Prince Furo
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Okay, A/N time!
This has been something I've been working on for a while, now. I got the initial idea when playing in my high school pit orchestra. (I play trombone. The musical we were doing was West Side Story. c:) I came across something called a 'flutter tongue', and all I could think about was Fluttershy whenever I saw it. xD So, yeah! I hope you enjoy. ![]()
Also if anyone's curious to see more of what a real flutter tongue is or sounds like, check this out:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flutter-tonguing
There you can see more of what it is, and hear some samples of what it sounds like.
(Also, the cover image is from Google. c:)
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Oh you little sly BASTARD Pinkie Pie...
Thumbs up, DEFINITELY. Perfectly original, flawless grammar, just perfect in every way. Even characterization. WIN.
Short, sweet, great job catching the personalities, no grammar mistakes, and it had my attention the whole way through. Very nice! ![]()
It's harder to flutter-tongue on brass than woodwinds... Muhaaahaa Clarinet wins. Oh and if you think that song is hard...
Adiago and Tarentella by Cavalini
Never could roll my tongue into any useful orientation. This made certain foreign languages difficult, along with ... well, it made certain foreign languages difficult. Let's leave it at that.
Meanwhile, let there a yay
for the storyline so far.
Delicious. I don't know if I can level any useful "critique" or feedback beyond that considering how short it is, but I'll say this: I'm grinning now, where I was merely smiling five minutes hence.
Well. Almost grinning. Open endings are death and demons to me, but fine. It's not ambiguous, so I'm gonna force myself to be content and go look at some FlutterPie art now.
Thank you for writing this and for brightening up my day!
I geeked out while reading this. Band related things + ponies = my brain exploding. Brass players ftw!!! Btw, I play the trumpet and good job on picking pinkieshy. We need more pinkieshy ships in fimfiction
Shipping? Check
One of my headcanon pairings? Check
Nerd reference? Check
Pinkie being an evil, conniving bastard? Check.
This is amazing. And just in time for me to start band camp next week.
Well I can't say I didn't see that coming, given the title and the preview image. But still, a delightful little story. Tiny, but incredibly sweet, like a cupcake. Have a watch, I'd like to see what you come up with in the future. ![]()
That was super cute and grammatically quite good! :D
Here, have a happy lyra!
I like it,the ending was funny and I totally did not see that coming.I also liked how almost half of the entire story simply described a kiss.
I knew it! Good little story.







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