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Ultra Sonic 037187

Joined May 2012
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    Well Princess Celestia winds up on earth and meets a human named James this story mostly focuses on the growth of two other character with James as the narrator but James has some problems as well.

    I will throw in some little timbits for john and luna but not much.

    First Published
    8th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    4th Dec 2012

    Comments ( 20 )

    #1 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This is too weird for me.

    i'm out

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Dafuq is this shit. I mean really.

    #3 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    theres a video game called the last of us

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1052157 this is the weirdest chapter in the whole story and I really feel that this book of mine will progress further than you think :pinkiehappy:

    #5 · Chapter 17 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1052325 it's my book and if it weird for you then that's your problem, you could have still gave me some real critical comments. :twilightangry2:

    #6 · Chapter 17 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #7 · Chapter 17 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    add to read later

    #8 · Chapter 18 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1502734 lol that is an awesome Simpsons episode and hope you enjoy the fanfic!

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 29w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    Oh, wow, I... I'm sorry... but you seriously need to go back to the drawing board on this.

    I just look at the first paragaraph, and I see what seems like no regard for punctuation, pacing, formatting, or anything like that.

    :duck:

    #10 · Chapter 18 · 29w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1502782 I just got a prereader/editor about 2 days ago and I'm going to get him to help me with all my grammar issues and such. I think that after getting no comments on this what so ever to help me fix this fanfic up I just gave up asking so thank you for the helpful insight. Also I really don't know if the grammar gets better in the later chapters. If not please inform me. :pinkiehappy::heart:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 27w, 5d ago · · ·
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    By the way, the chapter title should be spelt 'Disappointment' instead of:

    Chapter 1 Can't Handle Dissapointment (28th Oct)

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 26w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1583593 okay so other than that is the story fine or what?

    #13 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #14 · Chapter 19 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1892888 God I haven't read my chapters in ages so tell me what is this song based off of (the scene you found this song fit) or are we being random today? :pinkiesmile:

    #15 · Chapter 19 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1892888 oh and dig the song :pinkiehappy:

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Comment posted by Kronos fiery deleted at 9:27pm on the 2nd of January, 2013
    Comment posted by Kronos fiery deleted at 9:27pm on the 2nd of January, 2013
    #19 · Chapter 4 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #20 · Chapter 19 · 16w, 3d ago · · ·
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    well this has been i interesting:scootangel: story so far hope to see more

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