinkiehappy:

#45 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

didn't even read it yet, but the premise is too cute to pass up! will comment about it soon further soon.

#46 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

I love fics like this.  Simple and cute.

#47 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

Warning! D'aaawww has been detected! Critical system failure imminent! *internet explodes*

But yeah, this was pretty buckin' cute. Screw Patton or Grant or whoever: Twilight is Best General. The story was a little rough; some editing and rewording might be a good idea. But it worked fine as the short, funny cutefest it was trying to be. Thumbs up, because moats are cool. :twilightsmile:

#48 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

Annnnnnd, now I have diabetes like my dad. Thank you internet for giving me these medical conditions through adorableness.

#49 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·


This is overly adorable and cute, and Twilights version is better than mine. No, I'm not gonna copy this d'aww story.

#50 · 118w, 2d ago · · ·

I had trouble starting to read this fic, as I was scared of what the levels of cuteness could do, for example give me diabetes. After reading it, I can definitely say that the diabetes is worth it.

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