AN : Yes this is mostly the same prologue as the other. I added the major events of the last story, just to get people caught up. I already have most of the first real chapter written up and will try to publish it soon. But with school starting tomorrow (Aug 13) It might take a little longer than expected. I know this is kinda disappointing to people looking forward to the sequel, but I promise I will get it up as soon as I can. I still urge people to check out the other story first. Things will make a lot more sense.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/36609/The-Conversion-Bureau%3A-New-Tactics

Oh and the pic is supposed to be Hudd and his group running through the night after escaping the bureau. It has that thing in the center and it fucking sucks I know. Ill try to find a better image and upload that because the one i'm using is just kinda embarrassing to me, but i'm not paying for a picture to use on a fanfic. Oh and if you favorite, please give it a thumbs up as well. It makes me feel good.

they should recruit slender man and bigfoot

Humans! HELL YEAH! This series kicks ass. Especially since I'm a human supremacist myself

YES!

hlf for the win

Ok so im done the first chapter. Ill edit it and publish it after school tomorrow. Oh and 17-0? Killstreak!

Ooooohhhh Shit. Celestia's gonna be pissed.

Holy snapping turtle on a stick...

*take a chair*

Dis gun be gud.

So far so good :D. No wait. So far so great, yah there we go.

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well looks like cellys

*puts on sunnys*

a little burnt up

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWE YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH

Yipee ki-yay, Celestia.

damn. my streak ended

Make moar or else I shall rain a thousand emoticons onto your profile page

>>10881521088152 THEY ONLY ALLOW TWENTY PER POST!!!! WHY?!?!?!????!?!?!?! :RAGE: CAN'T EVEN USE THAT EMOTICON. RAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!

"This story begins 12 seconds after he runs out of the Bureau."

Dude, I think that is the most interesting, unique, and exciting ending to a prologue for a sequel. A Moustache for you I enjoyed reading the first one and, while it was short, I defintively like the world your building here. Now I can't wait to read the next chapter, and am already looking forwards to more updates of this fic.

I can't wait to see what happens next, Celestia is no doubt pissed off as hell (likely because, the only reason I can think of being, that the bomb bit actually HURT Luna.)

This makes me think...I can theoretically see Celestia and Luna constantly having a sort of force field around them to deflect any sorts of projectiles that may come flying at them. To explain how that bomb bit worked against Luna, it wasn't a bullet, and perhaps the force field is projectile specific. I also now have to wonder if even a low-yield nuke would be able to take either one of them out (if nothing else, it would take out the ponies, which is my general game plan/theme in a "The ponies are going to win" sort of situation. Take as many of the ponies out as possible and wreck the planet for them.)

Ooooooohhh... this is good.

And Lefty's an idiot.

>>11679201167920 Well, he might just take it as he see's it, which in this case is, a pony handing off serum to a human. But yeah, Lefty is an idiot.

>>11682771168277

No, its a pony handing a white sheet of paper over to a human, not to metion "Hudd will like this" (paraquoted). If nothing else, he should either be assuming that something very interesting is going on, and Hudd will have some explaining to do, or that Hudd is also a traitor, in which case he should be even more angry.

>>11682891168289 ...Lefty > Logic. This is his brain. But yes, you are correct. Although, you would have to take into account how long he's been fighting against the ponies, so he would take anyone who i talking or being around a pony a traitor. But yes, you are correct.

>>11683151168315

I would say it's a combination of likely highly xenophobic racism, plus racial patriotism (as in the human race ), plus a long time fighting the ponies that could lead to that conclusion. now, if he was leading an entire legion of ponies armed with dart guns/conversion weapons, it'd make more sense.

I have to wonder what Twilight will actually think about the story jake wrote. Its certainly not what I would have written, which would have been an essay explaining what I define humanity to be and why its so important that I defend it. I can't honestly see Twilight taking much of anything major from his story as it was, unless I really really missed something along the way. Mostly, I just see it as reinforcing whatever views Twilight holds about humanity. I probably would have written down a list of books for Twilight to look for and read. (books written by humanitys brightest, as well as a few describing the Nazi's and WW2, with the hope she'd get the message I was painting.)

>>11679201167920>>11682771168277 Agreed. not good.

>>12261821226182 ....One word... Or actually, acronym. LOL.

>>12261871226187 I mean i like the story and the first one, but lefty assuming the worst after all they've been through is just stupid but... We'll see.

>>12262551226255 I still keep my statement, of "LOL"

What the hell man? Wheres that Chapter 3?!?!?!                

that pony is clearly the 'informent' lefty is a jackass

>>13225681322568 Yep. A total jackass

So far...Awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. your stories are always great :D. Keep up the good work and message me if you need anything... besides money, I'm flat broke at the moment owning nothing more than the clothes I wear, but anything else :D.

Well, It was nice knowing you Mint.

*runs away*

Let me quess. Applebloom and Scootalo where the spies?

Hmmmmmm, what up Twi?

Annnnnnd... here we go.

