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RayneTheSkunk


The Young Six are a blessing to this very earth

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One day everyone is going to graduate. One day they'll go their separate ways.
Ocellus may have just found a way to stop that. Draw a spell circle, sacrifice a little blood, stay friends forever. It's a simple process really, until everyone's feelings spill over the floor.


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This is right up my alley in terms of primordial magic and character dynamics. A few parts where it was hard to tell who was speaking, and some grammar errors, but overall there are some really interesting ideas here. Nice job!

This was neat! And yeah, you’re not a proper circle of teenage friends unless you do at least one occult ritual together.

"No worry. Yona has spare stomachs for three of you.”

That ruminant privilege.

I like how uncertain it is, in the end, if there really was a fate spell. Nice ambiguity!

This was filled with fun banter and plenty of magic and mystery. However, there are some instances of error. For example, 'Everfree' is a proper noun and needs to be capitalized.

This was a pretty interesting story so the young 6 are really worried about what the future holds for these kids because sooner or later school will be over and thinking They were never see each other again so they came up with an idea with a spell supposed to be keep it them bond together of course some of them had mixed feelings about this whole spell thing and understandable but they didn't want to lose their friendship either everybody always worried about that which again understandable but anyway good job on the story and I like how the characters are there keep up the good work

Kind of reminds me of the spell bonding when the cmc try to do that when Scootaloo was about to leave and they didn't want to separate from each other

“Good. Only Yona bite Sandbar,” Yona said sporting her prideful yak smile. Sandbar’s face turned pink as the others snickered.

Oh my Yona lol

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