• Published 9th Aug 2012
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HighSchool With Fluttershy - Zornia



15 year old fluttershy with OC. (Fluttershy looks like the pic, except no wings.) Green skirt = pink

Comments ( 53 )

Next chapter will take a week, I'm sorry...

As lunch ended, it was finally time for biology.
We went to our lockers, and walked to biology.
Upon entering biology, we realized today we were taking notes.
Biology biology biology. did you have to put all those biologys in?

Did he say they were going to biology? Must have missed that part

1117219 Fuck my grammar. Im fixing.

Yes its here time to read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1117665 Dude, I need to think alot to write 100 words... just that...

1117692
"But the next chapter will have like, 5000 words"

?

1117715 Hmfuck.... It was supposed to be that, but I couldn't find a good way to continue it.

1117753 Ah, thanks.

HMB

1117069. *Shoots self*

I sense sex in the near future

Phew. :ajsleepy: Glad to see Dave isn't going to juvy.
Any way, nice save with Dave, but for the mom however...:duck: she going down as worst mom in history.

Fifty Shades of Fluttershy?:yay:

1120389 SORRY TO FUCK EVERYONE OVER, BUT I NEED TO TAKE A BREAK FROM THIS FICTION. I WILL START WRITING NEXT WEEKEND. I HAVE SEVERAL ESSAYS, AND LOTS OF STUDYING TO DO, LET ALONE MY HOURS FOR MY JOB ARE UP... LAST POST FOR TODAY...

Man that guy is a total idiot for not accepting sex:ajbemused:

HMB

1118104 But I'm already dead? *dies*

1122929

BUT IT'S SO AMAZING, GOD FLAPJACKS DAMMNIT!

1122929
i'm not saying your taking too long, but the stories getting kinda pornographic (pornographic is a bit intense but I couldn't think of a better word) but I like it:pinkiecrazy:

1127480 Changing rating to mature...

Guys, im so sorry. Im cancelling this.

1129971
NO YOU ARE FUCKING NOT!!!

1134140 Ive got drama club, and the story was to repetitive.

HMB

1136470 Oh god no please. god no please for the love of god. JUST DO THE CHAPTERS IN THE WEEKENDS! DONT CANCEL IT!

1136487 ...... I can't seem to continue this, im sorry. :ajbemused:

HMB

1136498 Man I hate seeing things like this, I wish I could finish it myself, or you could find someone else to do it but I guess not. *Sighs and sheds a tear* There goes something so awesome down the drain. :raritycry:

This is... unfortunate... news.
:fluttershyouch:

1117069 dont be sorry. Your doing a great job and u should use all the time u need :raritywink:

I do agree with Zornia, it is very repetitious, but the story has potential!

If no one is going to pass the torch. Then all I can do is hope for the best for author and the story. :fluttercry:

1136498 Well, damn. Damn. I would offer to attempt to continue the story for you, but I doubt I'd do it justice. It's a real shame, but RL takes priority over fan fiction :fluttercry::fluttercry:

THE PAIN FROM READING CANCELLED, IT BURNS~~~~ :raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry::fluttershyouch::pinkiesad2::twilightoops::unsuresweetie:

Seriously, try to do this again, i don't care if I have to wait a bit, but just try to work in it. But it is your decision, so i will respect whatever choice you make.

god dammit...

IV'E GOT A BRILLIANT IDEA!!!
Zornia selects a bunch of his most faith full fans to form a little group and they can help him come up with ideas
I of course wont be part of this as I can't even come up with ideas for my own fic and this one is excellent compared to my improvised bucket'o'piss

@zornia ............NOOOOOOOOOOOoOOoOOoOo

Have you ever thought of reeling or remaking this so it won't get cancelled?

This is where i come in and say the story is mine. Cuz it is! Thank u Zornia!:pinkiehappy:

1253830 then write something if you don't then come at me bro at school:flutterrage:

PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF MLP:FiM DO NOT CANCEL!!!:flutterrage:

1117657 Corny Joke) That's What She Said :P

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