Dun dun dunnnn

I like it. Do go on.

Poor Luna.

Oh man, this is gonna be good

Luna is going to be so scared. :( She can't control it.

Poor Luna =(. I hope things work out for her and manages to rid herself of her inner demons.

I bet Tia is going to chew him out.

This was a great if sad chapter. We see Luna's fillyhood and how much she loved her sister and then her mother scolding her harshly. I look forward to the next chapter.

Awww poor Luna :(

Amazing. I've read 2 chapters now and I'm really interested in those story.

First time Luna seemed to have something like schizophrenia. Nice theme, really.

So, good luck with those story!

That picture is just WONDERFUL!!!

Really good chapter. And it shows why Fluttershy was so afraid of Luna in "Luna eclipsed"

I hope RD is OK.

"Promise you'll never leave me?"

Celestia looked down at those giant filly eyes, still wet with tears. She craned her neck down and gave the purple lump of fur a kiss on the head.

"I promise I'll never leave you."

and then she sent her to the moon.

I had a feeling something like this was going to happen and it was going to be a trap hehe.

There is no way Nightmare Moon would just turn nice.

IT'S A TRA-...Too late

Short and sweet, gets us ready for whatever comes next.

I KNEW IT! Nightmare being meek and helpful felt so completely wrong that it had to be a trick of some kind.

No Luna. Don't leave us

NO NOT LULU!!!

Wait, the fountain ...

I love this chapter owo

I was all: NOO LUNA NOOOOOOO!!!

when she was taken underwather ;W;

Canterlot Luna Mode  Activated!

lets see what the council has in store for her!

Go Luna!

One error I'd like to point out. "Thy" means "you". Thou art using it as if it means "me" or "my".

Great ending to a great story :D

Great story! An appropriate tale of our favorite night princess. I applaud your work.

In my opinion this is the best fanfiction I've ever red. It's a pity that isn't as much famous as for example "My Little Dashie", which was so bad for me.

Linds is right, it's a shame that your story is not appreciated, others less better stories coming in to the "feature box" and this not? That just makes no sense.

as i sparklenomore i delare that celestia is sent to the SUN