• Member Since 13th Jun, 2012
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TaviTurnip


I'm just a writer. And stuff. I'll write a more interesting bio if people ask c: I do art as well and I like it when people visit my deviantART for just this purpose.

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Lily is just a farm girl living a happy simple life with her best friend. One night before she goes home, her dreams take her somewhere she's never been before... apparently to stay? She wakes up one Pony who doesn't seem too happy to have an intruder... But how will she get back home?

That Romance tag has nothing to do with humans and Ponies together~

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 21 )

Words words ideacraft words <_> Enjoy!

Well, this is interesting.

Nice progress so far. Hope you keep it up. :twilightsmile:



Otherwise, Pinkie's gonna get some new Cupcakes to bake soon. :pinkiecrazy:

Hmmm.. Not bad. Not bad at all.

Although I kinda expected Twilight to freak about a Human appearing in Equestria, even if Lyra DID tell her to behave. :trollestia:

Have a stache. :moustache:

1066696 Getting a 'stache is normal praise around here, isn't it xD

As I've said in the description notes, I'm just kind of going where the story takes me here. I'm not thinking too hard about what happens, really. I'm just trying to write something relaxing for myself that hopefully ends up making enough sense to other people :fluttershysad: It's all a little self-indulgence on my part.

1067569 Well you're "not thinking too hard" is giving you a great storyline, it must continue! :ajsmug:



Also, WHO THE FUCK GAVE THIS AMAZING STORY A DISLIKE?!?!?! :raritycry: :flutterrage:

1072787 It's not that amazing :fluttershysad: Dislikes are healthy sometimes too!

This... is pretty good. I'll track this. :pinkiesmile:

That was just beautiful, my friend. <3

Yet, another great chapter. Bravo. *claps*
We require moar. :pinkiesmile:


*waits for the story to get featured soon*

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I doubt it'll ever get featured :c It doesn't have that sort of initial hook stories need for people to find the premise interesting.

1122135 patience, young Padawan. It will get featured soon. I CAN FEEL IT.

Did anyone else have this song pop into their head while reading Lily and Lyn's backstory?

1135345 ... You're making me cry, haha :fluttercry: That's probably one of the best comments I've ever received about something I've done.

1135670 Well, that song honestly did pop into my head when I read that part. And this is one of the most touching HiEs I've ever read. So I think you deserve it.

1135907 I try :< Heart is what I'm best at, so it means a lot that people are enjoying it.

I'm not particularly ecstatic about the way this chapter ended. It feels like it needs just a tiny bit more oomph... but I couldn't quite find the best way to do that. I need sleep :ajsleepy:

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Dah, is good. Do not worry.
And now to sleep for only four hours before having to get up again. Fun. :pinkiesick:

AHA! A WILD UPDATE APPEARS!

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