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Flame6666

Joined March 2012
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Just someone who read a few fanfics and got inspired to wright his own.

Stories (4)

  • Raising a Human in Equestria
    I don't know what's going to happen :)

    20,367 words · 9,992 views · 788 likes · 25 dislikes
  • Making the Best of it
    When a man with a shell as thick as the planet is sent to Equestria, will he change or not?
    22,572 words · 1,336 views · 39 likes · 6 dislikes
  • Pony Confessions
    This is Dominick, Dominick works at a five star restaurant called, The Pony Palace.
    4,044 words · 966 views · 28 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Making the Best of it...Again
    When a little girl with a heart full of anger is sent to Equestria, will she change or not?
    7,944 words · 938 views · 15 likes · 2 dislikes

Blog Posts (23)


The earlier chapters are currently being rewritten by The Special Pegasus.

So then, what would happen if a human baby ended up and was raised in Equestria?

Will they be a normal everyday worker? Will they be a Celestia Knight? Will they take over the world? Will they speed up Equestrias technology level with good old human ingenuity?

Honestly I have no idea!

So that's why I need YOUR help! You, the readers will decide their personality, their dreams, their... everything really. So lets get started!

Cover art made by ForestOfSpring

First Published
16th Aug 2012
Last Modified
29th Sep 2012

Comments ( 846 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 23h ago · · ·

I'd say Fluttershy and Kid Genius. Give him a good ol Sonic Screwdriver and he'd be set to go :D

#2 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 23h ago · · ·

Well Fluttershy is the most fitting to be taking care of anything, so her.

Personality , kid genius I guess. As long as he's not making new inventions by age 5 or something.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 23h ago · · ·

Make him a problem child that would be fun :trollestia:

#5 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 23h ago · · ·

Fluttershy and Kid Genius :yay:

#6 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 23h ago · · ·

1. Fluttershy

2. Normal

Also, it's 'Applejack,' not 'Apple Jack.'

#7 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 23h ago · · ·

kid genius

#8 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 23h ago · · ·

Kid Genius with Fluttershy :twilightsmile:

#9 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 23h ago · · ·

Kid Genious + Applejack! By the way, misspelled barn in there somewhere. I saw bran in its place.

#10 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 23h ago · · ·

Fluttershy and little angel

#11 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

applejack and kid genius. he'd confuse her and fit in with the crusaders. lol dictionary

#12 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

I would personally love to see something like this.

Kid Genius

Fluttershy

Somehow has magical abilities with his hands glowing in place of a horn.

To counteract being brilliant and magical so he isn't absolutely perfect I would hope for this for his personality (roughly).

Wise beyond his years.

Plays the occasional prank and defends with pure logic similar to twilight in a way.

Generally goofy but not to the extent of pinkie by any stretch of the imagination.

Rock solid in any choice he makes.

Issues with having magical ability like any pony else but unable to get a cutie mark.

Just to name a couple.

Also OP. Absolutly BRILLIANT concept with the interactive storyline here. I cannot wait to see more.

#13 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

Rarity and problem child

OR

Applejack and little angel

#14 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

Fluttershy Kid Genius

#15 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

Fluttershy and Problem Child.

#16 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1099756

The ability to use some form of magic is actually a perk you guys can pick about 2/5ths way through the story and depending on the choices you guys make is what he can have.

Also remember the kid is only 1 and is still growing, so there is plenty of time to "customize" him as the years go by.

#17 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

Rarity and genius!!!

#18 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

my chose well be Fluttershy and his personallty Little angle.

#19 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

:yay:

Kid genius

#20 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 22h ago · · ·

Fluttershy and kid genius

#21 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 21h ago · · ·

You know i think i am going to sit back and enjoy the story since the one i would like isn't getting any votes and everyone seems to want the same thing

#22 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 21h ago · · ·

>>1099824

You magnificent writer.

Cannot wait to see more. Any estimates once the votes are tallied how long it takes to write a chapter?

#23 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 21h ago · · ·

I agree with picture guy, magicpunk&apple based technology would be super rad.

Leave those flippin Flim Flam Bro.s in the dust.

#24 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 21h ago · · ·

>>1100162

I'm going to try to make a set schedule for this.

Release chapter on Friday

Count up votes on Sunday

Have chapter done by Friday

'Try' being the main word here, never know if I will hit a wall.

Though the votes are leaning to my preferred path so chances are that wont happen next chapter.

#25 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 21h ago · · ·

Applejack, Kid Genius.

(Rarity is a bad choice, Fluttershy is too obvious a choice)

(Kid Genius so he can compete as a human without magic living in a world with everyone else having magic)

#26 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 21h ago · · ·

Either Fluttershy and Kid Genius or Rarity and Kid Genius. I think Kid Genius might get him to develop magic, and Rarity might help with that. Flutters should help out a bit though with raising him.

#27 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

flutershy

normal

whay to many kid genius fics out here

#28 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

Kid genius and fluttershy. I want to see him torment her with his genius! Muahahaha!

#29 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

if i said little angel can it just be his personality with the adults around or something and then make him a troubled child when he's with the crusaders and other kids when alone? and then for where to live i guess applejack

#30 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

>>1100564

He is only a 1 year old, So there is plenty of time for him to develop different masks for different ponies (if you guys choose to of course).

#31 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 20h ago · · ·

Kid genius and apple jack. Great story by the way have a princess :trollestia:

#32 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

I'm torn between Kid Genius and Little Angel. I think it would be good to use Little Angel IF this story involves Evil Human Myths. If not putting a Kid Genius with Applejack would be hilarious. Twilight dirves her crazy enough, but I just keep thinking that she'll go "Sweet Celestia's Fanny there's TWO of 'em!":rainbowlaugh:

#33 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

Fluttershy

Genius

#34 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

Am I in before this hits feature?...

