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#1 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

Well, decided to wrap it up for you guys. The next chapter will be sometime in 2-4 days. Schools starting, and I'm focusing on that. :pinkiesad2:

#2 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

Hit the 10k word mark. All new chapters will be at least 1500 words, I PINKIEPROMISE. :pinkiehappy:

#3 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

Not to be a bother, but there is a mistake,"She stood in front of us, and let out a smell “Go..”"

It should be small, not smell.

Sorry for bothering

#4 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1080034 OH THANK GOD. That sounds so weird. Thank you for correcting me.

#5 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

I fixed it thanks mate. :pinkiehappy:

#6 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

When did this come out?

Awesome time to read!

#7 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

Aww, why glasses?:facehoof:

#8 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1080432 Going to fix that. like.. NOW. :ajsleepy:

#9 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1080476 Why is it HighSchool with Dave?

#10 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1080512 As i mentioned, I changed the name to fit it, since its not completely focused on both of them.

It is more focused on Daves point of view, but the focus is still on fluttershyXDave.

But, since the mane six are all being incorporated one by one, I felt good to change the name. I'll change it back if you don't like. Tell me now. NAOW! :pinkiehappy:

#11 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1080561 I get it now its just it could go both ways like the story puts you in highschool with Dave but Dave is also in highschool with fluttershy so whatever you want, its your story.

WHY GLASSES? its your story again

#12 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1080605 Glasses, nuff said. :twilightsmile: And i'll keep dat title i guess. The new one. :ajbemused:

#13 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1080620 ok but in my world she dosnt have glasses  well she's not a human so dosent matter anymore. Cant wait till next chapter and i also like the relations between das n twi :rainbowderp::twilightblush:

#14 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1081282 I plan to include a awkward scene with that, but i need to take a break from writing till tommorow, i need to think of ideas.

#15 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

Nice so far. I like the idea of Rainbow and Twi being together.

#16 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1081599 Ah, 2 relationships running at once.

#17 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1079977

*Reads comment* Stares at laptop for an extent of hours blindly without blinking."FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!"

#18 · 109w, 6d ago · · ·

Again, very good anime plot.

#19 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1080620 I forgot if you keep the fluttershy title more people will view it because people are going to say whos Dave? I would change it back but whatever you want.:fluttershysad:

#20 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1081880 you know when i read this i dont view it as anime i just see it kind of like borderlands and how its a cell shaded world kind of a little less but its still there.

#21 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1083235 Fuck it, Im changing it back.

#23 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1085118 Changed. :derpytongue2:

#24 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1085127 I wonder why?

#25 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1086283 Lol turk.

#26 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

Sixth day coming soon...

#27 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1087486 On thursday i should release it,  also, I've started school. Which reminds me.. ITS JUST LIKE THE SCHOOL IN THIS STORY! Except, its missing fluttershy... :pinkiesad2:

#28 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

.>>1087494

Yeah I also started school today and I was also thinking of this story while walking through the halls of my building.

#29 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1087518 I know.. :pinkiesad2:

#30 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

.>>1087494

Did you start today?

#31 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1087608 No, but Ive heard from friends. Im just starting highschool. And my irl name is David/Dave. :pinkiecrazy:

#32 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

Figures mines Brandon/Bran im a sophomore (10th)

>>1087637

#33 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1087661 Spoiler for story: Dave gets Arres:rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

#34 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1087695 You get arrested ha

#35 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1087745 Cant believe you ruin the spoilerzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz But yes, he gets framed.

#36 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1087780 How did i ruin it

#37 · 109w, 5d ago · · ·

>>1087808 Im joking.... :twilightoops:

#39 · 109w, 4d ago · · ·

>>1087494 that is pure torture :fluttercry: I wish for you to find said Fluttershy, then introduce me to her...

Keep up the good work! I'm really loving this story >.>

#40 · 109w, 4d ago · · ·

>>1087842 Man its Wednesday and i cant wait there better be two chapters.

#41 · 109w, 4d ago · · ·

>>1091440 Man, just got back from school. Hope to release a chapter tonight.

#42 · 109w, 4d ago · · ·

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUKKKKKKYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAA

#43 · 109w, 4d ago · · ·

LOL...

#44 · 109w, 4d ago · · ·

Day six...?

#45 · 109w, 3h ago · · ·

I just realized something, by the third day Dave was already Flutters bed.:rainbowderp: By God, this is the fastest relationship EVER!:twilightoops: But it's cute non-the-less.:raritywink:

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