last paragraph.  HNGGGGGEEE!!!!! GREAT ENDING!!

And read... Interesting.. Has my attention.

If he becomes weak from the harmony magic, shouldn't he have died a long time ago? And why does Twilight suddenly know chaos magic when they enter the Everfree forest? Why not in Ponyville?

>>10920161092016

All will be revealed, he isn't 100% at the end of the chapter and there are more forces at play here trying to kill and protect him than I have revealed to you. You'll see why soon enough, but the why not for Ponyville, simple. The Everfree Forest is the one place not ruled by their harmony magic. Giant monsters and chaos envelopes the forest constantly. Flowers that play jokes, monsters, magic as old as time.

interesting very interesting indeed im looking forward to what happens next but i know shit is about to go down but... i dont understand... why are they trying to kill him?

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>>11063201106320

First off please edit your comment instead of posting that many times, also I haven't had the time with college coming up to edit my proofreader's work. I'm using a proofreader outside of the MLP universe so they do not know.

Interesting start for this tale. It would drive me up the wall to have the freedom of a new body and be asked to stay hidden utill somepony can come up with ways around the obvious differences.

I am of the opinion though that if he get his cutie mark, it will stick him there since it means he found his place in Equestria.

Somehow i dont think he would be too dissapointed at being a permanent resident. ;)

>>12694791269479

That may be, I'm still writing for this, I'm just really really busy with school and this new podcast I'm doing. I will post a new chapter about this sometime soon

Gasp! cliffhanger Great chapter

great MOAR

A pony with horns, wings and a weird fur colour

Wat?

Isn't a dragon crossed with a pony called a 'Kirin'?

>>16948441694844 that's what I'm thinking. I had to double check to make sure it didn't really tell us what he looked like. I'm thinking bat wings with devil horns or something like that...

I haven’t eatten anything since getting out of the Hospital I should probably eat something eat something.

we have problems...

good story so far. guess it was a dragon pony. So, how do the horns look? unicorn style, devil style, billy goat style?

hope you get back to this soon... good story

>>17015391701539

I'm here, just doing some moving lately so I've been off the grid.  Yes a Kirin would NORMALLY be so, but that's is Easern Mythology which I am weak in, so I bent it around Discord making half breeds for teh lulz.