interesting...

Hope this goes well... looks like an interesting concept and I would love to see where this is going to go.

I shalt be expecting another chapter.

Hmm, it has a lot of potential to be interesting depending on how things carry out. Don't think I've seen one where multiple characters are family like this. I'll keep an eye on it for now, enjoy my thumb all the same!

I'm interested, and yay for the Luna/Nightmare moment

Thus, for getting my attention...

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meh seen this before shall follow jic this takes a turn up originality alley.

I approve.

This reminds me of Mommy Nearest and Alicorn.

Cool.

Well, this is interesting. One problem though is the part where Celestia mentions Rarity's spell. It's not exactly as powerful or special as Twi and RD's abilities, so it looks weird putting it at the same level. Maybe if she said something along the lines of how she mastered the spell very quickly, it could work. This is just a comment/suggestion, of course.

Let's see where this goes

>>10736931073693 Specially considering that Twilight can do it too... Seriously mentioning something about her ability with her magic, like the amount of things she can levitate with precision and speed when dress making, would make a lot more sense. That, and the fact that Rainbow seems surprised for no reason at Twilight receiving a letter from Celestia, are the only problems I currently have with this fic. I mean, seriously Spike is a living mailbox for the correspondence between Celestia and Twilight, why would they be alarmed by a letter before knowing the content?

"Whoa, whoa, wait a second!" Rainbow Dash interrupted, preventing her friend from continuing any further, "a letter from the Princess?"

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Was about to make the exact same comment, lol.

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Hey, it's meeee~! Well, actually it's me the ChaoticMistress  who's writing this comment! I'm one of the two authors who helped create this story, haha. Anyway, you'll have to forgive us for that little blender. We actually wrote this fic a loooooooong time ago, and from what I can recall, this was MONTHS before Chrysalis--back when...actually I can't really remember.

Both me and my partner,The Rainbow Blunderbolt,  have only just decided to post this fic on FIMFiction.Net. If you have any questions, feel free to message me (I'll need to ask my partner if she's alright with this, though. So hold one with the questions! ).

Also, forgive me for my bad grammar. My friend's the one with the grammar, I'm the one with the details. In a sense, we're like Celestia and Luna!

Oh hai!

Another one of the authors just giving everyone who commented, favourited, and liked this, a big thank you. Thanks so much! We really appreciate it!

Also, any questions can be sent to either me or ChaoticMistress over there! Feel free to PM us!