News of a new world across the sea has reached every corner of Equestria, and Princess Celestia has called for a massive exodus to this new land to help its inhabitants with any sort of aid. The most radical of such aid is the Ponification Potion that will turn the downtrodden and diseased creatures into happy and healthy ponies. Hundreds of Equestrians have answered this call, literally leaping at the chance to help those in need. Shimmer Sprite is one such pony, and before the week is done she will learn that sometimes the best way to help somepony in need is to leave them alone.
Chapters (3)
NO FAIR! Was just gonna start studying for my first exam too... Oh well, it's only one chapter...
And you have props for having the same idea I did, once my current fic I'm writing is done, I'm going to be writing a CB fic from the Equestrian viewpoint at first contact as well, though mine's a little bit further from the norm than yours seems to be hehe
The problem with any HiE (or PoE) or TCB fics is the antagonizing of humans, or making every pony (especially unicorns) extremely powerful.
I know it's supposed to be dystopian, but how come humans can't work together?
And then the natural paranoia and xenophobia we humans have. We wouldn't let ponies into our world, nor we would let them turn ourselves into ponies.
Interesting fic, but Celestia seems like shes brainwashing the ponies (maybe just me being me).
I read this before - where's the rest, you rotter!
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I'll get around to posting it, I swear!
...as soon as I actually write it...
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Originally I did this as a speedfic challenge (I do a lot of those) so I decided to do a more traditional TCB concept. You know, Humans are in the middle of a super depression, there's not enough food for everyone, those in power are corrupt (and stupid), and Captain Planet is no where to be seen. It's meant to be a bad situation, but I have no intention of portraying humanity as, "Dumb barbarians who can't get along and need the pony master race to teach them how things are really done."
As for Celestia...Yeah...she sounded kinda derpy in that opening bit. But don't worry, you'll not see anymore of her for the rest of the fic! I think. Maybe.
...Probably only on TV.
fantastic
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Don't worry about the speech, press conferences always sound forced and inane.
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So that's why no one pays attention when I do presentations...
Great chapter, good pacing and great story overall
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I look forward to future updates
fantastic
Loving it, want to see more!
Aww, they're so adorkably awkward
Another awesome chapter friend, looking forward to the next one
you can write.
at least better than i can.
good job so for.
Thank you so much for updating! Yay! I do like this pair, and their experiences on Earth. The slow, clumsy relationship-forming is wonderfully done. I look forward to your next chapter very much.
...It's beginning to sound like Shimmer Sprite has a few skeletons in her closet. Poor girl
Forced romance is best romance.
Maybe I should comment after I am not about to fall asleep any how please continue to write so I have an excuse of why I am tired in the mornings.