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  • E Rolling in Beaches

    On a summer trip to the beach, Spike meets two interesting females, and Rarity is none too happy.  · Bico
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  • E Rolling in Beaches

    On a summer trip to the beach, Spike meets two interesting females, and Rarity is none too happy.
    18,671 words · 4,478 views  ·  327  ·  9
  • T Love Is Blind; Friendship Closes Its Eyes

    It's been a long time since Princess Nidra and Anthea fought over the affections of the dragon-pony, Turquoise. Since then they have been through much and become good friends. Now, an aging Anthea has one last request of her friend.
    12,087 words · 2,447 views  ·  155  ·  6 · sex
  • E Love Is Patient

    Turquoise Blitz and Anthea are finally getting married, but Princess Nidra isn't too happy about it. When she attempts to bring about slumber eternal, her mother, Princess Luna, intervenes.
    2,811 words · 2,883 views  ·  189  ·  13
  • T Head of a Dog; Tail of a Lion

    Spike is tired of being worked like a dog, but what will he do when he's made a bird in the Diamond Dogs' gilded cage? Despite being treated well, he may end up having to beard the lion in its den when dark dealings are revealed.
    7,792 words · 682 views  ·  48  ·  2
  • E I'm Not Your Sister

    Celestia has been keeping a secret from Luna
    3,375 words · 974 views  ·  40  ·  5
  • T Atlas Strongest Tournament

    Rarity is visited by her master and Scootaloo enters a fighting tournament.
    163,136 words · 1,408 views  ·  54  ·  10
  • T Somebody to Love

    Rarity's looking for her very special somepony, and as the Princess of Love, Cadance is happy to help.
    7,708 words · 369 views  ·  26  ·  5
  • E Owlman In Equestria

    Owlman thought he had found easy prey in the little ponies of Equestria. Trixie and her fellow Elements may force him to reconsider. (A Lunaverse Fanfiction)
    12,957 words · 366 views  ·  22  ·  5

Blog Posts19

  • 1w, 6d
    Penultimate Atlas Strongest Tournament chapter

    Soon...

    I'm actually done writing; just waiting on editing and doing some illustrations for it. It only took a couple days when I finally got down to it after working on some other projects. I really want to finish this fic up, though. Get ready for a real royal rumble.

    0 comments · 11 views
  • 6w, 6d
    Stuff Happened, But Still Updating

    My updates have been pretty sparse lately, though I finally updated Head of a Dog; Tail of a Lion after quibbling over it for a while. So, to make a long story short, I have a new house back in the States and I'm now stationed in South Korea for a year. Yay. Seems like I'll be working longer hours and dealing with a lot more humbug than is usual for the Army, so I'm really not 100% sure how that will affect my little writing hobby. Hopefully not too profoundly. In addition, I'm totally getting into the Kung Fu Panda Tipo ship after watching the movies and shorts before I came to ROK, so I might end up doing something with that. I may even, dare I say, do a crossover with MLP.

    3 comments · 28 views
  • 21w, 6d
    Warning to Writers

    So I've lost about two weeks of time to work on my own stuff. Why? Because a certain user decided to commission me for a fanfic and not compensate me at all. If you want to read in more detail, you can check out my Tumblr post about it. For the TL;DR version, don't take a commission unless they pay half up front.

    4 comments · 96 views
  • 23w, 6d
    Spike and Rarity's Bogus Date Night

    So the first clop of the Kilalaverse has now been completed. I came into it with the intent of making a funny, cute, and sexy story about Rarity and Spike being married. There are a lot of fics that have their first time or otherwise quite early in their relationship, presumably because people find that more exciting (and they aren't in a relationship in the show, of course, so feel the need to explain that they are in one). Hopefully, I've shown the trials and tribulations, as well as the rewards, of married sex. Coincidentally, as I was writing the third chapter my wife had a pregnancy test which came out positive. I'm not getting a vasectomy, though (at least, not yet).

    2 comments · 98 views
  • 28w, 4d
    Head of a Dog; Tail of a Lion

    So I posted yet another fanfic even though I now have two others in the Ponies of Olympus continuity still incomplete. Oh, well, this one and Somebody To Love are fairly short (especially compared to Atlas Strongest Tournament). This one is set directly after Equestria Girls, though I have cleverly put in ambiguous references to the movie. Did it really happen? Was it merely some similar but more mundane event that just happened which causes Spike to smell like a sexy dog? Who knows? In any case, this is meant to expand on Spike's relationship to Rarity, just as Somebody To Love is, except both do so somewhat indirectly by allowing them to learn about each other and themselves through their interactions with others. I hope it comes off well.

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After Ditzy Doo messes up one too many times, Rainbow bans her from the weather team. Ditzy turns to Twilight to help her get over her clumsiness, but can she and the rest of her friends get the job done or will it only result in further calamity?

Stories in the Ponies of Olympus continuity (chronological):

Ditzy Don't

Rolling In Beaches

Head of a Dog; Tail of a Lion

Somebody To Love

Atlas Strongest Tournament

First Published
8th Aug 2012
Last Modified
8th Aug 2012
#1 · 115w, 3d ago · 4 · 4 · Best Friends Forever ·

Her name......is DERPY! GAH! RAGE! I AM SO ANGRY RIGHT NOW I CAN JUST TELL YOU SO ON THE INTERNET!

#2 · 115w, 3d ago · 3 · 4 · Best Friends Forever ·

>>1050035 The proper name is Ditzy, the name everypony else uses is Derpy. There, I saved your head cannon, now shut up and read.

