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DawnFade


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Twilight has an experiment planned, and it centres on Rainbow Dash.

As anxious as she is, Dash really has no right to complain.

It was her idea after all.

Fan Reading!

First Published
3rd Oct 2012
Last Modified
3rd Oct 2012
#1 · 138w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

Rainbow Dash, you are VERY BAD at expressing your sexuality.

And that's OK.

:trixieshiftright:

#2 · 138w, 13h ago · 1 · 2 ·

it seems out-of-character for Twilight to say no shit. And you could replace a few of the "Im not gay"s with something synonamous. Makes it seem less repetitive that way.

#3 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

This story made me laugh. I think you characterized RD's constant nervousness/denial pretty well, and I though it was pretty cute. :twilightsmile:

#4 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Oh Twilight. You so silly.

It's 'No shit, Sherlock.'

Pretty good, though.

Edit: in before the feature box?

#5 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Fucking fantastic XD

#6 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh: Oh my gosh, I was laughing throughout the whole thing! That was hilarious, and Dash being dense makes a strange sort of sense. Nice job :pinkiehappy:

#7 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

I always wanted Twi to say something like that, but never could persuade her myself.  Good show.

#8 · 138w, 13h ago · 5 · ·

Oh, gods. I'm faving this so hard, just because of that punchline.

#9 · 138w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

*sees its by Dawn Fade*

Read Later *click*

#10 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Well, this was surprisingly hilarious. Nice job.

#11 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Funny stuff! Personally I thought the "no shit" made for a hilarious punchline.

I'm not necessarily convinced that just because we don't see certain behaviors from characters on-screen, that it automatically excludes the possibility of their existence off-screen (so to speak).

#12 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Ha, pretty funny.

I liked it well enough, good job!

:pinkiehappy:

#13 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Absolutely hilarious. You portrayed RD better than anyone I've read from in my experience. The ending line was just too funny, and I actually laughed out loud at a couple parts. Excellent job!

#14 · 138w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

Rivers in Egypt, Rainbow.

#15 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

"A friendly experiment." you got me there. really cute and well written. :twilightsmile:

#16 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

“No shit.”

bestend ever!

#18 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

This pleases me.

#19 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Could be miles worse. The cussing is kinda anomalous and doesn't really 'add' anything to the story.  

-Chessie

#20 · 138w, 13h ago · 1 · ·

Very entertaining. I like it.

And while yes, "No shit" is out-of-character for Twilight, it's also very fitting. So I don't care one way or the other.

Oh, and Fav. :twilightsmile:

#21 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Lol, facking hilarious and cute!

#22 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

this is why i'm in a million groups.

So I can see stories before they get featured.

Twidash and Writer's Group.

Oh, and this thing it really good. I know this has already been said, but that no shit line was priceless.

MOAR!

/][\

#23 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

I don't know who you are, but thanks to you, my brother just passed out from laughter. :trixieshiftleft:

#24 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Oh god, this was hilarious!

#25 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Dash's characterization was great!  I think I love it too much.  I'm going to have to favorite this. :rainbowkiss:

#26 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

No shit that was an amazing story. Oh how I love your writings. Oh gosh, still laughing at that last line. Here have a moustache.

:moustache:

#27 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

This just goes ta show, when dawn writes somethin, you read it. Imediately, like, no shit, am I right:rainbowlaugh:

#28 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

I hate shipping, yet for some reason clicked on this fic. Yet I love this fic! It just felt so in character and is hilarious! Good job! Best Ship fic ever :pinkiehappy: My only complaint is Twilight last line. I agree she'd say something with a similiar meaning, but not that. oh well. Great job.

#29 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Oh and too the feature box! Seriously if this doesn't make it there then that thing is broken.

#30 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Lmao... oh yes. This is getting featured.

And that ending was perfect. No doubt it's possible Twilight lets slip a profanity or two under... extenuating circumstances? :rainbowlaugh:

#31 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

>>1377328

He should change it to that. I could so see Twilight saying that!

I'm reading this again.

#32 · 138w, 13h ago · · ·

Gold star and thumbs up for you. RD is perfect here. It's the same dialogue I have her go through in my headcanon every time she's shipped.

one correction: probablyhave  = missing a space

Also, brilliant segue: "She wasn’t gay, so that couldn’t be it. " ... "Rainbow Dash stood up straighter"

#33 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

Dat ending.

#34 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1377556 It ain't broke.

#35 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

TwiDash? By DawnFade? Oh hell yes!

Sweet Harmony that was brilliant. I know I'm echoing like half the other comments, but this is one of the most perfect written portrayals of Rainbow Dash I've ever seen. And the best part, of course, is that it's marked "incomplete".

#36 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

This is THE best fic I've read in forever!

#37 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

No shit? That was perfect.

#38 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

I love this. MOAR :flutterrage:

#39 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

Even if Twilight breaks character a bit there at the end with the age old saying, it was still hilarious.

#42 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

Complete?!

But I saw the "Incomplete" tag and the title of the chapter hints at continued... :raritycry:

#43 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh: that ending.

It was a good chuckle for me, which is saying something because I'm not very expressive.

#44 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

     -Y’know, maybe science can be fun after all.

     Let's make out.  For science.

You've somehow pulled off one of those silly fics that isn't meant to be taken quite seriously and yet have it feel believable.  Commence slow clap!

     This had me laughing all throughout.  The way you wrote Rainbow's thoughts was very in-character, not to mention hilarious.

There's one thing I'd like to know, though; Where in the name of all Heaven and Hell did you get this idea from?

Edit: Ooh, feature box.  Should've seen that coming.  You know I'm quite jealous of you, right?

#45 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

LOL MORE! I so hope there will be more!LOL

this was incurably cute and funny

#46 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1377916

Mmm, yes, your jealousy sustains me.

I have no idea where I got the idea, but I want to go there again and get some more.

#47 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

>>1377409:rainbowlaugh:

well, that was um....well:fluttershysad:, awe hell this was hilarious!:rainbowlaugh: I mean like that ending was perfect!:twilightsmile:

#48 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

For science!

#49 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

I don't usually care for human swears in pony fics, but for the sake of humor, that line was great. Thumbed.

#50 · 138w, 12h ago · · ·

Okay.... So you managed to write a fairly common shipfic in a new way and made it hilarious. Is there anything you can't do?

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