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Twilight Sparkle wakes up one morning, to find she's living with her family and is a filly again. She's not in Canterlot but in Ponyville though, and that's just the beginning of the changes. Like her new school, and the identity of the Headmare...
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This is adorable, I love it! I love all your stories.
Oooh. You have my interest.
That chapter title...would I be on the right track to say that there’s griffins off the starboard bow, starboard bow, starboard bow?
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Thank you. It there's one thing that I appreciate even more than readers, it's regulars.
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Maintaining it is my next goal.
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You'll see, Cpt...
I’m scared... but in a good way.
*Carefully presses tracking button*
Let’s see where this goes...
Not a bad start for a rather unique concept. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Adorable and Funny! Really a Good idea From you
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That's a compliment, right?
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I look forward to revealing more soon.
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Thanks. Ideas are just the beginning though, the execution of them is the key.
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Indeed. Looking forward to see how it goes. Had worked on something familiar once
Somethings fishy hear
Hmmm, not a bad start. Let's see where this one will go.
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Ya think?
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Hopefully somewhere unpredictable and interesting.
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It’s what you want it to be.....
Seriously though, I do like this, and I'm interested to see where it goes.
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I got it Twilight didn't eat breakfast
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I know what you meant, and thanks for commenting and reading. The way things are going with this story, I may be updating very soon...
I'm going to guess: Spike is running the school
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Never mind, I'm sure she can have a snack later.
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Wouldn't that be quite the promotion?
I’m gonna guess that another thing is the fact that Luna wasn’t banished.
Starlight Glimmer!!! What did you do?!
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so what's the update schedule on this one?
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I knew someone would say this. All I can say is it might be exactly what you think, or it could be the exact opposite...
I don't suppose you'd have any notion as to where i'd be in this parallel child like utopia.
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When I can find the time to write, but the more people enjoy the story, the more motivated I usually feel to add to it. And so far, it's going better than I expected, so hopefully very soon.
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I'm sure they'll be a place for you somewhere. After all, where would we be without Grogar?
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personally, i think you're the cause of the events in-story
pulled a full Aku on Twilight and her friends
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well i hope people keep enjoying it then
I have to see where this goes.
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That's the plan.
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Thanks for tuning in.
Given that unicorn magic doesn't seem to have verbal components, I'm guessing the former.
In any case, this is certainly an intriguing concept, though I feel you're going a bit overboard with Shining's obnoxiousness. Nostalgia goggles are one thing, but I can't see that ever qualifying as a BBBFF. Still, I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
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I think I was just trying to express just how competitive both were for the title of 'Sibling Supreme'. Judging by the flashbacks we got in Sparkle's Seven, things got pretty testy between the two of them during the many contests. Plus, as explained, Shining was nervous about a big test at soldier training that day. As soon as he thought something was up with his sister, he reverted back to being the doting big brother we generally know.
Anyway, thanks for reading and tracking. I hope you continue to stick with the story into the future.
Please continue with this, make it appropriate, and make proper spelling and grammar. I'M BEGGING YOU!
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It's rated E, so I hope it should remain appropriate. And as for the spelling and grammar part, if you mean my spelling of certain words like 'Armour', that's just the British way of doing it, which is what I'm used to. Hope that clears things up.
9734284 Not spelling but grammar really.
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Okay then. Tell me what I can correct, and I'll see what I can do.
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Awwwwwww..... i don't usually show my gratitude side but that.... that means a lot. Thank you.
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Wow, Grogar has a soft spot. Who'd have thunk it?
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HA!!!
(Ahem)
Long ago in a distant land, I, Grogar, the bell wielding master of darkness, unleashed an unspeakable evil. But a foolish Pony Princess wielding a magical horn stepped forth to oppose me. Before the final blow was struck, I tore open a portal in time, and flung her into the past where my evil is unstoppable. Now the pony seeks to return to the future and undo the future that is Grogar!.
How's that?
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Yes yes.
Just don't do a "Gabby Gums" and spread it around.
I've got an image to maintain.
And three backstabbing villains to keep an eye on.
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Your secret is safe with me. I'm surprised you know about your plotting partners in crime, though. Maybe you do know more than you're letting on in the show...
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Thanks. And keep reading to discover the answers to (most) of your questions...
yes! my new fav!!!
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Wow high praise indeed. Hope you enjoy the next few chapters just as much. And thanks for the follow.
Ooooh, nice opening chapter. Definitely tracking.
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Cheers.
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I will!!!👍
Ooh, what's this? I have to see where this goes!
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Good to hear.
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Well there's only one way to find out... keep reading.
this is all starlight or discord fault,
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Ya got my attention
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So many possible explanations, but only one answer.
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A WILD TWILIGHT APPEARS...
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Hurray! And I didn't even have to set off any fireworks.
You have my attention
Dis gun be goooooood!