Wow. Is this actually happening?

I shall have to read and see. And maybe if it's good enough I shall have to let the RT team know. :P

Oh god, Ponyville's doomed.

It's funny, so I'll look forward to more.

Just tone down the absolute Gavin-hate, and watch out for mixing up your past and present tenses.

I believe Twilight and I have something to say...

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Well, Micheal Is a Brony.

Em... I have low knowledge of the Achievment Hunters so, this is a bit wierd.

GOD DAMN IT, SOMEONE BEAT ME TO THIS.

Oh, well, at least I have a guinea pig.

Firstly, I'm reading the first paragraph, and I can't help but feel that the characters are just way too shallow. Twilight Sparkle searching for a spell book? Spike possibly off to woo Rarity? Everyone hating on Gavin? Although the latter's true to an extent, they're likened to more of the vitrolic best buds type. They have their love-hate moments. But this is just flanderization. Tone that down, and you'll most likely be okay.

Secondly, I can't say I'm too impressed with how this started off in terms of plot. Twilight's looking for a book to summon smart people. I'm pretty sure she wouldn't be stupid enough to summon total strangers for questions when she could've just asked her most trusted mentor Princess Celestia. In addition to that, there's the risk of letting said strangers run amuck and cause chaos in Ponyville. Although I'm pretty sure the Achivement Hunter crew wouldn't run that way, Twilight wouldn't just shake that possibility off right away. So, in the event that Princess Celestia finds out about it, there's going to be a scolding or even some form of punishment.

Other than that, this story seems quite promising. Looking forward to more!

Holy shit! You MUST continue this!

Even if i don't know very well the achievement hunters But anyway!

This is gonna be SO AWESOME!

I demand more.

HO MY GOD BEST FUCKING IDEA EVAR

but first I shal read it

Holy fuck yes! MOAR

You had me at "achievements".

You have captured my attention.

YES! Let it begin!

I like where this is going... but please tone down the Gavin-hating, it seems a bit excessive, even for Achievement Hunter. (Also, I get what Gavin says, most of the time)

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!

Favored without reading it yet for simple reason: Rooster Teeth gang

To me, Michael is famous for the RageQuit series. Can't wait to see him in action in the land of peace and happiness. It's gonna be flippin' great.

this story is gonna be filled with so much win

But isn't Jack a brony too?  Wouldn't he be somewhat excited?

Very realistic

Contact the Internet Box Staff and have them read it on a podcast.

If one of the bronies on the AH team read this...  

If I remember correctly in a stream they did someone was holding an Applejack figure and Micheal said she was the worst pony But yeah a ton of guys at Rooster teeth are into Mlp. For those who don't know how much Micheal is into MLP watch this, so awesome /)^3^(\

*Edit Oh this is great Gavin is just the emotional and physical punching bag XD

Fuck my read later list is getting long...

>>10681501068150 jacks not a brony

Poor Kara and also, why do I sense hypocrisy when Twilight says that?

I actually saw their LP of Mari0.

>>10682301068230 His loss.

this gonna be good

hmmm, my favorite videogamers on the internet in a crossover fic with ponies...you have my attention. also, thank you for writing this idea into a fic, instead of just trashing the idea, thinking that its too far-fetched (even though it is a bit out there)

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Two words: Rage Quit

This. This is... just...

I'm reading this now, not later.

*EDIT*: I thought this would be a serious fic, but I suppose not.

What does make them great achievers? Because they hunt for them! Forever...cause we make them....cause they are our slaves....forever

DON'T DISAPOINT ME OR I WILL MAKE YOU WISH YOU CAN DIE!

*see story listed on previews*

YESH! YESH!

I have one thing to say about this fic,

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I love you so much for making this. I agree with everyone else, please tone down the Gavin hate. Even though I love it when they hate on Gavin, it seems a bit much.

Also, hasn't the Twilight messing up a spell bit been done to death? She's looking for Spike, she doesn't need to summon someone from another planet.

But I do look forward to see where you take this. Disappoint me and you're dead.

Luna has to be a gamer in this fic. She has to.

Bro... I fucking love you. All the homo.

FUCK YEA!!! make sure you get gavins swearing right...oh bullocks!!

Moar!  The Great and Powerful Trixie demands it!

Well, Equestria's fucked.

Rage Quit: Ponyville     I can see it now...

Meh. It stands to be a vaguely funny premise, but the writer's craft is weak, frankly. Unfortunately, that takes away from it a bit.

Perfect example: Twilight made a mental note to increase Spike's chores when she sees him again. She figured he was out trying to woo Rarity. Twilight never really understood why he thought that would work. She is a pony and he is a dragon!

That's one...two...three tense changes. One of them in the same sentence. That and the storytelling's a little blah, and the AH guys' characters are off... you get the idea.

This fic will either be great or absolutely pathetic. Hard to tell...

Please, for the love of everything, PUT. MIKE. KROON. IN. THIS.

.. I mean, y'know, if that's okay.

FUCKING AMAZIN!!!

WE DEMANDS MORE, NOW!!!!!!! if youwhouldn´t mind, that is....

Someone send this to Michael right now.

>>10677721067772>>10687621068762 You pretty much some up how I feel about this.

