First post!

I simply adored the potential of it. Now I MUST know how it will go between Twi and Dashie

2nd post!

But, as it turned out, Rainbow Dash was napping right next to the window. When she found out that her love interest loved her back, she dove straight into Twilight as she trotted out the front door.

And then they fucked.

Homophobic Rarity is best Rarity! LOL Just kidding. Homophob Rarity is worst Rarity.

honestly? I would of prefered this idea of story, but as comedy. Also, shrink her so she will love you? Twilight, wtf were you thinking.

6th

Definitely will keep an eye on this. Great job!

>>11395241139524

In other news, I like this. This is relevant to my interests.

>>11397221139722 There was a clopfic where RD used Poison Joke on AJ so they could have some fun.

>>11397771139777 That's how I imagined it continuing!

Next chapter

>>11399011139901

Whats that fic

>>11399241139924 Dun remember, dun want to.

>>11399011139901 My Little Stashie ref.

You sly devil you.

>>11400051140005

Actually, no. It wasn't from My Little Stashie. Actually, what are you talking about that is from My Little Stashie, again?

Is it sad, funny, or just right that Twilight's only two romantic friends are Spike and Rarity?

And everything will be perfect!

>>11400391140039

>>11400051140005

He means the 'and then they fucked'-type ending, which is most definitely not a reference to My Little Stashie as it has been around for far longer.

>>11401461140146

Oh. Yeah, "and then they fucked" is a term that has been used and popularized by many people, including myself, and the My Little Stashie author.

>>11401731140173

>>11401461140146

Theeeeeen I'm just a noob

>>11404101140410 *le pats on back*

It's alright, we all have our moments.

>>11405031140503

Image: http://memberfiles.freewebs.com/67/68/75036867/photos/PONIES/applejack%20derp.jpg

>>11405981140598

Happens more than you'd expect.

>>11397221139722 "If I can't find a friendship problem, I'll make a friendship problem." Sound familiar? Twi's not exactly the best under stress, ahahaha.

>>11419981141998 Anyway, I'm intrigued to the idea so far in, but if you'll allow me to say, if you were going to explain the fic content in the description, might I suggest actually getting to that point in the story before you post? At the moment, since it's not actually at the point of Twilight shrinking Rainbow, it seems less of a "Oh lawd, I want to see what happens next" feeling, and more of a "jeez, spoilers much?" feeling.

Not saying it works to the detriment of the writing, but so far, it's hard to judge the story as a whole since we basically only have the premise at the moment. Keep at it though, I want to see what happens next.

>>11421161142116 I was thinking the same thing when typing that up but then I just figured the title and cover image was spoilery enough. Guess I was right the first time. ^^ Thanks for the tip.

fail twilight

LOL, My god, i remember my first telling some one i liked them.

Same result on both ends...

Ahh, sad memorys.

FRIENDZONED.

>>11493591149359 Indeed. Hope you're enjoying this.

Hey bro, just wondering if you have an open spot for a proof reader? I noticed a mistake or so while reading, wondering if you need anyones help :3

5 moustaches for epic Spike!

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Its Okay Twi..... It happens

I keep hugging the screen but, dammit, nothing's happening!

you have my attention and my favorite i cant wait to see how this all plays out

k

Sorry this took so damn long to post but I've had food poisoning and I really am stuck on writing this now. So, enjoy this super short chapter that took a painfully long time to write.

If you want to help me and give me ideas and inspiration and all that you can inbox me or comment 'cause I like comments, I do.

Thank you to those who have given this story a big ol' thumbs up and a favorite. Makes me feel all good and warm inside.

Why isn't this story also tagged as "comedy" or "random"? I mean, it's so bonkers! Definitely a guilty pleasure.

I love psycho Twilight.

Okay, Dashie, as soon as she falls asleep, chew threw the string, and fly to Twilight's parents, and tell on her, then tell her brother, then the princess.

>>12191201219120

Killjoy

>>12176351217635 Sorry about the food poisoning. Is it serious?

>>12202281220228 Nah, I'm doing fine now. Thankyou for the concern.

>>12202751220275 It's not fatal in the worst case, right? How bad was it though?

