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Follow Twilight Sparkle, Ponyville's librarian, in finding out the dark secret hidden within her good friend, Pinkie Pie, as a new crook appears in town and causes havok, and all signs point to a relation with Pinkie.

First Published
7th Aug 2012
Last Modified
21st Oct 2012
#1 · 123w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This sort of writing is extremely hard to do, because if you don't do it very well indeed then you may as well not have done it at all; but here is an author who, with effort and cautious observation, has succeeded in mimicry of not just a genre or style, but an entire era of storytelling. I am extremely impressed, and await the next installment with bated breath and eager mind.

ALSO THIS IS REALLY GOOD YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITING IT:rainbowlaugh:

#2 · 122w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Good story, keep on writing:pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy:

#3 · 122w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Robert Louis Stevenson would be proud of you, keep up the writing :)

#4 · 122w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

This receives far too little love. I adore it!:twilightsmile: Oh, and the Ms Hide pun was frankly delicious.

#5 · 122w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I admit it took me a min. to get into the groove of the way you where writing,but I love it!! It makes me think of ponyville, but back in the time of cobblestone streets, and a era of long ago..Sorry if I got over dramatic there, but I love how this is going so far and look forward to more,,:pinkiecrazy:

#6 · 119w, 6d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Yay, a New Chapter!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

#7 · 119w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

This is seriously fantastic. I have no clue why it doesn't have more love! You've woven Pinkie's signature style of speaking into the overarching narrative style fabulously.

#8 · 119w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Much :heart: and I look forward to a new chapter! :pinkiesmile::twilightsmile::pinkiecrazy::twilightoops:

#9 · 116w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 5 ·

Still loving this! The murder was particularly well written. Hurrah!

#10 · 45w, 10h ago · · · Chapter 7 ·

Please continue this story. It sends chills down my spine reading it. Its exilerating.

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