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Twilight has an experiment planned, and it centres on Rainbow Dash.
As anxious as she is, Dash really has no right to complain.
It was her idea after all.
Rainbow Dash, you are VERY BAD at expressing your sexuality.
And that's OK.
it seems out-of-character for Twilight to say no shit. And you could replace a few of the "Im not gay"s with something synonamous. Makes it seem less repetitive that way.
This story made me laugh. I think you characterized RD's constant nervousness/denial pretty well, and I though it was pretty cute.
Oh Twilight. You so silly.
It's 'No shit, Sherlock.'
Pretty good, though.
Edit: in before the feature box?
Fucking fantastic XD
Oh my gosh, I was laughing throughout the whole thing! That was hilarious, and Dash being dense makes a strange sort of sense. Nice job
I always wanted Twi to say something like that, but never could persuade her myself. Good show.
Oh, gods. I'm faving this so hard, just because of that punchline.
*sees its by Dawn Fade*
Read Later *click*
Well, this was surprisingly hilarious. Nice job.
Funny stuff! Personally I thought the "no shit" made for a hilarious punchline.
I'm not necessarily convinced that just because we don't see certain behaviors from characters on-screen, that it automatically excludes the possibility of their existence off-screen (so to speak).
Ha, pretty funny.
I liked it well enough, good job!
Absolutely hilarious. You portrayed RD better than anyone I've read from in my experience. The ending line was just too funny, and I actually laughed out loud at a couple parts. Excellent job!
Rivers in Egypt, Rainbow.
"A friendly experiment." you got me there. really cute and well written.
This pleases me.
Could be miles worse. The cussing is kinda anomalous and doesn't really 'add' anything to the story.
Very entertaining. I like it.
And while yes, "No shit" is out-of-character for Twilight, it's also very fitting. So I don't care one way or the other.
Oh, and Fav.
Lol, facking hilarious and cute!
this is why i'm in a million groups.
So I can see stories before they get featured.
Twidash and Writer's Group.
Oh, and this thing it really good. I know this has already been said, but that no shit line was priceless.
I don't know who you are, but thanks to you, my brother just passed out from laughter.
Oh god, this was hilarious!
Dash's characterization was great! I think I love it too much. I'm going to have to favorite this.
No shit that was an amazing story. Oh how I love your writings. Oh gosh, still laughing at that last line. Here have a moustache.
This just goes ta show, when dawn writes somethin, you read it. Imediately, like, no shit, am I right
I hate shipping, yet for some reason clicked on this fic. Yet I love this fic! It just felt so in character and is hilarious! Good job! Best Ship fic ever My only complaint is Twilight last line. I agree she'd say something with a similiar meaning, but not that. oh well. Great job.
Oh and too the feature box! Seriously if this doesn't make it there then that thing is broken.
Lmao... oh yes. This is getting featured.
And that ending was perfect. No doubt it's possible Twilight lets slip a profanity or two under... extenuating circumstances?
He should change it to that. I could so see Twilight saying that!
I'm reading this again.
Gold star and thumbs up for you. RD is perfect here. It's the same dialogue I have her go through in my headcanon every time she's shipped.
one correction: probablyhave = missing a space
Also, brilliant segue: "She wasn’t gay, so that couldn’t be it. " ... "Rainbow Dash stood up straighter"
>>13775561377556 It ain't broke.
TwiDash? By DawnFade? Oh hell yes!
Sweet Harmony that was brilliant. I know I'm echoing like half the other comments, but this is one of the most perfect written portrayals of Rainbow Dash I've ever seen. And the best part, of course, is that it's marked "incomplete".
This is THE best fic I've read in forever!
No shit? That was perfect.
I love this. MOAR
Even if Twilight breaks character a bit there at the end with the age old saying, it was still hilarious.
But I saw the "Incomplete" tag and the title of the chapter hints at continued...
It was a good chuckle for me, which is saying something because I'm not very expressive.
-Y’know, maybe science can be fun after all.
Let's make out. For science.
You've somehow pulled off one of those silly fics that isn't meant to be taken quite seriously and yet have it feel believable. Commence slow clap!
This had me laughing all throughout. The way you wrote Rainbow's thoughts was very in-character, not to mention hilarious.
There's one thing I'd like to know, though; Where in the name of all Heaven and Hell did you get this idea from?
Edit: Ooh, feature box. Should've seen that coming. You know I'm quite jealous of you, right?
LOL MORE! I so hope there will be more!LOL
this was incurably cute and funny
Mmm, yes, your jealousy sustains me.
I have no idea where I got the idea, but I want to go there again and get some more.
well, that was um....well, awe hell this was hilarious! I mean like that ending was perfect!
I don't usually care for human swears in pony fics, but for the sake of humor, that line was great. Thumbed.
Okay.... So you managed to write a fairly common shipfic in a new way and made it hilarious. Is there anything you can't do?