Hmmm...Twilight not wanting to watch...doesn't really make much sense to me, in this context. After all, she seems rather fine and okay with the idea of humans being converted, heck she even invented the paralysis darts. So why would she be upset with what Celestia did here? Also, I sense Applebloom and Scootaloo...though its interesting that they were humans. I have to wonder if AJ or RD knew about that, seems risky to be putting them in such a situation. (not to mention that I'd suspect they'd be very likely to break their cover)

Also, I'll be honest and say that the humans leaving their weapons behind was a major case of being handed the stupid ball. I don't care if they felt they were safe, when you've been fighting for survival for that long you should keep your weapons with you at all times, in case the unexpected ever happens.

As a start? Oh my, things are not going to go well for Mint.

... I would like to believe they wouldn't kill a person, without letting him explain his situation. Also, Hudd, you're a jackass. You left one of your men hanging just to save your petty little plan. I sure hope that this story clears up in the next chapter... because everything is so very muddled... so very, very muddled.

>>13496401349640 Yeah I'd have to agree with you there, but I guess that's what happens when you write story without having a set idea of where you want to take it. :/

I think I may slow things down in the next few chapters just to have things explained better.

>>13532841353284 >.< Author reply!

*Squee*

Well, anyways, It'd be nice for everything to be out in the open and explained, rather than jumping the gun. So far, this story/sequel is very enjoyable! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen, especially since you left off with a cliffhanger...

"I couldn't believe that they actually got him, now we were -1 again."

Goddamn it. This story is making me have a boiling hate for Celestia

Must rectify this! *goes to read fun stuff about Celestia*

As always, good chapter, little short, but a very good filler for the conversion process.

I shall await your next chapter good sir.

It was a bit strange how it began with regular characters, then went to italics

Also it was short, but I guess that means another chapter is approaching, right?

>>13824131382413

Opps. fixed it

... You make my rage boil, somehow.

OH NO its trollestia she is in the conversion bureau universe

Bloody Hell!

This is bloody brilliant! Short but Brilliant!

Kinky. So Celestia likes chains.

Oh, man. I hope Twilight rebels at some point.

>>15075391507539

Im wanting that too, it would be glorious

>>15091221509122 Or she dies. Along with Celestia, that is. They're both being truly ridiculous, and not even scientific anymore, they're just being torturers.

Luna...Celestia...Twilight...All MUST die

But seriously I hate Celestia in this story.

you guys know who we need right? http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=corvo&um=1&hl=en&newwindow=1&sa=N&rlz=1C1ASUT_enGB469GB469&tbm=isch&tbnid=6d3R52HPoQL59M:&imgrefurl=http://dishonored.wikia.com/wiki/Corvo_Attano&docid=MYE_F3zI0FSjCM&imgurl=http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120703154722/dishonoredvideogame/images/5/5b/Dishonored-Corvobase_V2.png&w=499&h=673&ei=cQmLUPHtLYaa1AXF7IHABg&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=308&vpy=153&dur=1209&hovh=261&hovw=193&tx=105&ty=94&sig=108785411522033099982&page=1&tbnh=136&tbnw=100&start=0&ndsp=18&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:0,i:86&biw=1241&bih=606 :D

>>15108341510834

at the very least she is beginning to see exactly what they are doing, whereas before she just blindly followed any order of the Princess

>>15129851512985 True, True.

>>15116191511619

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>>15110811511081 Nice black ops reference. But, I agree. The monsters must be slain. An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.

Uh, nuke. That seems like it would solve the problem.

so a story for how dart ponification started interesting...

hmmm....immune to paralyzing darts......Celestia said "she" about having one alone.......she has Ice......REBECCA YOU BETTER NOT BE A TRAITOR!!!

Well fuck, Ice better put a round in that fakers ass.

>>17547331754733

I second that motion

Ice V. Applebloom

Odds are 20 to 1 in Ice's favor

Scootaloo and Applebloom... now all we need is Sweetie Belle and we have CMC Human Converters... of course, they're all gonna end up dead one way or another...

I swear if the ponies keep getting the upper-fucking-hand, imma rage and intervene....With my mind.

Oh and I hope Luna joins the humans

Good thing Ice has that life-saving pistol tucked in his ass. Pop one in her goddamn mouth, Ice!

Yikes. It's going down now.

Lol no one wants Apple Bloom to win?

I swear, if Celestia isn't going to be beaten up by a human so badly that she feels how it is to be mortal; then I will dislike...

No seriously, I have seen so many good TCB stories getting ruined by turning Celestia into a invincible goddess, so that she can do whatever she wants to do and never gets the payback.

Just make her feel the pain she caused...

>>18720101872010

The very idea that ponies could last more than thirty seconds against humans is just laughable.

It was a great chapter, but there were a few grammatical errors. I hope you manage to fix those before someone who is far more stern comes around and trashes this delightful story.

YES! DROP HER!!!

"You should have listened to your friend."

He MUST say this line when he walks to her

I cannot wait for zis battle! It will be Uber-mazing!

Do not fuck with the Human race! Oh how I wonder what Applejack's and Rainbow Dash's reactions will be when they learn of the deaths of Scootalo and Applebloom. Make it hurt.

Applebloom got what was coming to her.