>>10688511068851

done and done

well Equestria is bucked beyond belife and michail i think is going to do  rage quit of well RAGE again cept this time he will be as happy as can bucking be. Gavin is going to have to sound like such a gufumpil dumski that it nearly destroys all of reality.

oh wow, funny them beating gav seeing as its happened a lot more lately

This is not going to end well.

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>>10677721067772 Yeah it isn't written that great, but it's the idea behind it.  I can't fucking wait for next week's podcast.

>>10689181068918  Sweet!  Next week's podcast is gonna rock I can feel it.

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I Detect Shenanigans Ahead...

i cant belive someone is doing this i

I laughed.

Haven't seen anything yet, but watching for potential...

(Sees title)

Suddenly interested.

I can see it now...Rage Quit: Equestria

oh man, instafav xD

this is hilarious >:D

This is...just. This. Okay.

>>10678521067852 WUT. Youtube them. :)

I LOVE ROOSTERTEETH!  And I love this fic, and horrified to be left in such suspense.  Following!  

i can see michael having a good time in equestria

I have read it, and although it's not the best writing I've seen... It's also not the worst. So I am reserving judgement until I can see more.

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...This is fucking awesome!

Quick, quick! Someone shoot a link of this to Michael!

I'd like to see where you're going with this. The premise is fucking fantastic, and the characterization is at acceptable levels of flanderization. You just need to work on your pacing and prose.

>>10676321067632

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Achivement unlocked: 'Featured in the featured box'

As for the fic; looks funny; but i'll read l8r

...maybe.

Good idea, not fantastic execution. Seemed a bit choppy, rushed, and sentence structure needs some work, too. But, better then a lot of the stuff on here. Overall?

>>10677721067772 Well, if you re-read the spell's description, it's supposed to summon the greatest achievers in the universe. However, I find myself agreeing with your analysis somewhat.

Dammit, I was going to do this.

Ah well, faved.

>>10695541069554

Oh god. The DarkWing has commented and faved my story. THE DARKWING. The creator of My Little Caboose: Blue Is Magic.

Dude you are like a huge inspiration for me. If it weren't for My Little Caboose I don't think I'd have the courage to do this. Man the pressure here is crazy. Hopefully I can make this the story everyone is hoping for it to be.

we have to spam the Internet box with this

My initial reaction to this fan fiction

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I haven't heard of "achievement hunters" but this sounds amusing...

but the viewers were begging them to and if they ever wanted it to stop it had to be done.

WRONG.

PLAYING OF MINECRAFT ONLY INCITES MORE BEGGING FOR PLAYING OF MINECRAFT.

This will be either be totally wrong about each persons personality or it will be totally correct.

But I liked the first chapter, keep it up.

>>10677721067772

I know you might say I'm jumping to conclusions here, but this probably won't improve. Notice how he pretty much wrote JUST ENOUGH to be able to submit the fic, and by the praise he's already getting here, he may not think he has to improve anything.

Greatest achievers... Fuck.

Yeah I know. My pacing is pretty terrible. I promise I'll try to get better with that. I also have plenty of clever ideas ahead I just don't want to rush into it so these chapters are kind of like a set up for what is to come. Hopefully I can get better at writing while still being able to keep people interested in this. Again thank you all for the support and getting me in the feature box. Never thought that would happen. Enjoy!

>>10699611069961 Ugh. It's why I responded when the first chapter was put out, so that it wouldn't be too late to change anything. Just this once, I hope you're wrong... >_<

Likin' the story so far. Ready to read the next chapter! In other words, my body is ready for chapter two :) Also, FIRST besides author.

EDIT: good chapter. There weren't enough spelling/grammar mistakes for me to notice them without looking specifically for them, so that's good. The only thing I would have changed is the length of the chapters. You kind of made up for that with the two chapters in one day, but the anticipation that i'm getting from the short length is killing me. And why are Geoff and Jack so annoyed at the fact that they're in Equestria? Even so, the others that high-fived and cussed over it a second ago aren't saying anything while Twilight attempts a spell to make their fantasy short-lived?

2ND EDIT: Whoa, this story is blowin' up!!!!! You've been in the featured box for like 2 DAYS STRAIGHT!!! Luv dis.

two in one day! hooray!!

you get a mega bro-hoof ENJOY

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Yay

I love this. However, I agree that the pacing is... not great. In addition, while the grammar isn't BAD, per se, it does seem to lack elements that could make the story flow a little better- for example, the use of semicolons, more commas, and better adverbs/adjectives.

I hope your writing improves as the story goes on, because the premise is great. Also, try to make Ray and Michael more realistic- they would be WAY more exited and probably start a huge argument with Geoff and Jack.

>>10694581069458 How about this?

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Man, Geoff is a dick.

>>10685071068507 Luna Game? I'm scared now.

good job

This story pleases me.

michael needs a bigger part

but otherwise it's good

>>10700241070024 i literally read the first chapter an hour ago, then i get an update saying the next chapter was released.

>>10700861070086 I'd be pissed too if I was dragged away from my wife and children who depend on me.

>>10701651070165 Doesn't matter. Dicky McGee, Geoff is he.

Ya I'd probribly react almost the same way as Geoff...but I'd be flattered to be called the greatest achiever in the universe