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Zonfic 2180

Joined August 2012
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    Zonfic's Stories (2)

    • A Special Night
      Twilight gets a suprise visit from Luna one night. Secrets are soon found out about each other.

      7,041 words · 3,926 views · 370 likes · 25 dislikes
    • The Dark Night
      Princess Luna has a secret that no pony not even her sister knows about. And it has come back!
      5,584 words · 605 views · 27 likes · 2 dislikes
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    Princess Luna has had a secret hidden away for a long time. No pony knows of it, not even Celestia. Now her secret has come back to haunt her. She will have many tough challenges to face and difficult decisions to make. These actions could lead to Equestria's demise, or prosperity. Will she be able to overcome the challanges, or will she fail?

    My first fic hope you all enjoy and constructive critisism is welcome!

    First Published
    6th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    14th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 19 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Um..... maybe you should of made this chapter longer, you're gonna have a hard time getting people interested with such a short nip bit.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1039773

    Yeah sorry bout it being so short but I meant to already have another chapter up. It should be up later today hopefully. That or I'll just make this chapter longer!:twilightblush: Thank you for telling me!:twilightsmile:

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    good plot, and i know how difficult it can be to make a long chapter. this though has the right length to be continued in any direction you feel. keep going.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1040151

    Thank you very much! I needed a boost in spirit!:twilightsmile:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    ok, I'm interested

    tracking ENGAGED!

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1041435

    Thanks!!!:twilightsmile:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1042929

    :twilightoops: DUM DUM DUUUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 41w, 3d ago · · ·
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    insert "shitsgoingtahell.jpg"

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #11 · Chapter 2 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #12 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Tell them what all good wizards say to people who ask "how?"

    #13 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1087810

    I agree to this statement! and thanks for reading so far!:twilightsmile:

    #14 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    very good, and thanks for following me:pinkiehappy:

    #15 · Chapter 3 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1092996

    Any time! And thank you so much for reading my story! I'll be returning that favor soon!:twilightsmile:

    #16 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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    cool story brah. :ajsmug:

    #17 · Chapter 3 · 38w, 21h ago · · ·
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    >>1087810 you could always tell them a wizard did it!

    #18 · Chapter 3 · 27w, 5d ago · · ·
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    DUDE awsome story bro luna is best princess NO DISCUTION SHE IS THATS FINAL anyway as always moar please :fluttercry:

    #19 · Chapter 3 · 27w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1597201

    Thank you and I'll try to get more to you all soon, hopefully.

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