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(I left Zephyr to write the dialogue between C64 and C65 in his fic ‘Memories of Zephyr’. Here's the link)
Edit: I will be putting Zeph's chapter in OoaL soon.
Chapter 65: Flight
Dusk had finished talking to Zephyr, and had left the hospital, feeling like he knew a little bit too much about his friend’s private life. He didn’t think that Zephyr would find a way to still have sex with broken ribs, even with painkillers. He doesn’t know much about medicine, but he still knew that painkillers wouldn’t have taken away all of the pain. However, he could say that he expected Zephyr to do something like this. He seems to be that sort of pony anyway.
Trying to get the thoughts of Zephyr and Twilight out of his mind, he begins to walk back towards the main room of the hospital, to try and set up an appointment with somepony who could tell him how his wings were holding up. He recalls that he planned to do something after he had done all this, but he couldn’t remember what it was.
‘Mental note to self, make more mental notes.’
He walks the rest of the way trying to remember what he had planned. He completely forgotten about everything that had to do with it. He didn’t know if it was important, nor did he know where and when he was supposed to do it. He thinks that it may have something to do with the Hospital, but he wasn’t too sure...
After asking for an appointment with one of the doctors, he sat in the empty waiting room, and thought about what task could have slipped his mind. He didn’t have long to think however, since he was called up almost immediately to see the Caramel unicorn lookalike doctor. (That has got to be his fanon name.) He half cursed, and half thanked his luck, since it takes so much longer to book an appointment at a place like Manehatten.
So he steps inside the room that the doctor directed him to. Since Dusk had requested a check up on his injured wing, there were a few pieces of equipment that were set up, and ready to use. Dusk told him about why he had come, explaining about how he had tried to fly, (leaving out anything involving the incident with Rarity) about his lack of wing stretching, and lastly, about how his wing still hurt when spread out. Thinking of it as nothing to worry about, the doctor starts doing his planned tests.
It took them about twenty minutes to do all of the required tests to his wing. As it turns out, his wing wasn’t in disrepair, but it was recovering at a slower rate. Apparently, by this point of the recovery, he should be able to fly for short stints before the pain emerged. He told Dusk that he should be back at full strength in about another four to five days, which was three days over the original recovery time. He explained to him that the stress of the early flight, as well as the lack of doing the mandatory wing stretches had slowed the recovery process of his muscles. While it was disheartening news, he took it in his stride as he left the hospital. He still cursed his memory when he couldn’t figure out what the final task of the day was.
He chose to stop thinking about this unknown task, and to just have a normal walk back to Fluttershy's. It would come back to him eventually... right?
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It was starting to get late by the time that Dusk had gotten back to Fluttershy's. The sky had been cleared of all of its cloud cover, and so Dusk could see that the sun was setting. It looked to be about 5:30 to 6:00pm. Inside the house, Fluttershy appeared to be making a some soup in a moderately sized cooking pot. It has only just been put on the heat, and it seems that she was too distracted by the meal to notice Dusk.
Not wanting to startle her, Dusk quietly greets his marefriend, “Hello Fluttershy.” He says with a subtle smile on his muzzle.
She looks up at him, and starts to drift closer to him. “Good evening Dusk." She pauses as she lightly kisses him on the cheek, which causes him to blush. "So how is your wing? Did the check up go well?"
"I-It went well." He is still in a flustered state, which made proper speech a little bit harder. "M-My right wing is recovering at a slower pace, but otherwise, it is still okay."
"Well that's still good news." Her usual hesistant voice became more sultry. She gave him the 'bedroom eyes' as she spoke, "Because I am hoping that we could try something new tonight, if you are up to it."
‘Well this is all a bit sudden but...win.’
“I’d like that Shy, but don’t you think that you should take the soup off the heat? We wouldn’t want the house to burn down or anything.” He says with a hint of sarcasm.
Hearing this, she walks back into the kitchen, and moves the still cold pot of soup onto an unheated stove top. "Well it looks like that won't be a problem now." She says expectantly.
"Well then... shall we?"
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The two were both on the top of her bed, in the middle of deep, passionate kiss. Dusk could feel himself losing control, under Fluttershy’s forceful influence. They were both in pure bliss, as they held their kiss until they were finally forced to let each other go to breathe. Both of them were breathing heavily as Dusk comments on her in between quieting breaths. “Fluttershy, I had... I had no idea you could be so aggressive. I’m impressed.”
'I hardly ever see her like this, it is like she is a new Fluttershy; more confident.'
"Me neither, but I kind of like the feeling." Admits Fluttershy, who is still breathing heavily after their passionate, loving embrace.
