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DawnFade

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Twilight has an experiment planned, and it centres on Rainbow Dash.

As anxious as she is, Dash really has no right to complain.

It was her idea after all.

Fan Reading!

First Published
3rd Oct 2012
Last Modified
3rd Oct 2012

Comments ( 273 )

#1 · 80w, 12h ago · · ·

Rainbow Dash, you are VERY BAD at expressing your sexuality.

And that's OK.

:trixieshiftright:

#2 · 80w, 12h ago · 1 · 1 ·

it seems out-of-character for Twilight to say no shit. And you could replace a few of the "Im not gay"s with something synonamous. Makes it seem less repetitive that way.

#3 · 80w, 12h ago · · ·

This story made me laugh. I think you characterized RD's constant nervousness/denial pretty well, and I though it was pretty cute. :twilightsmile:

#4 · 80w, 12h ago · · ·

Oh Twilight. You so silly.

It's 'No shit, Sherlock.'

Pretty good, though.

Edit: in before the feature box?

#5 · 80w, 12h ago · · ·

Fucking fantastic XD

#6 · 80w, 12h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh: Oh my gosh, I was laughing throughout the whole thing! That was hilarious, and Dash being dense makes a strange sort of sense. Nice job :pinkiehappy:

#7 · 80w, 12h ago · · ·

I always wanted Twi to say something like that, but never could persuade her myself.  Good show.

#8 · 80w, 11h ago · 3 · ·

Oh, gods. I'm faving this so hard, just because of that punchline.

#9 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

*sees its by Dawn Fade*

Read Later *click*

#10 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Well, this was surprisingly hilarious. Nice job.

#11 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Funny stuff! Personally I thought the "no shit" made for a hilarious punchline.

I'm not necessarily convinced that just because we don't see certain behaviors from characters on-screen, that it automatically excludes the possibility of their existence off-screen (so to speak).

#12 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Ha, pretty funny.

I liked it well enough, good job!

:pinkiehappy:

#13 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Absolutely hilarious. You portrayed RD better than anyone I've read from in my experience. The ending line was just too funny, and I actually laughed out loud at a couple parts. Excellent job!

#14 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Rivers in Egypt, Rainbow.

#15 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

"A friendly experiment." you got me there. really cute and well written. :twilightsmile:

#16 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

“No shit.”

bestend ever!

#17 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Great!

#18 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

This pleases me.

#19 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Could be miles worse. The cussing is kinda anomalous and doesn't really 'add' anything to the story.  

-Chessie

#20 · 80w, 11h ago · 1 · ·

Very entertaining. I like it.

And while yes, "No shit" is out-of-character for Twilight, it's also very fitting. So I don't care one way or the other.

Oh, and Fav. :twilightsmile:

#21 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Lol, facking hilarious and cute!

#22 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

this is why i'm in a million groups.

So I can see stories before they get featured.

Twidash and Writer's Group.

Oh, and this thing it really good. I know this has already been said, but that no shit line was priceless.

MOAR!

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#23 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

I don't know who you are, but thanks to you, my brother just passed out from laughter. :trixieshiftleft:

#24 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Oh god, this was hilarious!

#25 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Dash's characterization was great!  I think I love it too much.  I'm going to have to favorite this. :rainbowkiss:

#26 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

No shit that was an amazing story. Oh how I love your writings. Oh gosh, still laughing at that last line. Here have a moustache.

:moustache:

#27 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

This just goes ta show, when dawn writes somethin, you read it. Imediately, like, no shit, am I right:rainbowlaugh:

#28 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

I hate shipping, yet for some reason clicked on this fic. Yet I love this fic! It just felt so in character and is hilarious! Good job! Best Ship fic ever :pinkiehappy: My only complaint is Twilight last line. I agree she'd say something with a similiar meaning, but not that. oh well. Great job.

#29 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Oh and too the feature box! Seriously if this doesn't make it there then that thing is broken.

#30 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Lmao... oh yes. This is getting featured.

And that ending was perfect. No doubt it's possible Twilight lets slip a profanity or two under... extenuating circumstances? :rainbowlaugh:

#31 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

>>1377328

He should change it to that. I could so see Twilight saying that!

I'm reading this again.

#32 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Gold star and thumbs up for you. RD is perfect here. It's the same dialogue I have her go through in my headcanon every time she's shipped.

one correction: probablyhave  = missing a space

Also, brilliant segue: "She wasn’t gay, so that couldn’t be it. " ... "Rainbow Dash stood up straighter"

#33 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

Dat ending.

#34 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

>>1377556 It ain't broke.

#35 · 80w, 11h ago · · ·

TwiDash? By DawnFade? Oh hell yes!

Sweet Harmony that was brilliant. I know I'm echoing like half the other comments, but this is one of the most perfect written portrayals of Rainbow Dash I've ever seen. And the best part, of course, is that it's marked "incomplete".

#36 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

This is THE best fic I've read in forever!

#37 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

No shit? That was perfect.

#38 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

I love this. MOAR :flutterrage:

#39 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

Even if Twilight breaks character a bit there at the end with the age old saying, it was still hilarious.

#40 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

nice :twilightsmile:

#41 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

Silly

#42 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

Complete?!

But I saw the "Incomplete" tag and the title of the chapter hints at continued... :raritycry:

#43 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh: that ending.

It was a good chuckle for me, which is saying something because I'm not very expressive.

#44 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

     -Y’know, maybe science can be fun after all.

     Let's make out.  For science.

You've somehow pulled off one of those silly fics that isn't meant to be taken quite seriously and yet have it feel believable.  Commence slow clap!

     This had me laughing all throughout.  The way you wrote Rainbow's thoughts was very in-character, not to mention hilarious.

There's one thing I'd like to know, though; Where in the name of all Heaven and Hell did you get this idea from?

Edit: Ooh, feature box.  Should've seen that coming.  You know I'm quite jealous of you, right?

#45 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

LOL MORE! I so hope there will be more!LOL

this was incurably cute and funny

#46 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

>>1377916

Mmm, yes, your jealousy sustains me.

I have no idea where I got the idea, but I want to go there again and get some more.

#47 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

>>1377409:rainbowlaugh:

well, that was um....well:fluttershysad:, awe hell this was hilarious!:rainbowlaugh: I mean like that ending was perfect!:twilightsmile:

#48 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

For science!

#49 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

I don't usually care for human swears in pony fics, but for the sake of humor, that line was great. Thumbed.

#50 · 80w, 10h ago · · ·

Okay.... So you managed to write a fairly common shipfic in a new way and made it hilarious. Is there anything you can't do?

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