look at all that there thar grammar!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

see...I told you I would comment on dis'n. Hmm...I should prolly read this now eh? Ya I prolly should

Well, this was surprisingly good. Up voted and tracked.

I'm curious to see where this Gary Stu is going.

Will have to be one hell of a story to make it at least plausible....

The premise seems interesting.

Do go on. I'm curious to see how will he live up to those 300 or so years. And how the buck he got so amazing during that time.

Damn dude... that story was actually very well put together. Good job.

Thanks! I'm currently finishing up chapter 3. I'm glad I posted part one of it, it kind of felt to me like I had the first 2 chapters leading up to it...

Well.... that was easy.

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Hrm, you're right...I rushed that last fight a bit. I'll have to work on that. Thanks for the input!

The story is alright, but the grammar.... not so much. Needs to be revised for cleanup

Thanks, I'll work on that before I put out another chapter