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TheArcher20


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It's been thirty years since Trixie's utter humiliation from the ponies of Ponyville. Despite her humiliation from Twilight, Trixie has not lost any of her fame and she is still known as the great and powerful Trixie. But will her past mistakes catch up to her as she finally may 'get what she deserves'. Read as Trixie recounts her time after Ponyville as she takes one final look at Twilight's grave.

Rated Teen for language.

This stories idea was created with a random conversation between my editor and I. Hope you guys enjoy it.

Editor: Nobrains

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 12 )

The little goo blob reminds me of Morph from Treasure Planet for some reason :twilightsheepish:
What happened at the tavern, though? :twilightoops:

1502971
find out in the next chapter! which will be done sometime i dont know when

Did I miss something? The room cost 5 bits plus 2 for add ons, so she paid 21. Was reading over to see if she mentioned staying multiple
days but didn't see anything, did you forget to write it in?

1503977
she basically paid the price before hand for how long she is staying. Make sense now?
edit: in other words 3 days, so far it's been one, two after the next chapter.

1506268
yeah, with the math thought it was implied, would'a been better though if you said she paid 21, instead of him saying that will be 21 bits, the way it is now he seems to magically know she was staying for three days or that we're missing a few pieces of their conversation. Not a big deal just thought I'd point this out.

1506339
im pretty sure i wrote the owner at the front in as a mare btw and yes i noticed that and will fix it in my spare time, thanks

1506352
lol, my bad, yeah don't mind the gender slip up:twilightblush:

1506400
yeah no problem, i also fixed it it was easy enough to just add in the literally three words or so //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png

1506412
very nice, knew it was an easy fix, looking forward to your next chapter.

yes that picture is the basic one that was used to create our goo friend so i thought it best to put it in to give it a slight credit despite me not knowing the creator of it heh. :twilightblush:

Hmmmm... who is this mystery stallion I wonder?

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