"Yeah me too." He says challengingly, before giving her a kiss of his own to hee, which startles her. She adds a bit more force onto the kiss, which Dusk happily accepts. He is caught off guard when he feels Fluttershy's tongue feel its way through his mouth. He instinctively freezes from the feelings of pleasure that overwhelm him; he is completely under her influence. She continues this with very little resistance from the stallion, until she needed to stop for breath.
Fluttershy could tell that something seemed off about Dusk. She immediately assumes the worse, as she timidly asks, “A-Are you okay Dusk? Oh dear, I shouldn’t have done that. I won’t do that anymore if you don’t want me to okay...” She sounds regretful, but there is also a hint of disappointment in her voice.
“W-Wait a sec.” He says, while waving both of his forehooves to try and stop Fluttershy, “I like it, but it just took me by surprise and I sort of froze up. You’ve got nothing to worry about Shy, I kind of like it when you are this forward, but I reckon I can still teach you a few new moves.”
Her worried gazed turns back into a more seductive look, “How interesting, would you care to show me?”
‘The confident Shy is back again, that’s good...’
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After some time, the two had finished their rather enjoyable moment, and had started to revert back into their more ‘normal’ lives. They both had their dinner together, (the soup was delicious) washed up, and did their usual things before they went to sleep. They had both decided to go to bed a little bit earlier than usual, since their past ‘activities’ had tired them out. They embraced for the last time of the day, before they fell into a deep slumber.
(Three days later)
“I believe that it is time.”
Dusk is standing outside of Fluttershy’s cottage, looking up at the clear, dark skies of Ponyville. He isn’t focusing on anything in particular, but he was trying to get a feel of his surroundings. There is a light breeze blowing north of the cottage, slowly making its way towards Ponyville. It is also a little bit chilly outside, but he knew that the weather ponies needed to do this to prepare for another snowy day. The conditions, if you count out the chill, were perfect for him.
He closes his eyes as he breathes in the clear night air, which turns into the look of determination as he breathes back out. He primes his wings as he starts a progressively faster run down the wide dirt trail near the house. When he gathers enough speed, he jumps up into the air, and starts to flap his wings to gain more air. He could feel himself start to speed through the air, as he feels the euphoric feeling of flight course throughout his body. He could do nothing else, but to smile ecstatically. His gift of flight, which has be gone for so long, is finally back, and he absolutely loves it. He is now quite a distance from the cottage, and all he could do is laugh in utter joy.
‘My flight, it is back, and it feels so good!’
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I ended up remembering what the third forgotten task was. (I added that in because I actually forgot what it was IRL) I was going to *finally* see if it were safe enough to remove the bandage that covered the stab wound. While it has been some time since he first wore this item, and he is 90% sure that it is safe, he wanted to make sure. When I finally remembered to put that in, it was 1.4k in, and it was too late. 
>>709755 OBJECTION!
Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/phoenix-deskslam.gifSo you have the patented 'Pinkie Shotgun'. Now first thing I ask, where did you get such an item? From Pinkie Pie of course. Now if you had gotten the Pinkie shotgun from her, she must have either:
1- Gone though a portal and given it to you
2- Broke the fourth wall and given it to you or...
3- You went into Equestria to grab it.
As ridiculous as these sound, these are the only way you could have gotten it. Now this on it's own don't prove anything, but I have found out something about you which would make it impossible to kill me.
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/phoenix-document(a).gifYou see, you have had a profile on FIMFiction for 22 weeks, and two days, meaning that you must be a part of the 'brony' fanbase if you are this active after so long. And so knowing this, if you actually saw Pinkie Pie in real life, you would stop doing everything that you were doing, and follow her to the portal to Equestria.
And so, you see, if you had indeed gotten the 'Pinkie Shotgun' from the mare herself, you would not be able to kill me, because you would be attempting to go to the land of Equestria, which would occupy too much of your time.
Any questions?
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/edgeworth-smirk(a).gif>>709802 Cough, Internet Conection, Cought Equestria, COught Pnkie can break Reality, Cought, Now Answer My Question
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/phoenix-sweating(a).gifWait a sec...
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/phoenix-thinking(b).gifIf you have a portal to Equestria, then why are there no reported cases of small colorful ponies frolicking on Earth?
>>709825 Pinkie's the only other one who knows about the portal, and she Pinkie Pie promised not to use it. 
And before you ask why Equestria isn't confused about the existance of a human in their world, the portal turns me into a pony when I use it to go to that world, and a human when I use it to come back here. Keep an eye out for me in the background of some episodes! 
