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    Flame6666's Stories (4)

    • Raising a Human in Equestria
      I don't know what's going to happen :)

      20,367 words · 8,087 views · 735 likes · 25 dislikes
    • Pony Confessions
      This is Dominick, Dominick works at a five star restaurant called, The Pony Palace.
      4,044 words · 661 views · 28 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Making the Best of it
      When a man with a shell as thick as the planet is sent to Equestria, will he change or not?
      22,572 words · 1,092 views · 33 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Making the Best of it...Again
      When a little girl with a heart full of anger is sent to Equestria, will she change or not?
      7,944 words · 697 views · 14 likes · 2 dislikes

    The earlier chapters are currently being rewritten by The Special Pegasus.

    So then, what would happen if a human baby ended up and was raised in Equestria?

    Will they be a normal everyday worker? Will they be a Celestia Knight? Will they take over the world? Will they speed up Equestrias technology level with good old human ingenuity?

    Honestly I have no idea!

    So that's why I need YOUR help! You, the readers will decide their personality, their dreams, their... everything really. So lets get started!

    Cover art made by ForestOfSpring

    First Published
    16th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Sep 2012

    Comments ( 837 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I'd say Fluttershy and Kid Genius. Give him a good ol Sonic Screwdriver and he'd be set to go :D

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well Fluttershy is the most fitting to be taking care of anything, so her.

    Personality , kid genius I guess. As long as he's not making new inventions by age 5 or something.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #4 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Make him a problem child that would be fun :trollestia:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and Kid Genius :yay:

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    1. Fluttershy

    2. Normal

    Also, it's 'Applejack,' not 'Apple Jack.'

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    kid genius

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Kid Genius with Fluttershy :twilightsmile:

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Kid Genious + Applejack! By the way, misspelled barn in there somewhere. I saw bran in its place.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and little angel

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    applejack and kid genius. he'd confuse her and fit in with the crusaders. lol dictionary

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I would personally love to see something like this.

    Kid Genius

    Fluttershy

    Somehow has magical abilities with his hands glowing in place of a horn.

    To counteract being brilliant and magical so he isn't absolutely perfect I would hope for this for his personality (roughly).

    Wise beyond his years.

    Plays the occasional prank and defends with pure logic similar to twilight in a way.

    Generally goofy but not to the extent of pinkie by any stretch of the imagination.

    Rock solid in any choice he makes.

    Issues with having magical ability like any pony else but unable to get a cutie mark.

    Just to name a couple.

    Also OP. Absolutly BRILLIANT concept with the interactive storyline here. I cannot wait to see more.

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Rarity and problem child

    OR

    Applejack and little angel

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy Kid Genius

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and Problem Child.

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1099756

    The ability to use some form of magic is actually a perk you guys can pick about 2/5ths way through the story and depending on the choices you guys make is what he can have.

    Also remember the kid is only 1 and is still growing, so there is plenty of time to "customize" him as the years go by.

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Rarity and genius!!!

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    my chose well be Fluttershy and his personallty Little angle.

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :yay:

    Kid genius

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and kid genius

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    You know i think i am going to sit back and enjoy the story since the one i would like isn't getting any votes and everyone seems to want the same thing

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1099824

    You magnificent writer.

    Cannot wait to see more. Any estimates once the votes are tallied how long it takes to write a chapter?

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I agree with picture guy, magicpunk&apple based technology would be super rad.

    Leave those flippin Flim Flam Bro.s in the dust.

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1100162

    I'm going to try to make a set schedule for this.

    Release chapter on Friday

    Count up votes on Sunday

    Have chapter done by Friday

    'Try' being the main word here, never know if I will hit a wall.

    Though the votes are leaning to my preferred path so chances are that wont happen next chapter.

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Applejack, Kid Genius.

    (Rarity is a bad choice, Fluttershy is too obvious a choice)

    (Kid Genius so he can compete as a human without magic living in a world with everyone else having magic)

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Either Fluttershy and Kid Genius or Rarity and Kid Genius. I think Kid Genius might get him to develop magic, and Rarity might help with that. Flutters should help out a bit though with raising him.

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    flutershy

    normal

    whay to many kid genius fics out here

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Kid genius and fluttershy. I want to see him torment her with his genius! Muahahaha!

