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After returning from the Dragon Migration, Spike begins to feel even lonelier with an empty space inside him (even though he proclaimed the ponies as his family)... All he wants is one thing really and the only pony who can give him that is a certain lavender unicorn
Collab done with Darth Link 22 (Author of Post Nuptials and Families... big thanks to you man!)
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Manly tears were shed...even though I am female
Gah! Ugh.... My heart... To much sweetness... Dying of... Awesome fic... Best way to die... Ever. *Expires.*
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gah! *dead*
Oh god. The sweetness is contagious!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't think Spike would ever look at Twilight as a mom.
That aside this story has great emotion.
Such a
wonderful 
fic...
I d'awwwwwwwed. So hard.
so. very. hard.
Quite a nice story. Well done, Myth!
WHY IS THIS NOT FEATURED!
1040635 Not enough views, not enough likes, not enough favorites.
Algorithm is used to decide these things, give it time, perhaps the story will continue to gain popularity and will be features. Kay? ^_^
A beautiful story that shows that there's family even in friendship.
There has been a good run of Spike/Twilight fics lately!
this is just a great story short, simple and enjoyable
Simple and sweet. Too many writers try this sort of thing and get caught up on finicky little points that detract from the story. You pulled it off perfectly though by keeping it simple and having them say what needed to be said.
Hats off to you!
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I agree with this one. Sister perhaps, but not mom. Very sweet story though.
Awwww, that ending is so sweat
Diabetes!!!! I now have Diabetes
This is everything I love in a Spike story. Please make more.
I want to thank all of you for liking this one-shot... but I couldn't have done this without Darth Link 22, look out for his fics that his writing now
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I CANNOT EXPRESS HOW MUCH LOVE I GIVE THIS STORY...
*sniff*
It's awesome! and I cried
...I ought to write another Twilight and Spike story! THank you soooo much for posting! You made my day!
I CANNOT EXPRESS HOW MUCH LOVE I GIVE THIS STORY...
*sniff*
It's awesome! and I cried
...I ought to write another Twilight and Spike story! THank you soooo much for posting! You made my day!
No matter how much I love Spilight shipping, I love this story as well.
and you know the why ....
y ustedes saben el por que....
I'd just like to interject for a moment here...
According to canon, Spike was raised by Celestia for the first few years of his life. But this is better.
And I like imagining Celestia's response to the letter. "Hey Luna! Twilight just got knocked up! I think she says Spike did it!"
Can we get atleast 1 more chapter?
Well since my phone won't let me send PMs on it I'll just reply here
but like a chapter on "the Very next day" like what twilight and spike do for the day or a few years later where they and twilights friends celebrate spike being her official son or something
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Hmmm.... That does sound tempting... will need to speak to my Collab
Aww nicely done
Since you guys ask so nicely for another chapter... giving it to you
D'aw! So cute! I prefer the brother/sister relationship, myself, but this was awesome.
He noticed Twilight doing the same on her own body, before walking to his side and looking down at him. “Now Spike, hold onto me please,” she instructed. He complied as he wrapped his arms around her leg. “Now close your eyes, until I say to open them.”
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He was confused, but obeyed nonetheless. Twilight used her magic to form a sphere around them that soon closed in on itself. With a pop, they were gone.
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Thank you
Great story, but you just might want to fix that little bit where it shows some code
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Been fixed
Lovely
HNNG~
YES. CONTINUE! Or something. Either way, I enjoy expanding upon the SpiLight relationship whether it's romantic or motherly.
not a bad story, but I thought it was already established that Twilight was spike's mother...
Ah well.
Oh. My. Gosh.
I just gotta say this fic is damn near perfect. The first chapter is something I wish they'd touch more on in the show (come on Season 3...), while the second is just cute beyond words!
Kudos to you my good man!
The level of D'AAAAAAWWWW is too damn high!
I really wish the show could do something like this. It would show they had serious guts if they made an episode specifically aimed for adopted kids with Spike and Twilight as the main focus. This is one of my favorite stories on this site just because I support the mother/son relationship of those two.
For now, I'll just stick with this story! I don't think I can give you enough props for this.
You sir, kick ass!
Love it!
I hope their relationship is defined more clearly in the series. They need more sickeningly sweet moments together.
I personally dislike the idea of the two having a mother/son relationship. Lauren Faust's original intention was to have Celestia raise Spike, and it's pretty clear (or so I thought) that Spike is supposed to be a stand-in for a little brother. The show is, after all, aimed at little girls who typically have younger siblings, not kids.
Although I do hope that this image of their relationship dies sooner rather than later, this is probably the only fanfic ever written (aside from everything written by The Descendant ) that that I really loved.
And thank-you for pointing out that major problem with Winter Wrap-Up. Cindy Morrow obviously did not think that one through very carefully. And yet, even if he never would have drowned on the show, it is still unfortunately canon that the ponies were laughing at him while he got sick. That episode cannot be fixed.
TWILIGHT NOOOO!!
Don't shove Spike down the hole of the Pegasus machine in the Rainbow Factory!!
In the Rainbow Factory, where your fears and horrors come true...
Sorry everyone, the reference had to be done.
Aside from that, a real heartwarming fic. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to call 911. My heart stopped functioning 2minutes ago
OHMEGARSH! this story was to damn sweet.......I did a sonic rainpuke!
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For realz.....this was very heartwarming! keep it up!
Okay, I've got really über-fantabulousticly-awesome news, and very, very minorly bad news
über-fantabulousticly-awesome news: this is f***ing amazing! Keep it up!
Very, very minorly bad news: in the first chapter you ought to put horizontal lines between your perspective changes. It really tripped me up at first.
All-in-all: you are awesome.
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Lol, it can read that way.
That was a cute story. Even though I think that the mother/son thing is kind of a weird, though generally nice, way to go with Twilight and Spike, I liked it.
Kudos to you, sir.
Ermahgurd, Spike and Twilight mother-son fan fic! I absolutely love those kind!
1040379 I'd say more like a sister.
It's "souvenir," spelled wonkily because it's originally French.
But yes, many d'awws are had.