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Doom Trot 6742

Joined April 2012
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    Doom Trot's Stories (6)

    • Caught in the Act
      Ponyville is in uproar because of a certain mischievous filly. (Yes, it's Diamond Tiara)

      25,760 words · 1,094 views · 75 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Playing the Spy Game: Belligerent Bounties of Boast Busting
      The Snips is a lie.
      9,865 words · 298 views · 10 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Hopeless Romance
      Troubled by Rainbow Dash's behavior, Apple Bloom rallies her fellow Crusaders to steal a potent "truth potion" to get answers from Rainbow Dash. This, however, results in unforeseen mayhem.
      6,951 words · 211 views · 16 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Supremacy
      Chaos runs rampant in Ponyville as a small group of supremacists secretly wreak havoc on the town.
      68,680 words · 556 views · 6 likes · 1 dislikes
    • A Magician's Torment
      7,262 words · 287 views · 8 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Playing the Spy Game: Changelingshy
      12,951 words · 141 views · 3 likes · 6 dislikes
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    Long before the invasion of Canterlot, a certain malevolent queen kept close watch on Equestria's most important ponies.  After their astonishing victory against Night Mare Moon, Queen Chrysalis busied her Hive with spying on and studying the Elements of Harmony.  

    When the perfect opportunity to evaluate Twilight Sparkle arose, Chrysalis took action, sending a veteran commando by the name of Raze to infiltrate Ponyville.  His assigned guise, however, wasn't one he expected.  

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    Belligerent Bounties of Boast Busting

    Changelingshy

    First Published
    18th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    18th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was funny! I wouldn't mind seeing more of Raze!

    #2 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    A pretty funny story. When Raze mentioned that Chrysalis wouldn't believe him I kind of expected some kind of ridiculous looking report, but aside from the mustache mention it was pretty tame. A very entertaining piece of fiction.

    #3 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    It did get a little tedious going through the majority of the episode again, with everything Raze would have witnessed during it being brought up without a great deal added from his viewpoint. However the 'Sweet and Delectable Treatsie' comment made it all worth it! The comments on the pony puns & gimmicky unicorn magic were a nice addition.

    Can we expect to see more of Raze's infiltrations in the future?

    #4 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1110293 >>1110512 >>1110899 Thanks for the feedback.  I know it isn't the best executed story and all (in terms of tediousness especially).  This honestly isn't my best work, but that's partially due to this being half experiment, half idea-that-popped-into-my-head-and-had-to-be-made-into-a-story.  Anyway, I think Raze will be assigned a mission or two beyond this one.  (If I ever actually get around to those, that is)  

    #5 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    "What's this stuff?"

    "Amnesia dust."

    "How's it work?"

    "Like this."  *Poof*

    You so totally went there.

    #6 · 39w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Very cute. Are you planning on doing anything more with this character? Please?:fluttercry:

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