And so it begins...

This will be quite a project for me, depending the reception. I already know how it'll go - just have to put finger to keyboard and make with the tappy-tappy

Quick note; Discord is not tagged because he'll only appear in the opening flashback and maybe for one scene later on, but that's it. In terms of plot, he's unimportant. Besides, the ponies will have ENOUGH to deal with without him screwing things up.

And Gilda, well... she'll pop up in Chapter 1. I promise I didn't lie!

Constructive criticism is welcome and encouraged. UNconstructive criticism will be promptly rainboom'ed

I hope Gilda will be given more development than just 'asshole'.

Otherwise, good fic.

You might want to space out the paragraphs with one more enter, 'cause right now it's looking like a wall of text.

Hmmmm....

Image: http://i.imgur.com/JdpYT.gif

>>10505821050582 I'm planning to try.

And thanks for the tip; I'll try to fix it for the next one. This is my first fic, so I'm still working out the kinks

Nice...  I'm going to recommend this to all of my fellow bronies as soon as possible. Great Work

>>10523681052368 Thanks! I hope I can live up to the expectation!

Well, as promised, I present Gilda.

BUT I SAID NOTHING ABOUT CLIFFHANGERS, HAHAHA!!!!

As always, critique and questions are welcome. Next part will follow sooner than the last... I hope

Boo King Talos!

Talos: Look, mate. If we can't beat you, how can we beat Erebus?

Luna: Oh yeah. Hmm. Just a warning.

Talos: Business as usual, then. Party.