You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.
“There she goes,/There she goes again./She calls my name,/Pulls my train,/No one else could heal my pain.” –The La’s, ‘There She Goes’
Pokey Pierce's luck seems to finally be turning around for him. However, there is one thing he just can't shake off, Pinkie Pie's stare of doom. Will she forgive him for always popping his balloons? Well, hopefully they'll make peace since they are now working together.
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I sense a shipping approaching....
It's pretty good so far. I'll keep an eye on it!
Too short but faved.
1092679 Sorry to say, but that's it for this story.
Oh, really? Shame.
1092810 I do have plenty of more stories to upload (in time, since I can only upload so many at a time)
Oh, good. Maybe I'll look at those!
1092826 There are some here and the rest on my dA.
DA?
Not bad. 4.5/5
1092878 My deviantArt. There's a link to it on my page.
I like it.
1092897
Oh. Okey dokey lokey!
I can't decide if that was too sudden, or exactly what Pinkie would really do.
Was enjoyable then and always enjoyed it now. Excellent.
Really liked the 2nd chapter. Nice job. Pokey Pierce is really getting on Pinkie's good side.
Really awesome man. Great job. Faved.
the ending felt rushed if this story was longer or if you planned on writing more then it would be better. I did enjoy the story for the most part hope you write more.
But in a good way.
1210081 Thankfully, things didn't get completely out of hand too fast.
I'm gonna enjoy this
That was a good fic.
I feel like the ending was a little rushed, but considering how rash pinkie can be its not out of character.
Loved all of it, but I noticed that some parts of the chapter are a bit you know wishy washy.
1093646 nah. She would be like "YOU KILLED BALOONY! NOW YOU DIE!"
D'aww.
I think the story progressed way too fast without building on their relationship to be honest with you.