Well, damn. At first I was like: Alicorn OC? Dafuq? Then I read the description:

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After reading:

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That, good sir, was beautiful. Take all my thumbs.

Like, Fav, Thumbs Up, 5 stars, 10/10, 100% genius.

You, dear Sir, have portrayed the relationship just gloriously.

That was beautiful. You portrayed Luna and Tia perfectly. Cery well written. I look forward to more of your stories in the future.

First, I was like

Then, I was like

Then, I was like

That was amazing. A few grammar things here and there that if you yourself have read through the story can find and fix them, but other than that great job!

>>10613701061370

I'm glad you gave it a chance than.

>>10616661061666

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I was actually afraid that their relationship might seem off.

>>10617531061753

Thank you. I really tried to make them seem in character to some degree.

I appreciate your interest in my writing. Keep an eye out, I would like to try to get something up, whether it be a story or a chapter, every week.

>>10621431062143

I'm going to assume that is good.

>>10623601062360

Arg, I know. I definitely have to re read it and make some corrections. Thank you for reading though.

>>10637421063742 I'm glad I did too It deserves a lot more views and upvotes than it got!

>>10637961063796

Thanks, that means a lot to me.

>>10637421063742

Oh, definitely.

I have a soft spot for Luna/Celestia fics. This is one of my new favorites. Well done :3

It could use some minor spelling and grammar revision, but overall, I liked it.

Also, Snuggles Fluff was a surprisingly refreshing OC. I can usually predict how stories are going to end, but yours threw me off twice.

Thoughts:

the first scene started well, but then got to quick

too much telling and not showing

the meeting with snuggles was a little too awkward.

when luna talks to snuggles, the paragraph should be a little more descriptive and less to the point.

their speech manner sounds too informal

the reveal was too text-book like.  let's get more of luna's thoughts on it

However, I liked your idea.  I'm glad I read it.  And sorry I took forever.