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Prince Furo 6609

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    Prince Furo's Stories (6)

    • Fluttertongue
      When Pinkie Pie has a problem, she goes to her dear friend Fluttershy for help.

      1,523 words · 1,220 views · 100 likes · 4 dislikes
    • "Hey, Bon-Bon!"
      Lyra just can't wait to share her new thoughts and ideas with her best friend, Bon-Bon.
      1,061 words · 1,079 views · 71 likes · 3 dislikes
    • The Fruits and Flowers We Share
      When the relationship of Cheerilee and Berry is outed, it could cost Cheerilee her job... or more.
      1,685 words · 269 views · 24 likes · 0 dislikes
    • My Dear Celestia...
      No, I'm not confused, evil, or chaotic. I'm just me.
      1,001 words · 556 views · 21 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Dear Princess Celestia, It Gets Better
      1,097 words · 595 views · 52 likes · 8 dislikes
    • Smile, Smile, Smile...
      2,762 words · 516 views · 20 likes · 3 dislikes
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    Pinkie Pie has been recruited by Princess Celestia herself to fill in for a sick tuba player for the upcoming orchestra concert in Canterlot. But when she's having trouble with some of the music, the only one who can help her is... Fluttershy?

    First Published
    10th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    10th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 42 )

    #1 · 44w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Okay, A/N time!

    This has been something I've been working on for a while, now. I got the initial idea when playing in my high school pit orchestra. (I play trombone. The musical we were doing was West Side Story. c:) I came across something called a 'flutter tongue', and all I could think about was Fluttershy whenever I saw it. xD So, yeah! I hope you enjoy. :twilightsmile:

    Also if anyone's curious to see more of what a real flutter tongue is or sounds like, check this out:

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flutter-tonguing

    There you can see more of what it is, and hear some samples of what it sounds like.

    (Also, the cover image is from Google. c:)

    :rainbowkiss:

    #2 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Oh you little sly BASTARD Pinkie Pie...

    Thumbs up, DEFINITELY. Perfectly original, flawless grammar, just perfect in every way. Even characterization. WIN.

    #3 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1063283 When reading comments like this, I can't help but grin. :pinkiehappy: Thank you!:heart:

    #4 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Short, sweet, great job catching the personalities, no grammar mistakes, and it had my attention the whole way through. Very nice! :pinkiesmile:

    #5 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1063355 Thanks! It means a lot Cx

    #6 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    As a fellow brass player, I approve :pinkiehappy:

    #8 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    #9 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    It's harder to flutter-tongue on brass than woodwinds... Muhaaahaa Clarinet wins. Oh and if you think that song is hard...

    Adiago and Tarentella by Cavalini

    #10 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Never could roll my tongue into any useful orientation.  This made certain foreign languages difficult, along with ... well, it made certain foreign languages difficult.  Let's leave it at that.

    Meanwhile, let there a yay :yay: for the storyline so far.

    #11 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Delicious. I don't know if I can level any useful "critique" or feedback beyond that considering how short it is, but I'll say this: I'm grinning now, where I was merely smiling five minutes hence.

    Well. Almost grinning. Open endings are death and demons to me, but fine. It's not ambiguous, so I'm gonna force myself to be content and go look at some FlutterPie art now.

    Thank you for writing this and for brightening up my day!

    #12 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1063678 Trumpet, a bit of Trombone also.

    #13 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I saw what you did there Pinkie. You little rascal :rainbowlaugh:

    #14 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1063775 I'm glad you liked it! :twilightsmile: Yeah, I agree with you on the open ending part, in a lot of cases they can be uber annoying. But I can never seem to come with any better endings. ;_;

    Thank you for brightening up my day by commenting. C:

    >>1063854 Awesome! I've always wanted to try out Trumpet. :pinkiesmile:

    #15 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I geeked out while reading this. Band related things + ponies = my brain exploding. Brass players ftw!!! Btw, I play the trumpet and good job on picking pinkieshy. We need more pinkieshy ships in fimfiction

    #16 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1064082 Hell yeah! -brohoof-

    I'm actually not the most fond of this ship, but I figured for the whole 'fluttertongue' idea it would work best with Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie. :twilightsmile:

    #17 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1064088 I once called fluttershy fluttertongue so it reminded me of that memory. Yay band geeks!!!

    #18 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Pinkieshy, awesome! Sad part...waiting for the next part. Merp :fluttercry:

    #19 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1064705 This was a one-shot, heheh. :twilightblush: Glad you liked it, though. :D

    #20 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Shipping? Check

    One of my headcanon pairings? Check

    Nerd reference? Check

    Pinkie being an evil, conniving bastard? Check.

    This is amazing. And just in time for me to start band camp next week.

    #21 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well I can't say I didn't see that coming, given the title and the preview image. But still, a delightful little story. Tiny, but incredibly sweet, like a cupcake. Have a watch, I'd like to see what you come up with in the future. :pinkiesmile:

    #22 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1064855 Thanks! Have fun at band camp :D

    >>1064874 Thank you kindly! I hope I don't dissapoint. :twilightsmile:

    #23 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1064918

    Unlikely. Take a look at my favourites list sometime. I'm a sucker for cutesy romancy things.

    #24 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    That was amusing.

    Pro'ably shouldn't be rated 'Everyone', though~

    #25 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Bravo. Bravo. :pinkiesmile:

    #26 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1065534 I wasn't sure what to rate it, but I thought 'everyone' would be okay because the only thing they do is kiss. :twilightblush:

    >>1066747 :twilightsmile:

    #27 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1066793 The Fluttertongue is a symbol of pure awesomeness. :yay:

    #28 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1064729 No next part ? :raritydespair: But...Oh, ah well. It was a cute story. Too bad their isn't another part though.

    #29 · 44w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Pinkie you sly pony. :pinkiehappy:

    #30 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1066793

    If it were a simple kiss? Sure. Given that it's a make-out session described in erotic detail, I'd say a slightly higher rating is called for.

    #31 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    That was super cute and grammatically quite good! :D

    Here, have a happy lyra!

    #32 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1072241 I don't think it's thaaaaaaat detailed, haha. :twilightblush: It was more of Fluttershy's reactions to it, and her like, freaking out and stuff. But if someone else complains too, I'll change it. :raritywink:

    >>1072329 :twilightsmile: Thank you!

    #33 · 44w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1073261

    PS: I think the rating is fine :o?

    #34 · 44w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I like it,the ending was funny and I totally did not see that coming.I also liked how almost half of the entire story simply described a kiss.

    #35 · 44w, 23h ago · · ·
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    #36 · 42w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was cute :rainbowkiss:

    #37 · 42w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1138527

    Thank you!! :yay:

    #38 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    nice story. made me smile.:pinkiehappy:

    ohh and silly pinkie. :pinkiehappy: hehe! lol!

    #39 · 38w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #40 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    High quality, amusing, and overall adorable.

    Cited, tagged, and noted. Thanks!

    >>1062888

    Do you mind If I use this as a reference?

    #41 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1618929 Go ahead! For what, though, might I ask?

    #42 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    For a shipping research paper.

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