Alex Mercer had just killed Heller and got himself to start a family (sort of). All that goes down the drain when Blackwatch makes another retarded scheme to get rid of him and his new daughter, Aria Mercer. Surprisingly, it works. But instead of tearing him and his daughter up in a black hole, it sends them to Equestria. How will Alex deal with the ponies AND his daughter, fangirling all the damn time?
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OH GOD ALEX MERCER IN EQUESTRIA EVERYPONY IS FUCKED!
1049323 Relax. I'm not gonna make him the genocidal psycho we all know and love. At least not yet
1049402
Awww, I liked the genocidal psychopath Mercer!
1049593 Because, if you read the comic, Alex's cause was good and Heller became a selfish asshole. Also, I gave him a daughter so he wouldn't be the faggot everyone thinks he is.
1049633 Dude, this is what fanfiction is about. It's supposed to NOT tie into the real story. Get over it. If you don't like it, don't read. If you want a story with Heller in it, make one.
1049633 Dude, this is what fanfiction is about. It's supposed to NOT tie into the real story. Get over it. If you don't like it, don't read. If you want a story with Heller in it, make one. Also, I didn't really like Heller's personality. I prefer the calm type for this.1049633
This gun b good
1049633 have you actually played the first prototype? because i doubt that you would have such an opinion on alex if you did.
anyways to the author: the story is great so far keep going! make sure you have more detail and longer chapters! though i did find that the way that alex got into equestria very similar to another prototype crossover.
1050019 I know. I started reading Prototype crossovers after I started this and found that another one had a similar beginning. I mean to say that this is purely coincidental. I didn't mean for any copyright. Now, what do you think about Aria?
1050038 Seriously, just stop. We get it. You think Alex sucks. We're not going to change your mind. Just go and look for some crossover with Heller in it, or something and leave us alone.
1050060 Thank you, and have a nice day.
1050028 its a very cool idea about alex having a daughter. you could make some kind of moment about Aria's mother. I also enjoy her competetivness ( i mot likely misspeled that) with Alex
1050038 Alex got killed, everything exept from his sister taken away unknown people want him dead, he got betrayed and probably more stuff. James Heller on the other hand got his wife killed and daughter missing and he went and practicly went and commited suicide. Did Alex try to commit suicide? Alex tried to help the city (as you should know from the original game) and Heller was driven by lust for revenge. I do not think describing Alex as a 'major pussy' compared to Heller is correct.
1050076 First, thank you and I will try to keep that in mind. Second, just stop arguing with him. He told me that he would stop talking if we stop talking.
1050090 K! the last statement was writen before i read your response. anyway good luck with the story! :D
1049405 What, you want me to make him kill ponies? You. Are. SICK!!!
Okay, some advice...and stuff. First off, when you change where you are telling the story, it wouldn't kill ya to use a transition. I don't know about you, but I generally do this ~~~~~~~~~ Short, simple, and it tells people I am changing perspectives or story areas. Okay, lecturing done, how bout some support?
I LOVED it, I like the idea of him having a daughter with the same powers as him.
1050974 Thanks! Would you like a spoiler of the next chapter? just a small one though. It won't ruin the experience.
1050678
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Only if they get on his nerves!
1050987 Huh. I guess Blueblood and Diamond Tiara are going home in pieces.....
Great chapter! i am really a person to point out things and nag to people about it but.... the only comment i got (besides that the chapter was awesome) is that the chapter is a bit short (for my taste anyways). i dont mind the chapters getting out later if they're a bit longer. one thing though i do agree with TioHoltzman but like instead of Alex/Aria just constantly killing everything its more like the virus grows 'hungry' (as in it needs to kill and absorb bio mass) and if he gets 'too hungry' the virus (i am talking like the subcontius) begins to go insane and Alex's/Aria's pupils become really small and for them its kinda like they black out while the mindless virus takes control and just wants to absorb something to contain its 'hunger'
1051067 Hmm. Good idea. I'll be sure to think about that. I guess the next chapter will drag out until tomorrow. If I'm lucky, I can finish it by 1 AM! Thanks for the critique!
1051120 Youre welcome! but make sure you dont get exhausted k?
1051328 Wait, I don't want Alex to consume the ponies! Even more with Aria! I must find a compromise! I'll see you when the next chapter comes out! Bye!
Hey! Did you even take into account my advice?! At least don't put all of the talking in one paragraph. When someone new starts talking just double space it. It makes it a lot easier to tell who is talking.
uberhaxornovah
Favorited. Though, I must admit that I haven't read it yet.
However, from the summary, I do think you should add the comedy tag to it (or at the very least, and 'light' comedy tag).
1052021>>1052021 I'm sorry. I didn't have enough time to change the rest. It was late when you sent that. I'll get to work on that.
1052021 There. Done.
1053379 Sorry for being controlling there. I was being a jerk, and I'm sorry.
1053528 It's okay.
Yay new chapter!
...well what was Celestia supposed to do? She flies in, seeing Twilight and co. and there near them, a creature destroying stuff. obviously she sees its a human, and she doesn't seem to care much for humans, so 2+2=4, y'know?
1054589 What do you think?
1054603 I'll show more about that later in the story. For now, you could give me some critique.
1054610
I laiked it.
1054617
well, I'm not great at critique, sorry. I like the idea...but Should I have played prototype 2? somethings here confuse me.
1054644 Playing the sequel isn't necessary, but it helps with understanding. You should know that Alex didn't kill Heller in the game.
1054665
oh.
Asum chapter again! where you said "Im not. At least not entirely." only the first sentence is correct. technically he is not human in any way. its like saying that a changeling is a pony when he desguises himself as one. If you need ideas tell me! i had to think very hard to find anything to point out and only found that (i usually point out atleast 2-3 things) which means you sir and your story is Asum! :D
AWESOME
1060115 Thanks! The next chapter will be up by tomorrow, if I have the inspiration.
Asum chapter as always! the prank was good. the ponies did deserve a scare after they though Aria coudnt handle herself. 2 things though: Viruses can only sleep once and its more of like freezing than sleeping and in the game you could not turn into any infected like hunters and common infected (although you could use the exuse that Aria has that ability)
1060849 OR I could use the excuse that Alex consumed Heller and passed on all improvements (barring powers) to Aria.
1060857 Oh yeah that too. but still awesome chapter though! but then again could heller turn into infected?
1060864 I guess...... I don't really like Heller, so I don't care.
1060886 I personally dislike heller for some odd reason... but meh carnage and mass murder is carnage and mass murder so i dont mind
1060892 Good point. But Heller's still an asshole.
1060915 Yeah i agree with you. they should make a DLC where you could atleast join Alex or (the better one) play Alex's side or after you consume Alex he takes over or something. that would be cool. but that will probably never happen.
1060940 Damn you, Radical!