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/phoenix-sheepish(a).gifNO WAIT! Why does it said 'I've got a penis' on the second point?
Image: http://pinkie.ponychan.net/chan/files/thumb/132702392340s.png>>709832 It Seems I Have To Choose For You...
>>709829 OBJECTION!
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/phoenix-pointing(a).gifOkay, if Pinkie promised not to use the portal to Earth, tell me this...
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/phoenix-zoom(b).gifHow did she get the shotgun? Equestria isn't advanced enough to produce their own shotguns. Only muskets at best. If she didn't go to Equestria, then why does she have a gun.
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We'll continue this tommorow, because I need to get to bed now.
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>>711121 OBJECTION!
What you just said is a blatent contradiction, you cannot have possibly shot me, because...
I am still commenting on your status.
You see if you had indeed walked up to my front door and killed me, that would be plausible, but this leads me to another point...
How did you bring the gun into Australia?
You live in Canada, if I'm correct, where you are able to legally purchase your own shotgun, but according to the rules in Australia...
It is illegal for the general public to be in possession of a firearm. Now you can say that the police and army nay have their own firearm, and this is true, but there is a problem with that statement. They can only use sidearms, and a shotgun is not a sidearm. Tourists cannot bring weapons into our country, nor can they buy one here.
But if you somehow brought the 'Pinkie Shotgun' into Australia, I'm afraid that brings up another problem...
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/phoenix-handsondesk(a).gifPinkie must have crossed the portal. Now you argue that Pinkie had gotten her hooves on an Equestria made shottie, but your previous argument holds no water. You said 'It's Pinkie Pie. She has a freaking cannon. I highly doubt a shotgun would be out of the question.' Yes she does have a cannon, and I hold no arguments about that state, ubt that's just it. A cannon was first created around the early 14th century, whereas a primitive version of a shotgun was used during the 18th century, leaving a 400 year gap, which Equestria is in the middle of.
Explain this
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/phoenix-confident(a).gif>>711643 Allow me to refute your arguments, one by one. 
1. Guns In Australia
Pinkie Pie taught me how to access hammerspace. Since you can not detect the presence of objects in hammerspace, this made it impossible for anyone else to know I was in possession of a firearm until I removed it from hammerspace, just before shooting you. After this, I put the gun back into hammerspace, and nobody knew I did it, allowing me to return home safely. 
2. Pinkie Owning a Gun
I highly doubt Equestria is in the middle of a 400-year gap. As you may recall, the existence of robots and video games in Equestria has been confirmed, both of which were created long after the shotgun. Therefore, while unlikely, it would not be impossible for Pinkie to acquire a shotgun, modify it as she pleases, and then eventually give it to me. 
If I knew how to post Phoenix Wright gifs like you're doing, I would put one here. But I don't. So I'll just say 
Image: http://www.court-records.net/animationHD/edgeworth/Thumbs/Animation_004.gifI'l show you the errors of your ways
1- Hammerspace
Firstly dafuq? 
Secondly, it would be impossible for a human to break the fourth wall like that, since we have absolutely no magical energy. If she had taught you how to do this, then you must hae been in pony form, where you have dormant magical energy. Hammerspace on Earth is impossible.
2- Location
I may have already told you what country I live in, but I never told you where I live in Australia.
3- Equestrian Shotgun
Seems Legit. Have you ever noticed how skewed the technological side of Equestria is? It has been confirmed that they have robots and video games like you said, and yet, they do not have things such as washing machine, or pens. If there really were shotguns in Equestria, then I ask you, why didn't they use them during the changling invasion of Canterlot?
Image: http://www.court-records.net/animationHD/edgeworth/Thumbs/Animation_019.gif1: Hammerspace
Hammerspace means being able to pull things out of nowhere like Pinkie always does.
Anyway, when I turned into a pony, I obtained the dormant magical energy, which did not leave my body when I turned back into a human. That is how I can access hammerspace. However, that is the only magical thing I can do as a human, since as a pony I am a pegasus and not a unicorn.
2: Location
...true...
3: Equestrian Shotgun
Also true...
BUT HOLD IT! You see...you made a fatal assumption very early on. I merely played along to see how long this would go for...but you do not realize, apparently.
You only ASSUME that the weapon I used was a Pinkie Shotgun. It could have been any type of shooting weapon, from a regular pistol to Pinkie's party cannon to a bow and arrow. I could have used any of these, hiding them in hammerspace. The only real statement of mine you have proven false is that I know where you live.
You may have won for now, but you better watch out...making assumptions like that in the future will only end badly for you. You only won this time because of that one little detail. Everything else was false. 