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    if i said little angel can it just be his personality with the adults around or something and then make him a troubled child when he's with the crusaders and other kids when alone? and then for where to live i guess applejack

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1100564

    He is only a 1 year old, So there is plenty of time for him to develop different masks for different ponies (if you guys choose to of course).

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Kid genius and apple jack. Great story by the way have a princess :trollestia:

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I'm torn between Kid Genius and Little Angel. I think it would be good to use Little Angel IF this story involves Evil Human Myths. If not putting a Kid Genius with Applejack would be hilarious. Twilight dirves her crazy enough, but I just keep thinking that she'll go "Sweet Celestia's Fanny there's TWO of 'em!":rainbowlaugh:

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy

    Genius

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Am I in before this hits feature?...

    I think so, good, if (or when) this gets featured comments will probably fly almost as fast as rainbow... almost.

    as for voting I think I will go with a bit "all of thee above+", after all baby sitters will probably be needed every now and again.

    But as for his primary care giver... as much as I would love to stick Rarity with diaper duty and as much as I love the idea of Fluttershy as a parent I think its best if he gets to be near his big sis, the first one to bond with him, aka Applebloom!

    I just hope he won't be upset when his big sis and her two best buds finely get there cutie marks and he... well can't....

    as for personality...

    Normal?... yick, besides the only people who think there is such a thing as normal are the ones who are either oblivious enough to not notice everybody has there little secret side just under the skin or just plan nuts themselves.

    Problem child? naw, I dun want my precious ponies hearts broken... not on purpose anyways, hey, manure happens am I right?

    little angle? hmmm, interesting, maybe, would be nice to see a little timid sweetie out and about, though the sweetness would have its "limits" after all, like I said we all have that other side just under our skins :pinkiecrazy:

    But I think I would have to go with kid genius, be an interesting mix to have with Applejack as she prefers to keep things simple, plus since we know round about what apple blooms talent is (crafts and such) they would make a nice pair indeed!

    So, I say a genius child living with the Apple family....  though I hope he will remember to keep out of the everfree...

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    FlutterGenius

    #36 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    It seems to me that most of you think that "genius" translates to egghead or just really smart, which is not the case.

    Genius means to be very, VERY good at something.(more or less)

    A genius chef.

    A genius musician.

    A genius writer.

    A genius artiest.

    The list goes on and on and there will be a time that you guys will pick what kind of genius he is, but for now all it really means is that he is a little brighter then a normal 1 year old.

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    kid genius like pony babys are they are BABYS AND THEY CAN ALREADY FLY AND DO MAGIC

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and Kid Genius.

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    rarity or fluttershy and little angel

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Pinkie and evil.

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This should be a My Little Dashie reversal with Fluttershy doing much of the raising.

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and a mix of normal and little angel.

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy doesnt have a stutter, rarity should sound more elegent, rainbow would not let others think she was scared, applejack should probably be written in more of an accent and tbe ponies dont hate eachother. Thier all good enogh to be friends without rarity hating on em and there are alot of mistakes in the writing. Dont let me get u down. Just kee trying and get sumone to proof read it for u

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1101692

    I think I should explain my reasoning behind the hate. I see no way for Rarity to be close friends with Dash and AJ without Twilight being the one that ties them together. Rarity has openly bashed on both of them in the show for being "uncouth" or unladylike, so why wouldn't she do it behind their backs. The only way I can see Rarity even talking to those two before Nightmare Moon is because Fluttershy is friends with Dash. They just seem to different to be close friends without something tying them together and I don't think Fluttershy could be that something. Anyway just my thought process on that, just so you know I did think about it first.

    Also the Fluttershy stutter... yep your right, don't really know what I was thinking for that... I'll just go fix that.:twilightblush:

    Scared Rainbow... like I said in the AN, there will be close to no fun times in later chapters. So if she has to be OOC for a few cheap laughs then I'll have to bite the bullet and make a few people mad.  

    AJ's accent... I hate writing her, I try to do the accent but then the red line is under the word and then I spend like 10 minutes on google to find out how it's spelled only to find nothing. So I ended playing it safe with the proper spelling of the word.

    Rarity's elegants... I got nothing, I'll work on it.

