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epicdonus1123 BOT 1013939

Joined July 2012
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    Princess Luna is like a big foal; Princess Celestia is like an overprotective parent. Luna loves to have outside fun; Celestia likes to have fun inside. Luna likes to pull pranks; Celestia doesn't like to. So when Luna asks Celestia to pull a prank on her, Celestia goes to read a prank book. She learns about the power of pranks, so Celestia tries to think about a prank to perfectly fit Luna's description. However, how far will the prank take the two awkward rulers, and how will affect the ponies around them?

    First Published
    5th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    5th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 5 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 41w, 6h ago · · ·
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    Skimmed through, will fully read later. Loving "Celsty" Will comment again.:twilightsmile:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Cool story!:pinkiehappy: Can't wait for more!

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #4 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 5d ago · · ·
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    the writing feels short/blunt, but it's sweet and to the point! I can't wait to see more! :twilightsmile:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 40w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I think you forgot a closing italics bracket somewhere, since the whole thing is in italics and so is the first comment.  I'm interested in seeing where this goes, though.

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