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PinkamenaPiePrincess

Joined November 2011
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Stories (8)

  • The Battle of Fort Book
    Twilight Sparkle is General of Fort Book and must defend it at all costs! A story of filly Twilight

    1,108 words · 22,081 views · 3,239 likes · 44 dislikes
  • What if God Were One of Us?
    Celestia spends a day as an Earth Pony after Applejack accuses her of not understanding earth pony problems
    1,295 words · 1,846 views · 170 likes · 7 dislikes
  • A Catalyst in Time
    In an Alternate Equestria, RD never did her first Sonic Rainboom...
    27,394 words · 3,425 views · 96 likes · 3 dislikes
  • Broken
    Scootaloo struggles with her home life even as she begins to realize it was never her home
    4,792 words · 1,908 views · 90 likes · 3 dislikes
  • The Days in the Cavern
    13,097 words · 622 views · 48 likes · 3 dislikes
  • A Ponyville Secret
    3,848 words · 1,622 views · 69 likes · 9 dislikes
  • What Does Family Mean?
    1,761 words · 338 views · 20 likes · 1 dislikes
  • An Important Lesson About Friendship
    1,196 words · 650 views · 21 likes · 3 dislikes

Blog Posts (12)

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Twilight Sparkle's imagination as a child was unbelievable, probably due to all those books. Which also make up the amazing Fort Book, Twilightopia's first stronghold against the country of Armor! With the help of Captain Smartypants and Private Cadence, General Twilight defends her fort against her brother's advancing army of one!

A tale of Twi's childhood told from her point of view.

Inspired by the cover picture.  

First Published
16th Aug 2012
Last Modified
16th Aug 2012

Comments ( 446 )

#1 · 87w, 21h ago · 6 · ·

The D'awwwww is over 9000!!!!!

#2 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

Such a nice little story, you sir must write more of these :yay:

#3 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

Cuteness overload. I'm not sure if i actually survived reading this.

#4 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

I think I have diabetes now.

#5 · 87w, 20h ago · 14 · ·

I wrote you a heavy metal song:

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#6 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

That's cute.:heart:

#7 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

Aw,  how adorable.  Very nicely done!  Could use a cleaner edit, but not bad at all!  I think I would've closed it off in Cadence or Shining's PoV though--the sudden break from imagination to reality was a little stilted...or perhaps that ending could just be smoothed out some more.

But I liked it anyways!  Thumbs up and faved.  Fantastic little work.

#8 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

Adorable. In such a land of debauchery and depravity as this, a golden light shines through. I... I think I feel...

Oh my God, I have feelings, now. See what you did to me!?

(It was awesome, had the full vibe of the show and just lovely innocence. Warms my crotchety old heart.)

Long reign General Twili! Remember the Battle of the Book!

#9 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

Adorable.:pinkiesad2:

#11 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

>>1095976  Totally agree with this, even if the meme is overused.  :twilightsmile:

#12 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

And then, my heart.  For sheer cuteness factor, extremely well-played.  Have a bunch of happy icons.

:ajsmug::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::twilightsmile::yay::moustache:

#13 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

I can't wipe this silly smile off my face... :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

WHAT SORCERY IS THIS??

#14 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

>>1096169  Filly Twilight cast a "want it, need it" spell on the story.  :derpyderp2:  :twilightoops:

#15 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

HNGGGGG THE DAWW.

I'm gunna go make myself a book fort now.

#16 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

So gorgeous!!!  :yay::heart:

#17 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

This was adorable :twilightsmile:

#18 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

Adorableness quotient met for the evening. Thank you very much. :yay::twilightsmile:

I just love SoL type stories like these, ever so sweet.

#19 · 87w, 18h ago · · ·

Omigosh so cute!

#20 · 87w, 18h ago · · ·

D'aawwwww:rainbowkiss:

#21 · 87w, 18h ago · · ·

I give it 5/5 Spikes :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

:trollestia:

#22 · 87w, 18h ago · · ·

I smiled so much, that now my face hurts.

But it was totally worth it :heart:

#23 · 87w, 18h ago · · ·

I say what I usually say: dat ending!:raritystarry:

#24 · 87w, 17h ago · · ·

This is adorable! Shining Armor is best BBBFF, and Cadance is best foalsitter.

#25 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

You did a great job in telling the story through a child's mind. Kudos.

#26 · 87w, 15h ago · · ·

Oh god so cute! :rainbowkiss:

Grats on the featured box.

#27 · 87w, 15h ago · · ·

YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE DAAAAWWWWWWW!

#28 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

*Randomly smashes the head on the keyboard*

THE CUTENESS LEVEL! IT'S REALLY HIGH! D'AAAAAAAAAWW!!!!!!!

*Dies*

R.I.P ozpakko

????-1004

Cuteness can now kill. FUCK!

#29 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

Cuteness overload! Nicely done:rainbowlaugh:

#30 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

REINFORCE THE EAST WALL AND THE MAIN GATE THE DAAAWW'S ARE COMING!! :flutterrage:

great story loved it.:pinkiehappy:

need more twi foal memory story's! :twilightangry2:

#31 · 87w, 13h ago · · ·

D'awwwwwwww :twilightsmile:

we need more stories like this.

#32 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

That was adorable.  :twilightblush:  There are a few minor formatting issues (whenever a new character starts speaking there needs to be an indent or a new paragraph or something), but for the most part I was too distracted by the cuteness to really care.  Definite fave and thumbs up.  Keep up the good work.  :rainbowkiss:

#33 · 87w, 12h ago · 1 · ·

you know your story is good when the comments are longer than the story itself

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#34 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

there definately needs to be more short d'aww stories like this

#35 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

This has the nomnom stamp of approval :3  

#36 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

I'm gonna get diabetes

D'AWWWWWW

#37 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

Faust darn it, you blew up my daaaw 'o' meter, oh well, this story is just to good huh. All joking aside, this story really is great, a good light hearted break from Aegis Shield (who remains one of my favorite authors, no offense meant to him.) thanks for boosting my spirits! Adding to my faves.:pinkiehappy:

Cooliofir135

:derpytongue2:

#38 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

Yay! Very adorable, well done.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

#39 · 87w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1096024

Best song ever!

As for the story... :rainbowkiss:

#40 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

Little Twily is Awesome Twily! :heart:

#41 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

I think that story gave me DIABEETUS

:rainbowkiss:

#42 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

Short, sweet, and adorable. Good job sir. :heart:

#43 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

this was a really cute story!

but besides that, almost every time you misspelled soldier as "solider".

#44 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

Was so adorable!:pinkiehappy:

#45 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

didn't even read it yet, but the premise is too cute to pass up! will comment about it soon further soon.

#46 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

I love fics like this.  Simple and cute.

JAG
#47 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

Warning! D'aaawww has been detected! Critical system failure imminent! *internet explodes*

But yeah, this was pretty buckin' cute. Screw Patton or Grant or whoever: Twilight is Best General. The story was a little rough; some editing and rewording might be a good idea. But it worked fine as the short, funny cutefest it was trying to be. Thumbs up, because moats are cool. :twilightsmile:

#48 · 87w, 11h ago · · ·

Annnnnnd, now I have diabetes like my dad. Thank you internet for giving me these medical conditions through adorableness.

#49 · 87w, 10h ago · · ·

BLAZING HOOF, MAN THE STATION!

This is overly adorable and cute, and Twilights version is better than mine. No, I'm not gonna copy this d'aww story.

#50 · 87w, 10h ago · · ·

I had trouble starting to read this fic, as I was scared of what the levels of cuteness could do, for example give me diabetes. After reading it, I can definitely say that the diabetes is worth it.

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