    And thank you the criticism, someone had to do it and I'm glad that you weren't rude about, so thanks again.:twilightsmile:

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and Kid Genius:yay:

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1100693

    Don't forget about all the minute biological differences they will have to deal with. For example; as far as I know, ponies don't lose their baby teeth. At least not in the same way. Of course, I could be horrifically wrong. Lol.

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Loving the concept. However if this is five years before the show should't Applebloom be more...  Babyish?

    Rarity is right out, she doesn't have the resources nor the knowledge to deal with this. That leaves flutters or jack. I say Applejack. Practicality is to be treasured after all.

    And kid genius no contest.

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1102301

    I like to think that the CMC are about 8 or 9 so that would be 3 or 4.

    Now then 3 and 4 year olds can talk, just not that well... and I didn't portray that at all.:facehoof:

    It's not that I didn't think of it at the time when I wrote it, I just couldn't find a way make it stand out.

    So sorry for the confusion.

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy, and a problem child..... he's going to need it if he is going to handle angel.

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Kid genius and Rarity

    I mean come on, dont you guys want a Fabulous mothefucker who solves problems like Twilight ? HE WILL BE GLORIOUSLY FABULOUS AND AWESOME, MARK MY WORDS.

    All in all awesome story and awesome idea, im actually digging for a continuation.

    Edit : Also dont make Rainbow go OOC, there are even BETTER ways to use her Tomboyish attitude to make even better jokes, i mean her personality is a joke goldmine if you know how to use it. If you make her go OOC then you´ll only be wasting good potential. I mean you can make the reader go MAD by just making her like she is

    #51 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    problem child and fluttershy

    #52 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1102549

    Don't worry to much about her going OOC, I was kind of grasping at straws for ways to start this story and that just happened to be the best one.

    #53 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Now while every one is saying 'kid genius' I keep thinking of the fallout traits 'gifted' and 'skilled' (I've been thinking of fallout too much lately)

    I think I'll continue with this. You ask the readers his 'personality' and I'll convert them into fallout lingo and such.

    setup

    Gender: male

    Traits: tba

    S.P.E.C.I.A.L: tba

    Skills: tba (I'll be changing some of these around and adding in joke skills)

    (P.S. I'm just doing this for my own added enjoyment, you can simply ignore me. You can also ask me to stop at any time, if you find this to be irritating)

    #54 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1102796

    Did you happen to read my blog?

    Because I described the choices as Fallout perks.

    And by all means continue, I'm looking forward to how that turns out.:twilightsmile:

    #55 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Flutters and Kid Genius

    War master genius :coolphoto:

    #56 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy , genius this is gonna be good

    #57 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Applejack and genius, because it would be the best contrast. Also there are all kinds of things laying around the farm, before you know It, he'll have made an aeroplane out of scrap. Also Applebloom.

    #58 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    AJ and kid genius.

    I'm really liking this premise, keep it up! :moustache:

    #59 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    1 name: Artemis Fowl.

    #60 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Rarity/Kid Genius...

    #61 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I'm going to throw my vote in for AJ/genius just so he can grow up with him and AB being best friends pretty much from the start.

    #62 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I vote for angelic personality with Rarity. You could probably get some good Angel/Devil scenes with Opal, and Rarity would probably dote upon him and never hear a word against him. In fact, the child may become the one to bail Rarity out of situations.

    If you want drama, the child struggling into reality against his own nature and Rarity's fairytale beliefs is one way I can think to go.

    :ajbemused: Also, I can't believe no one's thought about what we're going to call him..

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1102826

    Oh this is going to be fun:pinkiecrazy:

    P.S. I didn't even know you had a blog reguarding this.

    #64 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    mae hiim a god of war, that is the real natuere of the human race nothing else is alowed:pinkiecrazy: , also i think  it should be with flutershy she will study his anatomy and therfore know of his omniborous diet, and give hiim a healty diet

    #65 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1100897

    How did I almost miss this comment!:flutterrage:

    Anyway for your information I'm planing on them taking on a "it takes a village" approach for raising him, that way all of them can get screen time.

    And thanks for that well thought comment, I love seeing those.:twilightsmile:

    >>1103338

    I was planing on having you guys suggest names for the little guy next chapter. So think of a good human-pony name if you can, I doubt they would can him Phil or Jack or something.  

