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  • T I Would Give to You

    You move to Ponyville, and a certain mare catches your eye, but are you right for her?
    51,178 words · 5,580 views  ·  577  ·  17
  • T Faster Than Light

    An Astronaut finds himself quite a long way from home... Quite a long way indeed.
    22,034 words · 3,900 views  ·  497  ·  15 · sex
  • T Tears of an Angel

    It's hard to recover from a loss. Even harder to recover when the pony you turn to has problems too
    18,186 words · 2,404 views  ·  230  ·  6 · sex
  • T The Color of Apples

    You have fallen for Applejack, but will she reciprocate your emotions? Time will tell...
    40,734 words · 9,074 views  ·  741  ·  33
  • E Opportunity

    A small colt discovers his heart.
    1,308 words · 697 views  ·  78  ·  1
  • T In Tenebrae Invenit (In Darkness Found)

    OC(You) Stand as Luna's longest standing guard. But things change...
    19,690 words · 2,701 views  ·  106  ·  3 · sex
  • T Rising Sun

    OC(2nd person) is introduced to Equestria, and finds new friends, and enemies
    74,923 words · 7,070 views  ·  463  ·  28 · sex · gore
  • T Wander

    A new arrival to Equestria comes face to face with those in charge, and must come to terms with a new home.
    8,044 words · 322 views  ·  35  ·  0

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  • 12w, 6d
    Spam be Damned


    I said I was gonna do it, and I did it.  Not my best run, but I have had worse attempts.

    Sursum Aeternum!

    -Jet Howitzer

    4 comments · 99 views
  • 13w, 2m
    I am the make Movie-Film

    First, I am making some progress in regards to writing.  Fireflies is more than likely next to get an update, and then some of my other works.

    In other news, I'm going to start doing some recordings of myself playing some games I like, along with commentary.  Because I can.  And I think that it's fun.

    Once I start putting videos up I'll add links to them, and start advertising myself, because, why not?

    The first game will be Risk of Rain, and after that I'll start doing a full playthrough of Black Mesa.  The first video will be recorded, and posted, hopefully, tonight.  Depending on how my play goes it'll be anywhere from half an hour (Assuming I die) to a couple hours long.  I'll probably end up breaking the video into parts if it's more than half an hour, since I don't want it to be too long.

    Oh, and should there be a game that can be done with more than one person I might just find someone to play them with.  The more the merrier, and all that jazz.

    Anyway, that's all for now.

    Sursum Aeternum!

    -Jet Howitzer

    2 comments · 51 views
  • 14w, 4d
    Democracy: Probably a Dictatorship

    Well, dear readers, I've reached a smidgen of a snag when it comes to Fireflies.  Not anything too dramatic, it's still going to be written, and things of that nature.  So, don't worry about me abandoning it, or something like that.  I'm not that much of a tosser... Most of the time.

    ANYWHOOZLE!

    The fact of the matter is, I don't know quite what I want to have happen, aside from a single (Incredibly important) scene, in the next chapter.  And, really there's no necessity for that scene to be in this next chapter, but it must happen before the end of the story.  That being said, we come to the matter of import, and the real reason for this blog.  A chance for you to have your voices... Words read!  This is a two parter, so bear with me.

    First:  Please cast a vote for an activity you'd like to see done during the chapter.

    A) Make a suggestion, since I don't really have much of an idea.  Yet.

    Second:  Since we all know what the next chapter leads into, let's not play games.  Which girl(s) will Icarus spend the next night romancing.  I am already aware of the bias in the poll, but it's a bit intentional.  Gotta work on fixing that shit that's wrong with Dash, broskis.

    A)  Dash

    B) Dash and Twi

    C) Dash and Rarity

    D) Dash and Pinkie

    E) Dash, Rarity, Pinkie, and Twi (I'd rather a threesome or a foursome BEFORE a fivesome, but if this wins, it wins...)

