In which Discord, as mentioned previously in the short description, writes a novel.
Now with a (in-progress) comic adaptation created by Diamond06mlp!
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Can I turn this into comic? I will give you full credit😁😁😁
I hope you won't be offended if I tell you that I skipped most of Discord's abomination. I wanted to see what the whole thing was like, but two sentences in, my brain just said "Nope, f
that."
Regardless, I am sufficiently intrigued to want to see where this goes.
AM I actually the only one who finds discord 'literature' a good inspiration for a comedy or not?
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Wait...seriously?
I mean, is it like a commission where I'd have to pay for it or something?
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Nah, I understand.
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No I want to do this for fun😄😄😄
Is Discord a red and black alicorn OC now? I think he is.
Now the only problem is figuring out if he wrote that badly on purpose to annoy Twilight, or if he actually tried his best to write coherently.
Then again, it's in Discord's nature to be chaotic, so I guess I should have expected something this awful.
Also, that upside-down question mark in there is easy to do. Just turn your computer upside down and type.
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BTW, thanks for the watch!
Cool.
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Well, then by all means, go for it!
I will write a comment in which I will comment on this novel written about a novel.
Sorry, this comment was needed. Take a thumbs up for your good work.
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Yay!!
Me, in the middle of reading this story: "I'm getting some serious My Immortal vibes from this."
Story:
Me: "...Oh." *proceeds to laugh hysterically*
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I think typing that Spanish question mark was the only effort he put into writing this thing.
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Yeah the same thing happened to me too. I cringed so much in first few sentences
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Well, mission accomplished, I suppose.
I powered through and read all of Discord’s masterpiece. I was not disappointed. 10/10
That was amazing comedy gold I love it!
Not bad. It lacks a certain sincerity that things like Plan 9 from Outer Space or The Room have. But, it still made me laugh my ass off. Like! Favorite!
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I was going more for the parody route with this one.
Glad you liked it anyway! :)
Uuuuh! This looks interesting.
I know Discord has a twisted sense of humor, but this part made me cringe so much. It's not something anyone should joke about, but apparently, Lord of Chaos didn't get the memo.
I could not stop laughing at Discord's idea of literature. I'm laughing right now just remembering parts of it.
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I was trying to mimic those ridiculously gothic fanfics, like My Immortal. The "Morty McFly" joke was actually a direct reference to that.
Glad to hear you enjoyed it.
I stumbled upon this...
Now I'm just
Excellent job.
~Tips Over A Glass Of Chocolate Milk And Dashes Out.~
Your review is ready on "I Just Want A Comment" forums, here.
I enjoyed this thoroughly, it was one of the best reads I've had in a long time.
As someone who actually does review literature both professionally and here... this sentence is my TOTEM ANIMAL.
Oh my goodness. Um, well, Discord's "writing" was torture, so good job on that...
I will say, as a martial artist, the 'flying ninja kick' part had me in tears.
Nice work on this, and no-I-do-not-mean-you-Discord. Some grammatical and spelling errors, but those are easily fixed with a quick read through.
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Do you mean the intentional ones or the stuff outside of Discord's magnum opus of madness?
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Heh. Outside of Discord -- limited, however. Very, very limited.
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I'll look into it. Any specific spots you noticed?
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Nothing huge. Nothing huge enough to memorize. I'd just suggest one more read-through, to tone everything down.
In all honesty, Discord needs the criticism, not you and your story. Feel free to disregard me.
Someone needs to explain in detail what this means. I keep hearing about My Immortal. But the story itself I can't find, and I don't want too from what I hear.
The second one is new though.
Ha!
*snorts laughing*
Appropriate reaction.
Ha!
After that he never made assumptions again. Ever. About anything.
This is a brilliant satire. I don't know what I was expecting when I read this story. This... wasn't it. It was better. Well done.
While I liked the parody of My Immortal's style and I found the comedy to be very in character, the more meta bits like the inclusion of computers and the turns the story took toward the end were a little tiresome. A lot of the humor's appeal wasn't as strong for me by that point and felt too on the nose. Ideas like this are good stuff, though. I think this is probably the third story I've read where Discord is a bizarre or bad writer who can prove to be very obtuse when it comes to writing conventions. The cruelty he subjected Twilight to by having her as a prereader was delightful, though.
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Well, thank you for being honest. Truth be told, I think I kinda went a bit too far in parodying those videos towards the end there.
Ah, well. Glad to hear you at least enjoyed parts of it.
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I wasn't aware this was based on a video parody. Most stories that have a character writing a story in a story parody a writing style, which was done here. Just be careful when utilizing fourth-wall break and content like memes that haven't been adapted to fit into the pony setting.
- MLP: FiM
- Comedy
- Random
Spike writes disturbing stories about an alicorn stalker. Twilight Sparkle's cheeks occasionally burst into flames.- MLP: FiM
- Comedy
- Slice of Life
Discord takes offense to a restaurant's claim of serving "unlimited" breadsticks.These are pretty good examples of hilarious crossover-meme comedy stuff, one uses writing style humor too. I'd recommend reading others to help learn how to refine the genre because you do have a good grasp on what goes into this style of humor (more than I do tbh).
Love it!!
he really does write a novel!