For the record... First.

And also, it may be beneficial to break the story up into sections of perhaps about 10k or so. When a story the equivalent length of a decent sized book appears all in one page, it can be a little hard to remember one's place.

Other than that it seems to be a great story. Keep up the great work!

>>10684621068462

Thanks for the comment. As for the chapters issue, I'll go through and edit it but it'll take a bit of time. In hindsight, I suppose it's something I should've done before submission.

Sorted the story out into chapters appropriately, I do apologize for anyone that may have their current reading interrupted. It's really a fault on my own part.

>>10684791068479 No need. Just leave them. They're relatively tiny, actually. Big chapters are in the 25k region.

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Well, it was 96k words, but I split up into chapters anyways because it would be easier to find something later if i needed to or if someone else needed to. Plus, when I noticed that there isn't exactly a break between pages, I felt it would be easier to read in the long run.

That is crap! Only 1000 views! Their are allot of people who just brush fanfics aside be a use of its content! Especially if its adventure! That really gets me mad...