Well, decided to wrap it up for you guys. The next chapter will be sometime in 2-4 days. Schools starting, and I'm focusing on that.
Hit the 10k word mark. All new chapters will be at least 1500 words, I PINKIEPROMISE.
Not to be a bother, but there is a mistake,"She stood in front of us, and let out a smell “Go..”"
It should be small, not smell.
Sorry for bothering
>>10800341080034 OH THANK GOD. That sounds so weird. Thank you for correcting me.
I fixed it thanks mate.
When did this come out?
Awesome time to read!
Aww, why glasses?
>>10804321080432 Going to fix that. like.. NOW.
>>10804761080476 Why is it HighSchool with Dave?
>>10805121080512 As i mentioned, I changed the name to fit it, since its not completely focused on both of them.
It is more focused on Daves point of view, but the focus is still on fluttershyXDave.
But, since the mane six are all being incorporated one by one, I felt good to change the name. I'll change it back if you don't like. Tell me now. NAOW!
>>10805611080561 I get it now its just it could go both ways like the story puts you in highschool with Dave but Dave is also in highschool with fluttershy so whatever you want, its your story.
WHY GLASSES? its your story again
>>10806051080605 Glasses, nuff said. And i'll keep dat title i guess. The new one.
>>10806201080620 ok but in my world she dosnt have glasses well she's not a human so dosent matter anymore. Cant wait till next chapter and i also like the relations between das n twi
>>10812821081282 I plan to include a awkward scene with that, but i need to take a break from writing till tommorow, i need to think of ideas.
Nice so far. I like the idea of Rainbow and Twi being together.
>>10815991081599 Ah, 2 relationships running at once.
*Reads comment* Stares at laptop for an extent of hours blindly without blinking."FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!"
Again, very good anime plot.
>>10806201080620 I forgot if you keep the fluttershy title more people will view it because people are going to say whos Dave? I would change it back but whatever you want.
>>10818801081880 you know when i read this i dont view it as anime i just see it kind of like borderlands and how its a cell shaded world kind of a little less but its still there.
>>10832351083235 Fuck it, Im changing it back.
>>10851271085127 I wonder why?
>>10862831086283 Lol turk.
Sixth day coming soon...
>>10874861087486 On thursday i should release it, also, I've started school. Which reminds me.. ITS JUST LIKE THE SCHOOL IN THIS STORY! Except, its missing fluttershy...
Yeah I also started school today and I was also thinking of this story while walking through the halls of my building.
>>10875181087518 I know..
Did you start today?
>>10876081087608 No, but Ive heard from friends. Im just starting highschool. And my irl name is David/Dave.
Figures mines Brandon/Bran im a sophomore (10th)
>>10876611087661 Spoiler for story: Dave gets Arres
>>10876951087695 You get arrested ha
>>10877451087745 Cant believe you ruin the spoilerzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz But yes, he gets framed.
>>10877801087780 How did i ruin it
>>10878081087808 Im joking....
>>10874941087494 that is pure torture I wish for you to find said Fluttershy, then introduce me to her...
Keep up the good work! I'm really loving this story >.>
>>10878421087842 Man its Wednesday and i cant wait there better be two chapters.
>>10914401091440 Man, just got back from school. Hope to release a chapter tonight.
I just realized something, by the third day Dave was already Flutters bed. By God, this is the fastest relationship EVER! But it's cute non-the-less.