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P0nies 4710653

Joined March 2012
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    P0nies's Stories (47)

    • Alone in the World
      Sometimes, even in a world of love, there are those who sleep alone.

      1,918 words · 3,829 views · 476 likes · 12 dislikes
    • Rainbow Dad
      There are times when ponies are waiting for you... but you can't move on until you learn to let go.
      1,272 words · 782 views · 74 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Flipping the Hourglass
      Time Turner faces the temptation of tampering with time to be with Derpy Hooves.
      3,047 words · 986 views · 61 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Luna's Alarm Clock
      Luna has never had an alarm clock until now, but can she handle it?
      1,221 words · 1,763 views · 195 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Never Stop Smiling
      1,591 words · 641 views · 71 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Red Bull Gives You Wings!
      1,430 words · 831 views · 67 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Final Letters
      2,854 words · 1,822 views · 155 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Through the Eyes of a Librarian
      1,682 words · 613 views · 57 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Fire in Her Eyes
      19,078 words · 1,937 views · 131 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Twilight Sparkle Makes Dubstep
      2,504 words · 1,010 views · 129 likes · 6 dislikes

    Luna is forced out of the castle so that she can make friends and attempt to assimilate with the rest of society. Are her new friends as they claim to be, or are they just like the others?

    A 1-hour prompt from John H.

    First Published
    1st Sep 2012
    Last Modified
    1st Sep 2012

    Comments ( 12 )

    #1 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Since my comment disappeared, sorry if I butchered the story.... was a 1 hour challenge after all.

    #2 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The view count also disappeared. But the likes remained. What sorcery is this? :trixieshiftright:

    #3 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1190801 Trixie >.>

    #4 · 37w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1190942 whaaat about her? :trixieshiftleft:

    #5 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Seems awesome. And interesting. But, I was currently reading and then noticed this so added to "Read Later". But I did give a like and a favorite.

    lol

    #6 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    i feel like it ended abruptly it was good though

    #7 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Meh. Not… erm, I… uh…

    Something's missing.

    #8 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1197260 I would expect there to be, it was written in an hour... so I can't say this represents what I do very well.

    #9 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1197369

    'Twouldn't for me, either. I could not participate in a thirty minute or hour write. Takes me half an hour just to settle in.

    #10 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1197438 to the author's credit, he was very creative with the open-ended prompt I gave him.

    #11 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1197479

    Granted, that. I will agree.

    Still looking forward to more from you, >>1197369!

    #12 · 37w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I saw a story like this a few days ago. Will read later...

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