Insanity is just creativity to the nth degree.
Rarity knows the power a gift can have. She can see the ripples and effects that an offer of generosity can make. This is the story of how the greatest gifts can give rise to love and peace and triumph, or they can give rise to chaos as they tear those that touch them apart.
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Darling please get this story written as quick as possible, I implore you. I can't wait to hear how Rarity managed to dismantle and destroy her friends. You have the start of a wonderful story. I have always seen the possibility for Rarity to be an Ice queen, and wait eagerly for your updates
Ciao dear
I buckin' love this story.
It is amazing.
Sir or Madam, you're correct your writing style is very different. I, for one, love it. I can't wait to see the end of Rarity's plan and if Luna can influence her in some way.
Wonderful chapter darling; ciao
Dear, first I want to say thank you. I appreciate the fact that you are taking the time to explore the mind of Rarity. If a story is written about a manipulative mind, the author should make sure the audience can understand the manipulator. Many authors don't do this; thank you for taking the time to do this.
Wonderful chapter darling, ciao
Darling that sad tag really came through in this chapter. Disappointing Pinkie to the point she gives up breaks my heart just to think about it. I have to agree with Rarity, after that she couldn't go back. Destroying Pinkie is truly world-altering
Wonderful chapter sir or madam; ciao
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Thanks. I find sorrow is the hardest emotion to actually capture so that means a lot. Humor is subjective, and all you need for Dark and creepy stories is a proper grasp of how to create and abuse imagery in a way that brings out the psychological torture of the characters involved, but heart-moving sadness is next to impossible to do right. It takes a certain kind of talent that I'm not normally able to get in touch with very well.
I feel like crying.
Rarity's commiting suicide!
But your story really makes me think.
Rarity set out to make the world a better place. Her heart was in the right place. The problem comes when we examine her methods. She destroyed her friends, killed the deity-queen, and many of the nobility. She can't atone for what she has done; she can do as much good as she can by following through with her plan. I believe she has the common pony reaction correct and the world will be a better place when she is gone.
That's my two cents in the matter darling, wonderful chapter as always. Keep up the good work, ciao
Glad I could help keep you motivated in my small way. The story has been superb, the ending feels complete and the final scene felt natural. You have created a wonderful story which is wonderfully different in many ways than what is normally found on this site. You have succeeded darling
Nicely done. I found myself constantly waiting for the next chapter. the ending flowed naturally so thank you for that. I always find it refreshing when I get to read a good ending to a story.
Impossible... a story that made me appreciate Rarity more than Twilight Sparkle. Do go on.