>>711815 I'm not done yet.
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/franziska-zoom(b).gifFirstly, it is still impossible for a human to possess magic abilities, even with the logic you have used. The only possible way for a human to possess magic, is if a unicorn gives you some of their magic (like in Chapter 63) if you are in human form, but you already said that you turn into a pony while in Equestria.
Secondly, the fact that the Pinkie Shotgun may not even be a shotgun doesn't change anything.
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Image: http://www.court-records.net/animation/franziska-tisk(b).gifIf it was as heavy as the Party Cannon, you would not be able to get it out of Hammerspace
If it were any kind of firearm, it couldn't exist. (Same argument as the shotgun theory)
If it were a bow and arrow, it would have been too slow to load the arrow and shoot. I would have shut the door in your face.
It can't be a melee weapon, because you shot me.
Thank you.
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>>711943 As your associate said best 'Clack Clack. I Have A Pinkie Shotgun, Your Argument Is Invalid' Implying that it is indeed a Pinkie weapon. One does not simply call their weapon a Pinkie Shotgun coincidently.
And you never actually approached my house, and showed me your hammerspace, so I ask you this.
What proof do you have for the existence of magic? (For humans)
HOLD IT!
As I noticed in several episodes, there have been many references to modern day technology (Or around 500 years or something.)
For example, when Rainbow gets her pet turtle and says something around the lines of "He's sorta like a tank."
Tanks were only invented less than a hundred years ago, and at the same time they did use shotguns.
Also, in Hurricane Fluttershy, near the start is a (fairly old looking) projector.
These are also fairly recent, but are just under 200 years or so old.
My point is that they would have had access to this kind of technology, and Pinkie would obviously get one, because she is Pinkie Pie.
The reason the guards don't use them, is because they only need their swords, and only have to save the technology for war-type situations.
Don't worry Yoshi, I'm helping you (I hope)
>>711984 Associate? I think you're confused. I work alone. Whoever you think is my associate is obviously delusional.
As for the proof of the existence of human magic...well, look around you.
We've created devices that allow us to communicate with those in other countries, through typing or voice. We invented vehicles that travel faster than the speed of sound, and even into space, as well as developed technology that allows us to live in space for brief periods of time. We created television, computers, video games, Internet...you name it, we either created it, or have used it to create something.
That right there is human magic. It may not work the same way as unicorn magic, but it's still impressive. We went from a bunch of tree-swinging, banana-eating, armpit-scratching beasts into intelligent, capable, amazing humans that could do all this. That is the magic of humans. And where does the ability to do all of this come from?
A ball of gray mush inside a hollow bone structure residing within our heads.
That is MAGIC, like it or not.
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I can see a plausible reason behind this though. Equestiran technology, like I said before, is skewed, which is reason enough for the projector.
And the reason RD said he is built like a tank is a reference to video games. You see, a tank is a term for a unit that can soak up damage for the rest of the team, and with Tank's shell and all...
Let me put it this way, he cannot shoot tungsten rounds from the shell, so she much be talking about the video gaming kind of tank. This rules out the theory that it was a military tank, since there is no proof that they exist, and yet there is proof that video games do indeed exist.
>>712286 You did pretty good, though. The Phoenix Wright gifs were pretty funny, and you also did your research (knowing about the time of the shotgun's invention, etc.) while I just ran on stuff I saw in the show and some logic I did in my head. You'd be a pretty good lawyer.
...I surrender. ... Says the guy who's probably never solved a case in his life. Me? I've been in almost 50 Mock Trial court cases. And guess what? I am almost EXACTLY like Phoenix Wright, only I solve shit BY MYSELF, not with any tools or luck. I've made prosecutors almost have breakdowns, because I destroyed their 2-3 year winning streak.
Image: http://doulifee.com//Storage/aceatt/GyakutenHeroes/1-ani-phoenix-shakes-head.gifSilly kids these days, not knowing who I am...
Image: http://doulifee.com//Storage/aceatt/GyakutenHeroes/1-ani-phoenix-bashful.gif... Right. Just... Be careful of who you try to one-up.
>>718037 Right. 
Though honestly, I've never lost an actual argument with anyone aside from family members (aside from joke ones, like the one you just witnessed between Lyn and I), so provided I'm not arguing with people with actual law experience (which I actually have none of, Phoenix Wright games aside) I could probably beat them.
...I'm getting cocky again. I need to stop doing that. Always ends badly.
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Image: http://doulifee.com//Storage/aceatt/GyakutenHeroes/1-ani-phoenix-points1.gifYou don't have to stop being cocky, just try not to be too cocky.
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