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Twilight has been struggling with her feelings for a certain pony lately, but when Rainbow Dash tells her friends a deep secret, Twilight is compelled to reveal her own, but sometimes you should wait a bit to say something so personal to somepony so fragile.
(Wow! I suck at summaries!)
Nononono. Forget that Epilogue as DjVinylScratch suggested. Make this story into a multi-chapter story.
I loved this story. There are very few TwiDash stories and yours has the potential of being awesome, just please make more chapters. No one likes One-Shots. Haha
You write extremely well. I am anxious to see more work from you, either in this storyline or another.
As a side note, having just finished Jane Austen's "Pride and Prejudice," I couldn't help seeing parallels between the climax of that story and the climax of this one. 
Great short story. Quick and simple but some nice funny and surreal moments and just enough D'Aww not to get sappy. The only real problem was the research not seemed a little to neat and convenient. Could have been a bit less blatant, but good none the less. Sad about RD's backstory and her bitchy mom.
I don't often read ships, since they're usually just clichéd attempts to ram two characters together and botch together some poorly-explained reason. You've done a great job with this one, focusing not on one character simply asking out another, but on a bond between friends. I feel it's more the sad sweetness of the story that makes it what it is, with the shipping itself more of a story point that a story focus. Great job!
Amazing. I loved this utterly and completely. 
Being the terrible person I am, I checked for personality errors, boring parts, things that were "too convenient", and parts that didn't seem right. . . but it all added up! I legitimately can't find anything to complain about for this story, when people write this well I'm sort of in awe. 
>>79805 >>79920 I can't agree anymore 
! You set up the start of their relationship completely, if you don't continue this you're totally leaving us hanging.
Rainbow Dash would disapprove. 
<(I'm Rainbow Dash, and I do not approve of this message)
^ OK, that was bad. 
There's tons to write about after they start the relationship, so do it! You set this up so nicely, it'd just be a shame for it to end. Well, unless you have something else planned already that you're working on, of course. Then it makes sense if you aren't working on this. (but then, you can return to it, right? Pretty please? 
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>>90590 I'm sorry, this particular story was written from the ground up to be a one-shot. About the chapter name; I was an idiot and didn't pay attention to what I was doing when I uploaded the fic, my apologies for the confusion. I am writing a multi-chapter story that will most likely be up around mid-January though, if that interests you.
If you'd like, you can consider "I'll be home for Hearth's Warming Eve" a sequel, but I personally do not.
quick, to the point, stays off the useless mush mostly, doesn't really build up any sort of emotional depth beyond our initial confusion, but the situation plays out as if it were an episode of the show, if the show had believable gay relationships. not bad. if you do try another fic some time, i'd give it a lookover.
I have added this fic to the LGBT Group. If you wish to have it removed, contact me.
This story brings back some memories, one of the first good LGBT stories put out. Love this thing.
This was one of the first Twidash stories I ever read when I first got into reading fanfiction, and one of the stories that got me into Twidash.
Now, here we are, ten months later, and I'm still a fervent believer in Twidash, and this is still one of the best damn Twidash stories I've ever read.
Merry Christmas to you.
Live long and prosper.
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Wonderful writing skills... Epilogue? 
Ran like a legitimate episode. Really captured the essence.
just helping 
Thank you for the great story!
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