    Please, leave a comment below with your vote.  And feel free to leave comments and suggestions along with your vote, if you so desire.  I will be reading all of them, and probably responding to them as well.

    Sursum Aeternum!

    -Jet Howitzer

    19 comments · 157 views
  • 20w, 3d
    I am now 23

    The title says it all, people.

    As of today, July 4, 2014 I am 23 years of age.

    Please, hold your applause, and just throw money.  Can't buy shit with applause.

    Sursum Aeternum!

    -Jet Howitzer

    15 comments · 111 views
  • 21w, 18h
    A Tale of Two Stories

    It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.

    There are two tales that I would like to shamelessly endorse, now, and here they are:

    Distant Memories

    This story, by Lord of Nothing, features two ponies stranded somewhere without their memories.  I don't know the whole plot, yet, but it has tickled my interest, and I'm an active pre-reader for the story.  Really, go check it out, and tell Lord of Nothing that I sent you.

    The second story is one of my own.

    Wander

    This was written for The Most Dangerous Game competition, and is a Human in Equestria story.  It's going to focus on the exploration of Equestria, and will be seeing more chapters added once the competition is over, since I can't really add to it before the contest is over.  Or, at least, I'm not going to add to it.

    That's all, for now, comrades.

    Till next time,

    Sursum Aeternum!

    -Jet Howitzer

    1 comments · 103 views
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You've lived your life as innocently as you could for the past few years.  Every so often you are forced to relive memories of things you did, and things you failed to do.  For the past few months you've found solace in the form of a romantic pen-pal, and soon you'll finally get to meet her.  Sadly, some secrets are harder to keep than others, and yours may doom more than just you...

Sequel to both I Would Give to You, and The Color of Apples.

As of 9/14/12 10:54 Eastern Time Approval rating is 98.889%

First Published
3rd Sep 2012
Last Modified
11th Feb 2013

Looks pretty cool mate

>>1212823 I dont think he did, I think this is when he saved applejack in the train then it gets wrecked. Me thinks this started around there.

>>1212916

ahh.  I still think he died, since this is a SEQUEL.

lets see how it plays out, eh?

...You never finished I would give to you so how can we have a sequel?

Not that I'm complaining, I love your work man.

You had better not have done to Taupe what  I think you just did to Taupe.

>>1212989

Nah, this is the big announcement that hasn't happened yet in IWGtY, so it isn't really breaking anything timeline-wise.

"A romantic pen pal" eh? This sounds like it could get interesting. And Rarity is best pony, so I can't wait to dig in.

Although it would be nice to see how I would give you ends as well.

new story. coolio.

Goodie, another story! And now I'm the last Changeling? Sounds interesting, I wonder if Rarity will still be infatuated if she finds out...

In I would give you, the Mane Six and the pegasus protagonist visit a heavilly injured (albeit still alive) Taupe in this hospital. This is in direct contradiction to previous testimony!

>>1213028

>>1212823

>>1214006

>>1213214

Taupe does die, but he is revived in the hospital moments later, after being teleported to the hospital.  You don't have all the evidence.  Read the scene where Taupe passes out after the train crash, and you'll see that you are brought back in the hospital.

>>1212916  You got it.

I like the story so far:pinkiehappy:

Alright. Let's do this shit.

Wow Nice story cant wait to read the next chapter :pinkiesmile:

>>1214066

"You don't have all the evidence"

In all seriousness, though, great story so far. I really get the feeling I'm going to like this protagonist.

Hold on a minute. I love where this could go, but one thing…

In the first chapter I/we/He saw Her at the palace and had, quote, "… nearly every facet of the mare memorized, and she quickly became a focal point for you.". But now he doesn't remember how Rarity looks? Did misinterpret something?

>>1219047  It's been a few years for 'you'...  I need to do some editing here, I'll admit.  For now, ignore incongruousness like that.  I'll take care of it when I really get started with this story.