"You're right, Rarity. Dashie won't hate me over some crush I have on her."

Famous Last Words, Twilight.

This is Australia...

The worst bit is Twilight's calm happiness. Its freaky.

Can't wait to see where this goes!

This is Australia...

>>12202751220275>>12324461232446 im gonna love and tolerate the fuck outta you

Based on all the things that Twilight can do with Dashie in this state, I kinda wonder how long this is going to be rated everyone.

>>12358331235833

Erm... Thanks?

I fail to see how this particular comment applies to my comment.

This is Australia...

Pinkamina Twilight? + = OH GOD

Sorry the next chapter is taking like a bajillion years but I haven't died and it will be up soon.

Shit is gonna hit the fan in the next chapter. Thankyou for your patience.

Tiny Dash incoming, this pleases the weird me~

<- this sums my feels up.

Tiny Dash in three, two, one...

This is crazy.

But kinda adorable crazy for some weird reasons.

A + combo crazy so to say.

>>13815911381591 Adorable crazy was my aim. Seems to suit Twilight in a strange way...

>>13866081386608

The only thing that´s left for wonder is: Will Dashie like crazy adorableness cause AND over her?

Run. Stop her. Kill her.

Oh holy.... bucking....

Please, PLEASE write more of this!

It all reminds me of this.

Insane Twilight shrinking Rainbow Dash? That's a completely different kind of romance (if we can call it romance xD)

Chevan approves. Well done!

>>16378251637825 I promise you I will finish this!! I'd like to say I haven't been working on this so much because of college but that would be a lie; I'm actually just really lazy. I'm also still unsure on how I want this to end but I'm sure it'll come to me. Hopefully I'll post a new chapter within the next week. I'm glad you approve.

There isn't anymore?

Will there be anymore of these?

Also, great story!

>>17509661750966 There will be more. I'm just lazy. Or maybe I'm just unbearably evil.

Nah, I'm just lazy.

I have started writing the next chapter and thinking "Nah, that sux." and starting over about 5 times now. But believe me there will be more!

INB4 Twilight kills RD eventually

FIIIIIINALLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

>>22403672240367 I know right?! I'm sorry it took so long.

>>22403772240377 6 months lsdfghpaifhpasdfhvpaohf

>>22403832240383 Shoulda left it for another three and this chapter could've been my baby.

>>22403992240399 So this means I need to write a new chapter 9 months in order to make it fully "grown"? Nice one /)

I thought this story was left for dead. I was this close *makes inch with my hoof* to getting rid of this in my Read Laters.

>>22405402240540 I'm glad you didn't. Hopefully this is worth the wait.

I like where this is going.

69 COMMENTS! IT'S A SEX THING!

>>22411532241153 Sorry, 70 now.

Also, god this is creepy.... and I like it.

>>22411532241153 SUPRIZE ANAL!!!!

This story is hillariously macabre. Keep it going.

The answer? Shrink her.

I'll try that the next time I get friend-zoned or rejected

>>22436572243657 Good plan. Let me know how it goes.

I'd forgotten how insane twilight had turned in this story.

It's kinda creepy.

This is Australia...

I need more!

and I want it NOW!

Well, Congratulations, Rainbow Dash. You finally managed to send twilight off the deep end.

>blod violence and death threats

>rated everyone

>sex?

>MATURE BAN IT ALL HIDE THE CHILDREN

that's some seriously fucked up shit right there.....

>>24173512417351 >greentexting on FIMFiction

>>24199792419979 my text isn't green...

>>24200342420034 You're right; it isn't.

>>24200342420034 You. I want your autograph.

>>24297422429742 hm?...

>>24301502430150 He wants your autograph.

>>24310942431094 k , how do i give it to him?.....

>>24320992432099

Write a note that reads:

"Dear Mr. Orangeboom,

Please have sweet, sweet babies with me.

Signed,

*your signature and username*

Take a picture.

Post it as a comment or as a private message to him. You will be rewarded your weight in gratitude.

>>24362762436276 how do you post pics in comments?....

Famn rainbow dash, just damn =(

Chaptet 6 please