I remember my first oreo. And then there's a three day gap. And then more oreos.

This is the most adorable thing ever. All of my yes.

Image: http://mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw2547-woona_by_staticwave12-d4lw5ol.png

Haha, thanks guys.

I give you thumbs up and a in order to congratulate you on this pointless but wonderful story

When I clicked this I expected something really really crappy.

This fic is the first thats made me laugh in a long time. Bravo sir.

>>11302441130244

And I greatly appreciate it.

Lol, You author, deserve a cookie.

One note.. "strange monochromatic was trying to intimidate her."

Monochromatic thing? Animal? Plant? I just wanted to know what Luna thought it was. Not that there was anything wrong with it, just felt it could have used a little bit to know what she thought of it.

Still, a great read.

>>11302471130247

Glad I could be of assistance.

Funny story, also Double Stuff Oreo's+Whipped Cream= Awesomeness

>>11302611130261

Well, Luna didn't even have any idea what it was until Celestia tells her.

>>11302661130266

I'll have to try that sometime.

That's the most nonsensical fic I've ever read...

I love it!

>>11302811130281

Nonsensical is my middle name. I try to put it into every fic I right, haha.

Inb4 Featured -_-

I have one thing to say: 'MERICA. Like

>>11302931130293

I doubt this is gonna get featured. Too many other good fics out there.

>>11302961130296

Haha.

So much cute.

Sure it's not love.

But it's still sweet.

>>11303071130307

Indeed.

I wonder what'll happen when Luna finds out that you can take one side off of two Double Stuff cookies and stick them together to make a Quadruple Stuff.

d'awwwwwwwwww

Well, after looking at the fic, and then your comments, I have only this to say.

I think we are going to get only fine.

>>11303161130316

My God, I've never even thought of that.

>>11303001130300

Worth a try

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png

Oh well, 'tis still a great fic

(Or WAS IT "worth" a try?)

>>11303351130335

Thanks a bunch.

I think I just wasted 5 minutes of my life.

God, I loved this one. Loved, loved, loved this one.

>>11303401130340

Hopefully you can find a way to recover them.

>>11303001130300

Far more ordinary fics got featured anyway. I too think this will at least pop up and say hello to the great big box in the corner of FireFox (or whatever browser you are using )

Great style, very imaginative, original by all means -- great stuff

>>11303501130350

I'm using Chrome, but I see what you're saying.

D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawww

>>11303471130347 I don't mean any disrespect to you but there has been so many of these really short fics recently, and I am simply tired of them. The story was cute, but it's marked as a comedy and I'm afraid I didn't find it funny.

>>11303621130362

I can understand that. I knew not everyone would find the humor behind it, well, humorous.

Thanks for reading, either way.

Haha cute fun story, I liked it.

Nintendo.

>>11303901130390

Haha, you're the first one to mention that. I hope everyone gets the reference.

I loved it!

>>11304491130449

Thanks!

Im a little scared to ask , but what made you want to write this story

>>11304561130456

I ate an Oreo. No joke. I ate one, and thought, "You know, this reminds me of Princess Luna for some reason," and then the idea hit home.

>>11304531130453 That's exactly the response I was hoping for.

That cover image is probably the second cutest pony pic I have ever seen

>>11304961130496

Haha, what's the first?

>>11305011130501

One of the wallpapers on the top of this site.

Specifically the one withRainbow and twilight in the hospital. It just has DAAAAAAAAAAWWWWW written all over it

This is great, but I did notice one minor thing:

Suddenly, a soft pop shattered her clam and steady mind.

I assume you meant 'calm', unless you were trying to insinuate that everyone's favorite Princess of the Night is actually a bivalve in disguise.

Other than that, though, this is short, sweet, and hilarious. Keep up the good work!

>>11305561130556

Oh, crap! Thanks for letting me know.

>>11305441130544

Oh, yeah, I get what you're saying. I like the Flutterdash one, personally.

This was....... surprisingly good. And what the hell was in that oreo!? I want one! I want to go to the land of milk and cookies

>>11305561130556

Oh... I read it as a totally different type of clam. But then it would be rated M for Mature, huh?

>>11303961130396

I didn't get the Nintendo reference. Care to enlighten me?

Once again, great job.

Image: http://gifrific.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/asian-thumbs-up.gif

Prolly eating an oreo too

This was a very funny story! It got me inspired to write a short story like this myself!

>>11305961130596

First off, that's just wrong.

Second, there's a running joke among bronies that Luna is a gamer. Not really sure where the idea came from, but oh well. Another thing is that most older folk tend to call every gaming console in existence a "Nintendo". I thought it'd be kinda funny to make references to both of these things.

>>11306061130606

Thanks! I look forward to reading it!

>>11306171130617

Oh, okay.

Hey, it's you who goes around breaking people's clams, not me! I'm the victim here!