Ah, we finally get to meet ourselves.  Well, the stallion mentioned in the last fic ar least.

I can't have been the only one whose first reaction was, "You killed me! I can't believe you just killed me!"

I uhh... have 1 question. In chapter one, Quill and Rarity met at a royal meeting, or Quill at least saw her, which started the infatuation. It said, "She had a beautiful coat, and her mane was even more beautiful than her coat was.  You couldn’t recall the events of that meeting, but you knew that it was serious. By the end of the meeting you had nearly every facet of the mare memorized, and she quickly became a focal point for you."

So, why in chapter 2 does he not know what Rarity looks like? :applejackconfused:

Mistake: Celestia said "Hero's tend to be noticed".  Heroes would be the proper one to use in this context

>>1222930  Yes, I know.

It's been a few years for 'you'...  I need to do some editing here, I'll admit.  For now, ignore incongruousness like that.  I'll take care of it when I really get started with this story.

-Jet Howitzer, said in a previous comment

I need to check up on things like that.  It's probably because I wrote this while incredibly tired, and I just wanted to get it out while it was fresh, sort of, in my mind.

>>1223001  Yeah, I fixed that in my word document, but I think I did it after copying it over...  Oops.

>>1223388 Ah, I see, I somehow missed this already being addressed :facehoof:

Anyways, that aside, I'm really looking forwards to more of this story, and I would give to you too!

Well fuck. Now scootaloo is dead in 4 fics. Dammit all

>>1226414  Wat?  Scootaloo isn't dead.

In the storm story she died

>>1226457  No.  She died in the non-canon version of that chapter.  She isn't dead.  Since this story takes place after the events of Apples, and IWGtY, she can't be dead.  Since she appears in those stories.

My one quip that hasn't already been touched on in the comments is that in the first chapter Tumble says he has "people to see." I didn't know Tumble had the power to walk between universes; he must be quite the magician.

Other than that, this seems to be going well, just as I expected. I'll be tracking this fic as well.

>>1226488  Tumble's a pretty powerful guy.  One does not mess with Tumble.

>>1226513  Actually,  Storm does just that.  Albeit he kind of runs into it, but that's just a matter of semantics.

>>1214066

YES!

FUCK YES!

anyways, I really think you should make him feel conficted, in the sense that he is really just a tool of Celestia's, to be disposed of when he is no longer useful.

But thats my take on things anyways.

>>1226571

So I'm guessing this, and I Would Give to You are going to link up at some point before you begin to finish I Would Give to You?  Maybe with joint chapters where you give the details from each of "our" perspectives?  

>>1226462i already told leaf that she isn't dead. He wont listen...:ajsleepy:

For some reason, i keep remembering MLD :fluttershysad::fluttercry::ajsleepy::raritydespair::pinkiesad2:

I think he is going to be okay.

>>1214006 lol omg i love pheonix wright and i agree i've read all 3 stories and taupe is in the hospital but still very much alive

PHEONIX WRIGHT FTW!!!:trollestia:

Great so far, I'm really liking how you're managing to juggle,like,4 stories at once:yay:, AND to link them into one big epic ball of pony awesome!:pinkiehappy:

You could only name one of them: the lavender unicorn who you knew to be called Twilight.  Other than that, you had no clue which one was Rarity.

How does he not know which one is Rarity?  Chapter 1 said he saw her in person at an important meeting about stolen artifacts (even taking the time to memorize the details about her), and he got her address from Celestia after inquiring about her.  Even if it had been years between then, surely he would've remembered what her coat color was since he was stricken instantly by her beauty.

>>1289964  Yes, I know.  I need to go back and change a few things about this story.  To be fair, I wrote both chapters a bit quicker than I usually write, and so I may have made a few mistakes.  With IWGtY nearly complete this story will soon be the focus of my attention, and once this is done I'll be shifting back to Rising Sun, in the hopes of finishing it.

Well. Taupe died. damn.

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