I think so, good, if (or when) this gets featured comments will probably fly almost as fast as rainbow... almost.

as for voting I think I will go with a bit "all of thee above+", after all baby sitters will probably be needed every now and again.

But as for his primary care giver... as much as I would love to stick Rarity with diaper duty and as much as I love the idea of Fluttershy as a parent I think its best if he gets to be near his big sis, the first one to bond with him, aka Applebloom!

I just hope he won't be upset when his big sis and her two best buds finely get there cutie marks and he... well can't....

as for personality...

Normal?... yick, besides the only people who think there is such a thing as normal are the ones who are either oblivious enough to not notice everybody has there little secret side just under the skin or just plan nuts themselves.

Problem child? naw, I dun want my precious ponies hearts broken... not on purpose anyways, hey, manure happens am I right?

little angle? hmmm, interesting, maybe, would be nice to see a little timid sweetie out and about, though the sweetness would have its "limits" after all, like I said we all have that other side just under our skins :pinkiecrazy:

But I think I would have to go with kid genius, be an interesting mix to have with Applejack as she prefers to keep things simple, plus since we know round about what apple blooms talent is (crafts and such) they would make a nice pair indeed!

So, I say a genius child living with the Apple family....  though I hope he will remember to keep out of the everfree...

#35 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

FlutterGenius

#36 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

It seems to me that most of you think that "genius" translates to egghead or just really smart, which is not the case.

Genius means to be very, VERY good at something.(more or less)

A genius chef.

A genius musician.

A genius writer.

A genius artiest.

The list goes on and on and there will be a time that you guys will pick what kind of genius he is, but for now all it really means is that he is a little brighter then a normal 1 year old.

#37 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 19h ago · · ·

kid genius like pony babys are they are BABYS AND THEY CAN ALREADY FLY AND DO MAGIC

#38 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 18h ago · · ·

Fluttershy and Kid Genius.

#39 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 18h ago · · ·

rarity or fluttershy and little angel

#40 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 18h ago · · ·

Pinkie and evil.

#41 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 17h ago · · ·

This should be a My Little Dashie reversal with Fluttershy doing much of the raising.

#42 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 17h ago · · ·

Fluttershy and a mix of normal and little angel.

#43 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 17h ago · · ·

Fluttershy doesnt have a stutter, rarity should sound more elegent, rainbow would not let others think she was scared, applejack should probably be written in more of an accent and tbe ponies dont hate eachother. Thier all good enogh to be friends without rarity hating on em and there are alot of mistakes in the writing. Dont let me get u down. Just kee trying and get sumone to proof read it for u

#44 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

>>1101692

I think I should explain my reasoning behind the hate. I see no way for Rarity to be close friends with Dash and AJ without Twilight being the one that ties them together. Rarity has openly bashed on both of them in the show for being "uncouth" or unladylike, so why wouldn't she do it behind their backs. The only way I can see Rarity even talking to those two before Nightmare Moon is because Fluttershy is friends with Dash. They just seem to different to be close friends without something tying them together and I don't think Fluttershy could be that something. Anyway just my thought process on that, just so you know I did think about it first.

Also the Fluttershy stutter... yep your right, don't really know what I was thinking for that... I'll just go fix that.:twilightblush:

Scared Rainbow... like I said in the AN, there will be close to no fun times in later chapters. So if she has to be OOC for a few cheap laughs then I'll have to bite the bullet and make a few people mad.  

AJ's accent... I hate writing her, I try to do the accent but then the red line is under the word and then I spend like 10 minutes on google to find out how it's spelled only to find nothing. So I ended playing it safe with the proper spelling of the word.

Rarity's elegants... I got nothing, I'll work on it.

And thank you the criticism, someone had to do it and I'm glad that you weren't rude about, so thanks again.:twilightsmile:

#45 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 16h ago · · ·

Fluttershy and Kid Genius:yay:

#46 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 15h ago · · ·

>>1100693

Don't forget about all the minute biological differences they will have to deal with. For example; as far as I know, ponies don't lose their baby teeth. At least not in the same way. Of course, I could be horrifically wrong. Lol.

#47 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 15h ago · · ·

Loving the concept. However if this is five years before the show should't Applebloom be more...  Babyish?

Rarity is right out, she doesn't have the resources nor the knowledge to deal with this. That leaves flutters or jack. I say Applejack. Practicality is to be treasured after all.

And kid genius no contest.

#48 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 15h ago · · ·

>>1102301

I like to think that the CMC are about 8 or 9 so that would be 3 or 4.

Now then 3 and 4 year olds can talk, just not that well... and I didn't portray that at all.:facehoof:

It's not that I didn't think of it at the time when I wrote it, I just couldn't find a way make it stand out.

So sorry for the confusion.

#49 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

Fluttershy, and a problem child..... he's going to need it if he is going to handle angel.

#50 · Chapter 1 · 87w, 14h ago · · ·

Kid genius and Rarity

I mean come on, dont you guys want a Fabulous mothefucker who solves problems like Twilight ? HE WILL BE GLORIOUSLY FABULOUS AND AWESOME, MARK MY WORDS.

All in all awesome story and awesome idea, im actually digging for a continuation.

Edit : Also dont make Rainbow go OOC, there are even BETTER ways to use her Tomboyish attitude to make even better jokes, i mean her personality is a joke goldmine if you know how to use it. If you make her go OOC then you´ll only be wasting good potential. I mean you can make the reader go MAD by just making her like she is

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