But I find that idea interesting though. Celestia turning ponies into humans to spy on the remaining resistance members is kinda like the Terminators from the Terminator (duh), imagine if they felt the true power of having hands, legs and fingers. Maybe ponies might turn into humans to make up for the losses?

Nah, I'm just getting my hopes up. Keep of fighting the good fight and don't stop until the last one drops.

They need this thing here:

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The fight against Applebloom was pretty bad. Overall the chapter was good, but that part sucked due to horrific logic. Ok so the pony is better in her new human body than the hardened survivor and can somehow beat him using martial arts adapted to a pony body that AB modified on the fly to deal with the human. Nope, nope, and nope. Try again because that makes no sense. Maybe just have Applebloom taze then kick him while he's down. Would make him being on the floor within convenient range of his shotgun more plausible. There's now way in hell she'd be able to pull off those stupidly fancy martial moves when she's been in the human body for less than a year. Heck she should be having a hard time balancing on two legs with knees that bend differently than her own.

Sooo......Any chance the humanification serum would work on Celestia? No, no. Never mind. Too hypocritical of humanity and it would kind of undermine how tough the story has made Celestia so far so that'd be a cop out defeat. Hmmm. What about that material that pierced Celestia's flesh might be analyzed of reproduced? You know so they can turn the tables on her? Not outright kill her (too quick after what she's done), but wound her severely enough to incapacitate her. Luna as well. Why? Because she's had doubts about Celestia's motivation and merely went along with it, thereby allowing the xenocide of the human race (Not genocide, xenocide. Willful destruction of an intelligent species) So Princess Luna is just as guilty as Celestia. She had all these opportunities to stop Celestia or at least try and talk her out of it and she's sat on her flank for the most part, though Luna has acted against humans in past chapters.

Ahh, TCB! You make me hate my favorite pony (Celestia) so damn much.

Well very interesting! Time for the humans to take back what is theirs. A custom HEMTT and an arsenal of weapons, *grabs popcorn* this is gonna be good. *Raises Pepsi can* here's to human's hopeful victory.

I could consistently nail deer, or even smaller animals like a fox

I'm sorry but I couldn't not laugh.

When will it be Celestia-killing time?

They both had it comin, I must say I love to see some good revenge in a story like this

>>19088761908876

I had the same thing in mind

>>19088761908876

Ah, the m65 recoiless nuclear rifle, good choice!

Its nice to know if the bullet is big enough that it will at least force an alicorn to back down.

All I can say is....Awesome :D

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It's gettin' real!!

Ok no. Seriously this is getting annoying, having the Princess's have a hide that poor mundane humans can't pierce, so we have to settle with knocking them down. Luna's internal organs should be freaking scrambled by now. You don't need to make the princesses nigh invincible to raise the tension.

>>22013112201311

We need one of these bad boys

My reaction when Celestia started coming to Jaco

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>>22013112201311 I concur, it kinda destroys the plot, because you already know what happens next when they are mentioned in the story...

Aside from that it's still a great story and one of the good TCB stories, so keep it up!

I'm with Zervziel on that one. That half-assed excuse that Apple Bloom likes martial arts in pony form does NOT justify her dishing out "reverse roundhouse kicks" (that term even leaves a bad taste in my mouth) at someone who, while not having a specific form, has experience in the ol' fisticuffs, when she's not even used to her new body.

If I get another one of these SoD-breakers, I'm downvoting this story.

ERRATA: The REC7 is a Barrett product, not a Beretta.

>>22029082202908  It might sound a bit morbid, but I love to watch nukes fuck stuff up.

>>22309172230917

You aren't alone, I do to

Also, I was wondering, wasn't there any nuclear equipped countries that resisted the Ponification in the end? "Terrified humans thought their governments would retaliate, but they were now too weak to be of any help." Surely some country has access to some nukes...rite?

>>22326442232644 I mean sure. Nukes don't go away, but without the proper people they can't be accessed. But who knows, that could change.

>>22328862232886

that could change?

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>>18883091888309 Yea. Here is the most plausible scenerio...

Princess Celestia: "I have deemed Humanity unfit to continue! I will force you all to get converted, to live in a better, cleaner world! There you will be rid of the violence that contaminates your hearts! Incase you are wondering, if your nations try to resist we will respond with deadly, unstopable force and will destory your resistence to us!"

>Several hours later... In Canterlot...

In the distance explosions could be heard, suddenly several burning chariots come rolling back acrossed the hill which was infront of the city, with no drivers. Suddenly hundreds of tanks and trucks of different sizes from all different nations comes rolling acrossed the hill. More Unicorns and Earth Ponies in their golden armor come charging out of the buildings and try to attack with their potions... only for them all to be gunned down in one volly from the 50. Machine guns.

Within minutes the most Royal Guard is slaughtered and buildings acrossed Canterlot are burning. Celestia and Luna are just about to vacate the castle when several tanks smash through the front gates and fire a massive barage of explosive shells at any tower possible. Killing any pockets of Royal Guards left. To finish it off several A10-Warthogs and AC-130 gunships fly over head and unleash an endless stream of incinidary bullets upon the last of the castle. Killing both Celestia and Luna.

>>22763792276379 Yep, that sounds about right. And that's probably best case scenario.