I'm not sure that the whole "Past" section is necessary. Since it's just a summary of what happened in the show, without any new twists or different perspectives, it really doesn't serve a purpose. You can assume everyone on this website has already watched the show, or at least knows what happened in it.

So far, the whole thing just doesn't seem very original. I'll keep my eye on the story to see if it ends up getting more interesting, but so far it basically looks like a repeat of The Return of Harmony.

>>10882691088269

Well, I kind of liked to set the scene for the whole thing. I know everyone's already seen the episodes, and I know I'll get criticized for things, but I figured I'd put it up here anyway. Pretty much what I'm doing is writing it like the way I'd see it on the actual show

Also, don't worry. It'll get better. I'm going to be adding more antagonists other than just Discord in the later chapters.

>>10884401088440

Okay, that seems reasonable. I look forward to whatever else you have in store!

Any suggestions or corrections are welcome

>>11996361199636

did rainbow dash just...

>>12172901217290

You'll have to wait to find out

>>12181181218118

ok