    >>1103904

    It was really only to find out if it would be a boy or a girl, so it wasn't much really.

    #66 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    well as far as paring go, I would see,

    Normal with Applejack - typical hard working farm and family could produce a nice slice of life

    Problem Child with Fluttershy - overly forgiving mother figure and lots of small animals to terrorize, I mean I know I used to put everything I could reach into my mouth as a child

    or Boy Genius with Rarity - Science vs. Arts

    my votes for Boy Genius and Rarity

    #67 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I vote for Rarity and a genius.

    #68 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1103998

    your welcome :pinkiehappy:

    as for the minor misunderstanding of "genius" perhaps "gifted" would be a better term?

    >>1102158

    I hadn't thought of that but considering how horse teeth grow I think you may be right.

    Lol, poor fluttershy, she is taking care of him one day and one of his teeth bother him and she tenderly asks him to show which one it is and,

    "dis one mommy shy," *fingers the loose tooth that suddenly comes off in his hands* "huh?" *now holding fallen tooth and is bleeding heavily from mouth like a vampire that lost its lunch* (least mine always bled a lot)

    and all right in front of poor little shy... :pinkiecrazy:

    awwwwkwaaaaard....

    #69 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The fun part is when they figure out he can eat meat.

    Also, Applejack+Genius.

    #70 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    but i want either rarity and little angle or applejack and kid genius

    #71 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    he needs to be good at first then as he grows up, he will question his exictance and learn that all the humans are gone, he will think that the ponies are repsonable then turn agaisnt the ponies

    #72 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1102887

    Future God Emperor of Ponykind. :D

    #73 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1105231

    In their tongue he is 'júř-asan

    Barnie-born(seewatididtere)

    WAR OR PECE

    #74 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and normal

    #75 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :ajsmug: and kid genius

    #76 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    A problem child I could see being like Bart Simpson.

    I personally want to see a wild child with a free spirit with Applejack. Seeing her trying to catch him as he swings from trees to trees would be funny.

    #77 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Kid genius and AJ

    #78 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and Kid Genius.

    #79 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    kid genius

    #80 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>110523

    "Future God-Emperor of Ponykind" with Applejack is my official vote.

    #81 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    okay, my vote is AJ with kid genius

    EDIT: So, 5 years before NMM? i wonder if she would traumatize(?) him XD

    #82 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Kid genius and Fluttershy.

    #83 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I have much gusta for this concept...

    #84 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy kid genius

    Genius at: Feeding animals

    #85 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Applejack and Normal

    #86 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I can't wait for the ponies to see how tall humans actually get.

    #87 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Kid genius and Rarity.

    #88 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and Kid Genius

    #89 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Fluttershy and kid genious!

    I would love to see that. :pinkiehappy:

    #90 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1108376

    I'm so sorry but you just missed the cut off... If it makes you feel better you would have been the one that put it into a tie breaker.:trollestia:

    #91 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #92 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Voting is done by the way, check out the last two blogs for the details.

    #93 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I know voting is already down and i'm kicking myself for not noticing this earlier.

    But i'm asking you not to stereotype it, i don't think this should be necesary to ask but i just wanted it off my chest.

    #94 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Kid Genius and Rarity

    #95 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1109422

    What do you mean by stereotype it?

    #96 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    If I noticed this earlier, I would say; Applejack and Kid Genius. Like "Learn how to do stuff just a little bit faster than normal" genius. Finding out how to hold objects is gonna be interesting for the little guy.

    #97 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1109997

    (Example) Like when he's a kid genius, giving him in rapid succesion a lot of earth theories and knoledge. I'm speaking of quantum mechanics, string theory, etc.

    #98 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1110404

    Oh God no, he'll be smart but not that smart... You know unless you guys pick that but it will never be that advance.

    #99 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    The way you've worded the third personality option makes me think of OF&H's Omen-related gags. :pinkiegasp:

    Also, your statement about 16 years being old enough in Equestria for childcare certainly makes sense to me. Seeing Pipsqueak in Luna Eclipsed made me figure that their rate of maturity is such that starting school at 1 year old is normal for them. :raritywink:

    #100 · Chapter 1 · 39w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1110434

    Yeah when i sended the first comment about this i already knew i was a bit to overprotective or something like that,

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