#3 · 115w, 3d ago · 4 · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>1050035 Sorry for you, dood. I, personally, liked the idea of Ditzy Doo being her proper name and Derpy being a nickname. It's a neat way to resolve the problem of being referred to by two different names (like the "Lyra Heartstrings" compromise). Further, I like the idea that "Derpy" is some kind of pet name RD uses for her.

ok RD can kick her from the weather team but where does she get the authority to ban her from Cloudsdale? mind you in my sleep deprived state Iv probably missed something allusing to that :pinkiecrazy:

#5 · 115w, 3d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>1050359 I'm pretty sure she can't, officially. She's just being a douche. I imagined it as something similar to one of those westerns in which one of the characters, who has no authority whatsoever aside from a quick draw, tells another to get the hell out of Dodge. She wasn't really sincere, anyway.

#6 · 115w, 3d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

cute...

#8 · 115w, 2d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

I could sit here and rage all day. But I'd just be a douche. And besides the disagreement between canon names, it's a well written fic.

#9 · 115w, 1d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>1052579 Yeah, it's not too healthy to get bent out of shape over a triviality. Besides, I have my reasons.

#10 · 110w, 5d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

Rage of Futershy :flutterrage:

Insanity of Pinkie :pinkiecrazy:

Strength of Applejack :applejackconfused:

and the Drama of Rarity :raritydespair:

By these powers combined we have

Mademoiselle Doo :derpyderp1::derpytongue2:

Well done have :moustache:

#11 · 110w, 3d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>1251733 I shall treasure it always.:applecry:

Spike's face must hurt....a lot:rainbowlaugh:

It might not necessarily be de jure authority; RD is a) in a pretty important position (head of the weather patrol for at least Ponyville) and b) an Element of Harmony, known to have helped in defeating Nightmare Moon and Discord, if nothing else. RD might have been saying that if she asked for Derpy to be banned from Cloudsdale, she would be, especially since Derpy doesn't live in cloudsdale.

#14 · 70w, 18h ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

Oh crap, Derpy was going to take Dash and rip her up to make muffins......:pinkiecrazy:

#15 · 70w, 9h ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

This was fantastic. Good job, friend!

#16 · 70w, 4h ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

The lesson at the end, maybe that should have been Twilight's friendship lesson since she wanted to be  the one to change Ditzy.:twilightoops:

#17 · 69w, 6d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

Cute but the idea that Dash skips on the letter writing feels a bit off.

#18 · 69w, 5d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>2765558 Oh, she's just shy.

>>2760156 Well, Twilight wanted to help. Rainbow wanted her to change, though she certainly wasn't being as literal as Derpy took it. I felt Derpy was best as she was the one who wanted to change for somepony else's sake, and I feel like her lesson was the most valuable.

>>2759474 Thanks, I try.

>>2757479 Shshshhh, that was just a bad dream. Now, just eat this cupcake...

Pretty decent story, so far! The pacing has a kind of episode-like feeling so far. And good lord, Pinkie's "last words" were hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

#20 · 69w, 5d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>2768887 Oh, Stat, I do declare you make me blush like a schoolfilly.:twilightblush:

#21 · 69w, 5d ago · · · Mademoiselle ·

I'm pretty sure Mythbusters proved the bit about hitting the brick wall at 400mph wrong haha.

I enjoyed the story though :p

#22 · 69w, 5d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

I enjoyed. My only criticism would be Ditzy seemed a bit too stupid. Nothing wrong with it, just not my flavor of Derpy/Ditzy.

#23 · 69w, 4d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>2770578

Probably, but then again this is a world where pegasi can stand on clouds.

>>2770699

I don't really see her as stupid. Mostly clumsy and... Well, ditzy. That's pretty much how she was portrayed in her major appearance, so though I'm sure she comprehends temporal physics with ease, sometimes those really obvious things like checking to make sure the bucket you're giving the chickens is full of seeds and not fiery lizards of death. I kind of relate to that.

Poor Derpy. SHE'S FREAKIN CURSED!

#25 · 53w, 5d ago · · · Mademoiselle ·

Then again, this was Mademoiselle Doo, who seemed to be incapable of doing wrong.

The Mary Sue, HANDLED REALISTICALLY.

Ironically. Tornados? In real life? The funnel is just the VISIBLE part of the tornado, the insane winds are all around out!!

I LOVE THIS WORK!

#26 · 53w, 5d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

I told the lovely and charming Mademoiselle Doo everything."

I think you left a word out.

"Rainbow... Rainbow Craaaash. Come out and play."

That's not nice.

I found this entire story, because of it being mentioned on TV Tropes, and RD mentioning how she hated Derpy treating her like a retarded foal. And it finally snapping into place that she had been treating Derpy the exact same way.

#27 · 53w, 5d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>3344609

I think you left a word out.

I don't think so...

Glad you liked the story, though. This was pretty much the first story idea that occurred to me when I first started watching the show, based mainly on her first speaking role. I'd only barely started delving into the fan interpretations of her character at the time, so it was almost all my own raw impressions. It's good to know that it's been received generally well.

I lost it when I read that a tree was on fire! :rainbowlaugh:

#29 · 37w, 1d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>3909585

She's like some kind of subconscious miracle arsonist.

#30 · 28w, 3d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

Hello. I have read what would be considered the sequel to this story, 'Rolling in Beaches'. I liked it and favorited it, but something was bothering me sense I learned about this story and found out it came before what I have read, and that is that I don't really see the relation to each other.

#31 · 28w, 3d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>4203004

It isn't so much a direct sequel as it is set in the same continuity chronologically before. In fact, the events of this fic do become relevent when Derpy shows up again in another sequel, Atlas Strongest Tournament. In fact, her longma master who was alluded to in this story also shows up.

#32 · 28w, 3d ago · · · Best Friends Forever ·

>>4203408

Oh, alright. I was just confused, but that helps:pinkiehappy:

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