Humor all around.  Can't wait for more

Awesome!

XDD

lol

that was the most sweetest and humorist first chapter i had ever read...

Spike has a monstrous vocabulary. Soarin' is awesome. Happy time's shall abound!

"I have only known you for twenty-nine days, seven hours, fifty-two minutes, and now reaching thirty-one seconds"

My stalker sense is tingling.

It might've been my dyslexia, but at first, I thought it was Soarin who said to Spike, "I'll go out with you."

>>10578631057863 not necessarily... he might've just remembered the first instant he saw her... but yeah... kinda seems that way doesn't it

VERY theatrical indeed... But I like it. Kudos.

ALL YEAH! Spike got Class and Swag he is the heart brecker

Awww cute

AAND FUNNY

i think it needs more...OF DU MAGIKS!!

>>10578631057863>>10578811057881

It does seem stalker-like, doesn't it? Hahaha. I guess his subconscious had a fine grasp of time.

There should definitely be more stories involving Spike and Soarin

Lyra Heartbanks will lead you through the glorious path to individual freedom!

Lyra Heartbanks

Heartbanks

Her fanon name is Lyra Heartstrings.

Lol This is Awesome

>>10698411069841

Thanks for pointing that out. I'll be sure to edit this.

>>10700171070017 No problem, and I love Spike's expanded vocabulary. Strangely, he reminds me of myself whenever he does those monologues

I can totally see Soarin's personality in this story/play in the actual show! I'm lovin' this, keep it up!

>>10698411069841 It's not fanon, it's canon. Hasbro said so.

>>10955011095501 They did? Huh, didn't remember that. oh well

Oh hell yes...

Okay, you are officialy one of my favorite authors, and as such here is a word you will hear from me quite often, MOAR, oh and speaking of which, MOOOAAAAAARR! Seriously, I need more, great fic dude!

Cooliofir135

Okay, please don't let this end up like consent, never gettting updated. I am back to edge you on to give us all more of this awesome play/story/thingy.

Cooliofir135

I noticed a few missing "" quotations on what was supposed to be dialogue. You might want to fix that.

this should be good.....

That was simply amazing , i have no words to describe how amazing but I will gauge it as amazing +100..

A teenage high school romance comedy? Screw that.

A teenage high school romance comedy with ponies? I must see this

You should continue this.... It was getting really good.... REALLY good....

>>10700171070017 dude you should write an update because... it is awesome and i really don't want this story to die.

>>15363531536353 They has a different account now.

>>15688801568880 tell me where to find it I need to read this story

>>15692661569266 Well, he actually hasn't updated this story since moving.MallaJong1 is the new username.

this is awesome

this is awesome

The hook has a octopus cought! LEAVE THE FISHING ROD I REPEAT, LEAVE THE FISHINGROD!!!

xD You must continue!!!