The scene made me giggle either way. Especially how Celestia made sure that every electronic device in her vicinity IS a Nintendo My first guess is that she would decree that everything be called Nintendo. And every pony called Ray.

>>11306471130647

Haha, that made me laugh.

Darling that was a wonderfully cute little fic; thank you

Ciao darling

Dude! Random and cute! With JPL down, I find myself checking up on the other sites I frequent a lot more often, this one included and therefore was able to catch it on the front page still, BUT HOW THE HELL DO YOU GET 52 FREAKING COMMENTS!

...points off for Luna's final line of dialogue (meeeeeeeemes aaaaaaaaagh ) but overall, a very funny and adorable piece of fluff. ^_^

That picture made me read this. 100% worth it

who knew oreos were

Image: http://mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw1526_SdyYn.jpg

>>11307021130702

I have no bloody idea.

>>11307171130717

Ah, memes... Ya love 'em or you hate 'em...

>>11306751130675

Thanks!

>>11307351130735

That was my intent.

>>11307451130745

I dunno.

Haha! That is the most adorable thing ever! Who knew such a short story about oreos could be so...amazing...

>>11307941130794

Glad you think so!

are you happy, now i have diabetes

>>11308071130807

I hate it when my stories do that to people.

>>11305961130596

...

ಠ_ಠ

I do not want to be the hater here....

But I do not see any point in this story.

XD

>>11309021130902

There is no point. Hence the "Random" tag.

Three thumbs down... I find this discouraging for some reason...

I enjoyed this very much. A few mistakes should be fixed, but overall the short story was very entertaining.

>>11309401130940 Sorry. You just stuck a nerve here an I have nothing against you personally.

The whole story is that I am recently rather angry at the content of feature box. Instead of great stories it now gathers oneshots from popular authors.

Aaand great stories end up in limbo with only few views.

>>11309751130975

Mistakes, such as?...

>>11309801130980

Yeah, I know what you mean. It annoys me too.

HOLY CRAP IT'S FEATURED!!!

I'm so happy right now!

Now we just need Celestia eats a Jaffa Cake.

>>11310271131027

*Writes down idea for future use*

Good think they found her, the long term effects of untreated sugar shock can be.... interesting.

Image: http://images.wikia.com/mlp/images/6/69/First_Pinkie_Pie_smile_S1E23.png

>>11310341131034

You have to admit, it'd be pretty awesome to see Luna like that.

...I open a pack of Oreos, begin consumption.

This immediately pops into the featured box.

WHAT WITCHCRAFT IS THIS?

WHO WOULD DARE DISLIKE THIS!

>>11309941130994 Said by a guy that got featured with a oneshot.

>>11310601131060

Why, the magic of friendship, of course!

Or something like that.

That title image is giving me chest pains.

>>11310691131069

Well, to be fair, I said that before I discovered it was featured.

>>11310651131065

I... I don't know.

>>11310801131080

I'd contact your local physician if that keeps happening.

Ok, make this 2500 words, and get if featured. This story deserves EQD!

You will   take my moustaches and like them.

>>11311141131114

Thanks, haha, but I don't know how I could get it to 2500 words without it seeming kind of draggy.

>>11311201131120

I've taken your mustaches and I like them.

>>11310861131086

"Yes Doctor, I experienced an onset of intense pain in my chest, after seeing a tiny alicorn princess eating a Oreo the size of her own body... Why are you looking at me like that?"

>>11311211131121  I could probably help you with that.  May I?

My heart melted the instant I saw Luna and an Oreo.  

You sir have won the Internet.

Usually I don't read fic's like this. but this one was different. I can highly understand why it has been featured. I myself had a "dawww" moment when I looked at the cover pic. in other word's, Good job. I salute you sir.

What about the layer one with three cookies and two different frostings?

>>11311371131137

Yeah, sure. Message me.

>>11311341131134

>>11311401131140

I'm honored.

>>11311431131143

Thank you.

This is going to the first slot of the featured story box.

Next time, Luna eats a white fudge covered Oreo.

Very random and funny. I do, however, agree with some of the people who are annoyed at short oneshots by popular authors getting into the feature box. It discourages me, because it means in all likelihood, my fanfic, "Shining in the Darkness," will never get up there.

You should totally check out "Shining in the Darkness" by the way. I haven't really gotten the actual plot going yet, but it goes into Shining Armor's backstory, and the kinds of experiences he's had as the Captain of the Royal Guard. Also, Discord's involved. As is a mysterious unicorn who has powers similar to Discord.

...SHAMELESS PLUG FTW!

I say. This is a simply divine story. You simply must continue. Luna has yet to discover my personal favorite oreo. Mint oreos. They are especially fabulous when you take the mint creme out and put it on another. By the end you have a tower of mint oreo goodness.

I wonder what Luna would do once she discovered the heaven that is Nutella.

...

...

By Celestia's Beard...I'll be write back!