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Yes you read it right, this is indeed a pony parody of Monty Python. Prepare yourself for randomness.

I may make more of these depending on whether or not this get good reception.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 55 )

I haven't even read it yet and I'm going to track this.

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I'm guessing that's a good thing.

Ice

2.5 for We do hereby apologize for the small interruption in the story. The author responsible has been sacked and banished to the moon. The story will now continue as planned and another 2.5 for We apologize again for the continuing interruptions. The ponies responsible for sacking the author, who has now been shot through the head, have now been sacked and banished to the moon. The story shall now be completed at the last minute and at great expense with a new author.Just kidding but that was an amazing story funny as well

This was great, it's one of my favorite skits.
Do the one bit about the "transvestite Lumberjack song," staring Caramel.
"I never wanted to be a farmer anyway, I wanted to be a lumberjack. Leaping from tree to tree as I float down the mighty rivers of Braytish, Equestria! "
Peace Out.

How dare you not make a Spanish Inquisition sketch first! :flutterrage:

A few days in the comfy chair should fix that...

Love it!

Now, if you'd kindly write some more...

"Trouble at the library, one of the crossbeams has gone out of skew on the trendle" -Spike
"What on Earth is that suppose to mean?"-Twilight
"I don't know, Pinkie Pie told me to come in and say that there was trouble at mill thats all! I didn't expect that kind of Spanish inquisition!"

"My hovercraft is full of eels." My god this has potential to be the most fun skit comedy fic EVER!
Oh. please do a Benny Hill one too, please. Though that one would be a little harder to do cause a lot of the jokes come from mime and slapstick.

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You know, I have never actually seen Benny Hill.

65455

You know, I have never actually seen Benny Hill.

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Now the problem with that is that it would suggest that Caramel is gay. i do not go with gay Caramel.

CaramelxApplejack and CaramelxBonBon forever.

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NOPONY EXPECTS THE SPANISH INQUISITION!

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It can be anypony really as long as they suck at or hate their job. I just think, it'd be funny. Or you can do the dead parrot scene involving Fluttershy.

Goddamit now all I can think about is spam. And its 1:00 am, not a good time to be cooking spam.

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Then I guess I did good then

You left out 'Spam, spam, spam, egg and spam.'

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But ponies don't eat eggs.

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Yes they do. Both Applebuck Season and Sisterhooves Social confirm this.


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I was thinking the same thing. It would also have to involve Philomena, of course.

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Spam, spam, spam, spam, spam, Spammity-Spam, wonderful spam.

This chapter is, I think, less effective than the first. It's less an Equestrian innovation and more of a carbon copy. Since the proper cadence and comedic timing is hard to get across in text, you really need to up the characterization to draw us in; that's why Spam worked with Rarity and Spike, because their unique characters were adding something to a sketch we've all heard a thousand times before. We don't have that extra element here, so this one falls flat.
...sorry, nearly slipped into Fancy for a second there.:ajbemused:

And yet you haven't done Spanish Inquisition???

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Well, it's kinda hard to give characterization to a pony that didn;t get any sort of development. But I promise to make improvements in the next chapter. An unexpected and inquisitive chapter.

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NNNNNNNNNNNNnnnnnnnnnnnnnOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooo pony expects the spaneighsh inquisition!

Thank you all for the reviews, they really motivate me to keep writing.

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Nah, there are writers way better than me. Writers like Kkat, Somber, Buttersc0tchSundae, etc.

76423 perhaps, but that doesn't mean that this isn't a very well written story and that you're not awesome. i've read your other stories as well and i really like your style.
so once again: you're awesome!

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Hmm, guess I underestimate my skills too much.

THIS IS AN EX PARROT!!!!:twilightangry2:
never gets old

*spit take* MONTY HOOFTON'S GALLOPING CIRCUS?!?!?! (monty python's flying circus?) if it's anything like it's namesake i will probably have a lack of a brain soon, i am somewhat afraid to read it because i want to keep my brain, meh whatever

O.O *eye twich* *BOOM* there goed my brain *flop*

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Nurse Redheart, get this man a new brain, STAT!!

256474 And thank you very much for making it exist.

good to see this story up and running again.

Oh how I enjoy monty python skits, they are pretty good with ponies involved. Good job :twilightsmile:

This was pretty awesome, I like how you produced a new skit based on the old one. Good work I really enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

I actually like the conflict that Octavia and Vinyl scratch had there. It was a very entertaining read that also managed to poke fun at the fan fics that ship Octavia and Vinyl together. Well done :twilightsmile:

Waaaait a minute.

I always thought that dead parrots were of the Norwegian (Neighwegian?) Blue variety, and pined for the fjords?

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Pining for the fjords? What kind of talk is that?

So I love Monty Python and I just saw the title... I'm going to favorite this and read it later because reasons.

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