Something dangerous lurks in the Everfree, spreading panic and fear to the pony community.
And what will happen when panic starts spreading? The Elements of Harmony will get alerted.
So, the mane six go on a mission in attempt to neutralize the threat.
But when they meet the Abyss itself, things start to go complicated.
A/N: Sequel can be found here.
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Slenderpony*
1057227
>Slenderman.
>As pony.
I personally think that the original is better than the ponified.
Slenderman crossover.
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1057285
A lot of these over here. Wan't another? Here you go!
1057290 WOOT!
1057290
:D
1057347
You found me?
Uhh...
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1057366 Haha of course, us slenderfans need to stick together. it was a good start though.
1057370
Thanks. I thought something like that too, considering this was written tired. Best time to write a scary fic? Nightdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
*Yourswasbyfarbetter*
The way you write hurts my head, but I love Slenderman...
1057392
Please explain, and I may even end the pain
1057398
Take a look at my stories and you'll see the difference. Not trying to be rude, but your story isn't set up in the traditional writing style.
1057409
I guess I grew in to that style...
But no worries about me taking that as rude. Best criticism is the tough one. It makes you better.
1057377 Haha well, just do what I do. Research a ton. Read slender man stories to get your slendy in character. Also, read a bunch of slender man fics so you know what sounds good and what doesn't. The tip I can give you that is the most important is to create conflict. I don't mean having Twilight fighting slenderman in the woods, I mean... make it almost hopeless. Make Twilight the only one who believes. Throw a wrench in her plan, rip a page out of her book. That's what makes a good story.
One thing I've noticed about Slender Man fics is they do him all wrong. You cant have Slender Man talk. You cant have him interact with anyone physically. That's his thing. He gets inside your mind, and drags you to insanity. Then, once you have no hope and no reason to live, he takes you into the woods, and you are never seen again. I hate it when people turn Slender Man into something different than what he is.
Also, DETAILS. The first thing you should do in any new setting is to set the scene. It is a dark and story night. Alright, so what is the temperature? How does it feel against the skin? what does the fog look like? Is it rolling in breeze, or stagnant? Are there birds chirping somewhere off in the distance? Make it so detailed, the reader feels what you are describing. I don't really know if my story even does that, but it's what I'm striving for.
God damn, this comment is long as hell.
1057574
Oh you bet this will go hopeless
I have the cores of the next two chapters put together already. 1-2 hours of writing and they both are ready.
The base idea of my story is that they all see him. All panic. No "You have to believe me!" stuff. And now I feel like an idiot for not using that. (Would have been 3-4k words longer...)
|***|Spoilers: Slendy physically interacts with his victim twice. And the tentacles do the job. And he doesn't talk. No mouth. Talking. It takes Chuck to do that.|***|
Slendy has became a big part of my life since I discovered him. My brain just won't let me got out of it easily. Ultimate solution? Read more! Knowledge level? Slendy is on my door, waiting for me to step out.
Again. Chapter one: Build-up. Chapters 2-3: Action n detail n stuff. So no worries, interaction and hopeless little ponies are coming.
My first chapter is always a little forced. But when the brains get rolling, stuff get's better (hopefully).
And by the way, I wasn't even complaining. Just saying my opinion about your story in relation to mine. Well, meh dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
And so is this one!
1057647 Haha well, that's a way to do it. Just wait, the more you write and read, the better you will get. The Operator was my only story that ever even made it to the popular fic list. Maybe one day something of mine will even get featured! Just remember that writing is fun. If you are doing it to get famous, it wont exactly work out. Write first, worry about getting featured later. At least, thats my motto haha.
1057704
Yours will get there. You'll see
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Hey, I used to write for myself. No way I was even thinking to go famous and all. I'll stick to occasionally publishing here.
And most of all, thanks. For making a great fic and for bothering to read mine
1057715 Haha that sounds good man. Good luck in all your endeavors, and may the force be with you.
And you are most certainly welcome sir. have a smiling twilight (cutest emote on this website)
1057758
Good luck for you too!
*Cute overload, site will go down*
*502*
Slendermane & Slenderman
Stallion or mare?
Or is it just hell incarnate?
1057923
Feel free to go explore the frightening world...
Or just see this image of Slenderman.
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That's the real and original Slenderman.
Stallion or mare? Neither...
1057947
Slenderman...
the thin one wanders
1057971
Creepy huh?
Slendermane has all the swag.
Now if only they had to collect eight pages. *shivver*
When I saw this I was like, oh god am I going to shit my pants like amnesia or slender? But I wiz kinda disappointed with the ending. You could easily turn this into a one shot.
1060047
But it is going to be so much better when it has three chapters!
Yes it could have been a one-shot. But it would have been a bit long and the plot would have been a bit jumpy. So I just snapped it into three smaller chapters.
1058529
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1057370 Don't forget me!
1060560 Slendermeme coming along well?
1063430 Haha my number 1 fans.
1063438 They're all here! All 2 of us!
Edit: Wow, that made me sound like an asshole. I'm sorry. Let's re-word that. Me and OP are here, the guys who took up the entire comment section.
1063430
Done if you like it. Go see page 2 of Adam's story's comments. Preview and download links there.
1063438
Oh please, you're flattering me
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I'm late, am I? 15H since you posted those...
Seriously, I needed that sleep! Here, have a chapter.
Mother of God. Stop freaking me out man. In my paranoia , I'm looking out my window as I type this.
1067074
I know that feeling.
I finished this at around ~3Am. And my house is surrounded by a forest.
1067084 Wow, and I thought I was screwed. Are European forests more creepy than American forests?
Wow very good so far keep up the good work make more chapters :3
1067094
I guess so.
I mean, I live at the close proximity of the Arctic circle. Winter nights are damn long and dark.
And my summer cottage is even worse. No electricity, dark forest, no neighbors since 2006, and the border of Russia is 1km away.
Thanks
You can count on that!
1067110 Well, at least you have the Russians to protect you, right?
1067110 The worst part is that the slender man myth originated from germany. which is a hell of a lot closer to you than us haha
1067116
Heh, I wish.
But seriously, the border guards can be annoying. I mean when they do the check-up rounds with their chopper. Scares all the fishies away.
1067123
True there.
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1067125 Well, then if slendy finds you there....... blame it on the border gaurds?
1067131
You're right!
Blame it all on the Russians!
1067148 So, we have learned to stay away from Germany and blame everything on the Russians. Follow those rules and you'll be safe.
1067154
Also, everything suspicious is North-Korean propaganda. Like sun, the ancient enemy of the mankind...
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1067165 And ummmm, French toast isn't actually French?
1067170
North Korea. It's that simple.
No proof? North Korea.
Hitler is still alive? North Korea.
The cake is a lie? North Korea.
I'm making cross-references to our other discussion? North Korea.
1067180 S-s-s-so many discusions. So many interruptions to the story I'm reading. (trying to at least)
1067193
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1067198 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Edit: DOUBLE NO!
1067204
1067221 My mind is full of what and
1067239
That means it's time to make sense!
Let me start.