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That Brony Over There 55016

Joined March 2012
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    That Brony Over There's Stories (5)


    **YOU MAY WANT TO READ THIS, HOW SHORT IT IS**

    Alright. So! xxGamer101xx took this down, because she didn't think it was going anywhere. Well, I BEG TO DIFFER!

    I have permission to take over this story. So, here it is!

    Twilight Sparkle is new in town. She has just arrived from Canterlot, where she had been attending the Princess' School. But now, she is thrown into a normal public school, per the ruler's demands.

    That's really all you need to know! Follow the, well, stuff, that happens!

    Note: I am not good at writing descriptions.

    Another note: I couldn't find the picture xxGamer101xx used for the thumbnail. If any of y'all happen to find it, could ya send it to me?

    First Published
    28th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    28th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 23 )

    #1 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I enjoyed this - looking forward to reading more.

    Just as a note, though, in chapter three, Rainbow Dash 'leers' at Pinkie Pie. You should change that word, since leering means to look at in an unpleasant, lascivious way. Like a dirty old man looking at girls, or something.

    #2 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I like this so far. I can definitely see this getting the feature box. Can't wait to read more! :pinkiehappy:

    #3 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    pretty cool that someone picked up this story, i kinda forgot what ch it ended on so i cant wait to see where it goes

    #4 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Yay!  I thought that story title looked familiar!  I edit xxGamer101xx's stories and I helped her name this fic.  Nice to see I'm not the only one who was disappointed that she had taken this down.  I hope you do the story justice.  I only hope Twilight and Trixie can become friends.  That's sort of why I edited the chapter so Twilight offered to help her clean up.  Gamer didn't seem to object to my adding that, so I shall enjoy seeing what you do with this!  :pinkiehappy:

    BTW I found the thumbnail pic Gamer used:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I said this once and I'll say it again, THIS is probably what 'Friendship is Magic' would be like if the show was a Japanese anime. :twistnerd:

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    AH the old fashioned "Is there something you'd like to share with the entire class?" line, never gets old. :rainbowlaugh:

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Pinkie Pie + Braeburn = WTF! :pinkiegasp:

    Big Macintosh + Derpy = Mind Blown Sky High! :pinkiegasp:

    (Kind of like this)

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Needs more saids. Just because your teacher says, "Be sure to use other things than said," That does not mean you should never use said.

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 38w, 1d ago · · 1 ·
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    It's getting worse...

    #10 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I knew there would be a small fanbase that would still be looking for this! I couldn't let such a story die. It's too good.

    Wait: >>1174157 Featured? When?

    >>1174499 Link please.

    >>1175225 Yeah, that's not in any way helpful. More input, if you would.

    #11 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1175214

    Yes, I understand that. You should see improvement as the chapters come out. I'm just too lazy to go back through three chapters and edit such a tiny and insignificant thing.

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1176292

    http://media-cache-lt0.pinterest.com/upload/192317846557661169_ZE9A5qfF_b.jpg

    #13 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1176292

    Sorry, I don't think I worded my comment very good. :twilightblush: I meant to say that this is good enough to make the feature box.

    #14 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1176619

    That's what I thought.:twilightsheepish:

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 4h ago · · ·
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    Awsome story :ajsmug:

    I like these kind of high school stories they never fail to amuse me :pinkiehappy:

    #16 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1185217

    Well thanks.:twilightsmile:

    #17 · Chapter 3 · 37w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Ah! Why is thinking up a new chapter so hard!

    #18 · Chapter 3 · 33w, 3d ago · · ·
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    So far So LOVED can't wait to ready more:pinkiehappy:

    #19 · Chapter 3 · 25w, 6d ago · · ·
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    What happened to this? I miss it.

    #20 · Chapter 3 · 25w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1667397

    Sorry bro, I've been busy.

    #21 · Chapter 3 · 25w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1668587

    No worries. Just venting as I read to find more inspiration. Well, I hope that this can keep going, brother.

    #22 · Chapter 3 · 25w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1674038

    It will. I promise.

    #23 · Chapter 3 · 8w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oooh i want some more chapters of this pleeeeeaaaaseee!pretty pretty please!

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