Twist has always dreamed of sharing a simple dance with her secret crush, and after a series of drastic changes and unforeseen events, that dream may just come true.
Holy shit, a Twist story!?!?!!? Yes, please!
Interesting pair. Well written, I find no flaws what so ever, you earned my favorite.
Several D'awws were had.
Aaaaaaaaaaand D'awwwwwwwwwwwww- HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGH.
Right in my whatever it is that processes sugar.
Aww... that was a really cute story. Great job
Very cute story. Twist is easily my least favorite character. I like Applejack more than Twist, that's how much I don't like her. This story, however, made me appreciate Twist, so kudos for that. Great job.
How cute honestly there needs to be more Twist love. She's jutht tho prethouth
First comment. Nice.
Well thanks, I'm glad you like it.
Aw, why do you hate Twist? She's so cute...
... are super cute/sexy/awesome/best-heads.
This is perfectly adorable...
So cute! I loved it!
>>10538391053839 Agreed. Twist is hawt.
Twist is best pony. This is canon.
About a month ago I didn't even know this ship existed, now I'm tracking the only two (maybe) Twisted Spoon (Silver Twist?) stories on FIMfiction.
I have only three words to describe this.
SO. FUCKING. (wait for it) *long deep breath* CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE
OH MY GOSH!! A wild Twist story has appeared and I must read it!! Silver Twist All the way. This has earned my favorite and a gif of Silver Spoon clapping. (I would also give you a Twist one but I cant find it.)
There needs to be more Twist fics
this story was beautiful
Stopped by for the Silver.
Related to the Twist all too well.
Thith ith perfect!
Twist getting more story love is always a good thing, even moreso when done this well. Fav'd
This is heartwarming.
cute, insanely and unbelievably cute.
BTW; am i the only one who realizes twist is the only ginger pony?
"This ship existed." Ha, as far as I knew, this was the first.
I heart-ify this story. Silver and Twist are my favorite non-CMC foals, and a shipping of them is freaking awesome. The themes in this story are pretty cool, too. It's all emotional and deep and such. Beauty ain't always just skin-deep, and that stuff.
Well, good job, IJAB. Can I call you IJAB? It's a cool acronym, in my opinion. Anyways, like and fav.
Thanks for the compliments, and of course you can call me that.
is best pony!
Awesome story. I love it when Silver Spoon sticks it to that bitch!
I also wonder why Twist doesn't have that much fanficiton...
Daww, what a cute story~! <3 I'm coming to be quite a fan of SilverTwist. :3 Twist really does need more love. And I really enjoy the idea of Silver being a nicer pony once she's pried away from Diamond for a bit.
Well then I'm glad you like it. And if you know of any other SilverTwist fics, please link them to me. I'd love to read them.
I know I've seen at least one other somewhere, but sadly it's been a while and I can't remember the name. @_@ I'll let you know if I come back across it though! ^w^
I'm a Twails (Twist/Snails) shipper myself, but this was pretty good. Very cute and relateable. It was a little rough around the edges, though; there were quite a few typoes, and some sentences or paragraphs here and there that could be improved. And you mixed up Snips and Snails' names in the third paragraph. Another editing pass over the whole thing would be a good idea, I think.
It was also shorter than it probably should've been. I would've liked to have seen a little more backstory on Twist's crush. It felt kind of arbitrary, I guess. Twist and Silver haven't had much interaction in the show, so some fleshing out of their history here might have helped make it more believeable. The dance scene could've been extended, too. Silver seemed to go along with Twist's advances way too quickly and easily. Just some things to consider.
All that criticism aside, though, I enjoyed this. Twist doesn't get nearly enough attention around here, or on the show for that matter. 4/5, and thumbs up.
This was never edited. It was just a quick little thing for fun. Thanks for the compliments.
I believe this was worth the diabetes
that was just dawwwww and awwwwwww and wow really neat fic
I'm glad you guys like the story, but I'm wondering how you found it.
Well i have read alot of your fics and do tend to check on each writer's stories and yeah just read them + i have clicked the watch so i can see when you post a new fic and duo hope your gonna do more romance fics since your very talenled with those please keep up the very good work!
Ah, well I'll definitely do more romance fics in the future. I'm glad you enjoy them and thanks for the compliments.
>>14225461422546 on the filter i clicked romance and cutie mark crusaders, then i randomly clicked the next page button a bunch of times, and here i am
Thumbs up! Aside from a few ignorable grammar mistakes, it was awesome! :silversmile:
Glad you liked it! I really regret not having this edited before posting it.
Meh, it was awesome anyway! I love foals... probably because I am one. So I'm beginning a mini fandom! Dedicated to the cause of we don't have enough.
This is by far the most random shipping I've ever read, and I really liked it. The foals in this show are just too cute. I even find Diamond's nastiness to be endearing. Good stuff, mang.
I love this cute little pairing. Another that I enjoy is Silver Spoon and Scootaloo.
>>16494001649400 Time to look for that pairing.
Let me know what you find aside from The Scootaloo Diaries.
>>16526091652609 Will do.
I rather enjoyed this light-hearted tale, but of course you know I love anything with Twist in it.
I liked how you elaborated on Twist's characterization; she'd be in midst day dream, but still wouldn't hesitate to go to help her mother with chores. That really is a believable aspect to how she's portrayed in in the show. I liked the transition as well to where she ended up skipping on her chores for the day to learn how to style her mane and to later go to the dance. She's still a kid, after all.
I have to say, I thought you were going to take the DT vs. Applebloom scene differently, but I still enjoyed the direction you took nonetheless
I sure wish Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara get more air-time eventually, even if their roles are solely to be antagonists to the CMC. I always enjoy seeing them on screen. Twist too; she needs more love.
Awwwww, I love it! Super sweet and great characterisation. I think you might just have found my OTP for fillies ^^